#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 48

Originally posted by: crazysky

its exam season in india khushi

Originally posted by: lil_devil_himu

Res

Unres

Awesome update

Loved it

Kriyaansh😭

Swaron😭

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update :)

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Beautifully penned👏

And yeah..the song was so apt for the situation..it really blended well with the thoughts and ideologies of the four individuals.

Pls update soon😃

Originally posted by: d3lover90

Loved it..
U r a great writer
this story is far better thn d3..
Update soon :D

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was awesome loved it
brilliant

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

loved it..
i'm speechless..
wonderfully described the pain and desire they all have for each other...

i just loved the way used lyrics of song...
it is just beautiful!!!
and the things which kriya gave to rey they have gr8 significance...

thanks for pm..
update soon...

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

i can read the first part as million times as possible especially the memories part and rey's reaction to it... awww..

sau dard hai tera fav gaana hai????? nai toh... I was just looking at my playlist to see what song to listen to while typing and this just seemed so apt.

haan so it was beautifully described...

just loved it totally... thank you!!

so pure it was...

but i do have a question... rey don't wanna think logically but i do...

so i wanted to ask... mask uske paas aaya kaisa????

did she climb up at his house??? ROFL! Of course not. let's pretend she sees it once in Rey's bag 😆 Logical mat jaa na re.

shivam ki party ke baad ke samay jacket diya toh uska kya huya??? Voh toh wapis nai de diya tha? 🤔

main subah se hi 10-15 baar padh chuki hun...

totally loved it...