ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

@angeldream. THANKS dear

@anna:

lol, I'm used to say Ji at home so...

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: selcouth-names
I love you for this part ! I always wanted to know what's in his mind. I'm really really happy from the core that you liked his POV...It wasn't easy to think from a male POV but I'm glad to know that I succeed😳
And i got it .

He killed the kid? Sucker !Yes😳

Anyways, i hope all the sexual tension lead up to something hot Haha...will do my better next time😛

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik
What sort of insaan is this ASR?! :O Did he have a bad childhood or something? he has so much hatred in his heart! I wouldn't even believe if one day he says he is in love! Poor Kushi! All this for nothing?! :/

Varshuuu...I think we need to a talk in private😆Seriously, girl...you know me very well, 😡😆😆

What we're today, depends on what happened to us in our past, in our childhood...you can change city, nation, your name, your friends...but one thing that u will be able to change is your PAST😉.

That's all I can say to you...

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harshika999

@harshika999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

awesome update yaar!!!!eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!😊

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

@russelkhushi:

hmmm...Khushi hasn't been smart enough but a deal is a deal..but don't worry, ASR will pay for this XD

@Anastasia:

thanks for liking this chappy and yes, happened more than a kiss between them HAHA

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: .Dulcet
gosh i just read the whole ff in one go di, cause i had now 2 hours free time in school.. i have no idea how i will put this all in words :D

U managed to read alll the upd...OMG, Shilpiii I love youuu and take your time n your inspiration to comment ji😳

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

@kareeena@criclenz: thanks a lot for liking it ji...will continue soon

@kritika:

sure, will PM u...add the ID DugguEdwardKMH :)

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

@vaishi: thanks a lot dear

@taani: thanks for liking his POV...means a ton for me XD

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: siva2901
Omg day by day I am getting Impressed in your writing style ji Thanks a lot jiii,...I'm really really glad to know this

Brilliant update

loved it

Asr monologue is Awesome & beautifully written 👏👏👏 Once again, gracias😉

A big hug to you 🤗hope u take it 😉😛hihi, thnkuuu for the hug

ASR is not Saint to keep its words😆he has a dark side, remember this

Love this ASR😳😳

Continue soon ji I got that u used 2 JI in the comment ji😆😆...will continue soon Siva

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi
Awesome update ..! Im Late coz had school to go lolz !
don't worry buddy...

Really loved the update ! thanks a lot for liking it

I love this evil Raizada ! I was sure that u will like this ASR 😉Still, poor Khushi !

Can't wait for their wedding ! hAYEEE,ArHi wedding😆