Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW...i thought u forgot this ff totally after ur woh pehle baar stint!! lol
anyways, this was awesome...i liked Riya's attitude...i actually love the attitude waali Riya to the ever soft one...

that pink, blue comedy was so cute...cool!!!!

then the case is getting interesting as it moves...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Purva,

Well, well, this is getting exciting with a vengeance! I also see that you are maintaining the conventions of a first person narrative faithfully till now, which is very good. However, I find it difficult to believe that a girl from such an opulent background would actually fall for Chotu as he is shown in the serial. But perhaps love is blind after all!

Shyamala Aunty.

Originally posted by: tani23

Thanks to ever 1 for d super amazing comments...



~~~CHAPTER 10 ~~~


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Posted: 12 years ago
omg poor rathor! tomato ki tara lal hogeya!!!!🤣🤣
wow wonderful update!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Dear Purva,

Well, well, this is getting exciting with a vengeance! I also see that you are maintaining the conventions of a first person narrative faithfully till now, which is very good. However, I find it difficult to believe that a girl from such an opulent background would actually fall for Chotu as he is shown in the serial. But perhaps love is blind after all!

Shyamala Aunty.


Thanks for liking it ...n i will try to maintain d first person narration further also ...sumtimes it is actually difficult to write from sum1 else's POV
@Bold: i wud say luv is deaf n dumb also😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey that was so cute update...

loved so many things in the update...all the small details you wrote...
specially the one on rathore...Lipstick mark on his cheek..OMG..i was blushing while reading that part...

arjun instant saying she is looking good in blue...LOL...he must be so embarrassed...

he knows about shree and sharmishta...what a possessive brother he is??

Loved the update...it was really very cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update di..!! like d shramista teasing arjun.! arjun warn shree for shramista..!! whos d shooter waiting to knw..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :) continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow its just superb
the case is really getting serious
liked sharmishta's plan
hope riya ignore's arjun then he will realize her love
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... loved the way Riya back answered Arjun...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update :)
eagerly waiting to know who is the shooter
riya's dialogue "not interested in becoming your biwi" was hilarious :)
continue soon

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