Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee
ariya 😳.. but arjun is going with her only becoz of sikander 😭

thanks fr d precious comment

Arjun is going to kill sikander n also on dat mission to protect Amrita

He has no problem wid ria...because at present his priority is to get Sikander n make him pay for his deeds...but yes...

as He already has feelings for her...so he will try to protect her from sikander as well

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Huh! Now u're behaving like typical writers... Cliff Hangers... Why god why?? Sorry, i am less exprienced in melodrama section. Why Tani why?(placing my right arm on my forehead) Kyun itna anyay hamare saath... We nunhe-munne readers..!!
Bass hogaya!!🤣
Oh! Why the hell Rhea told everything to Archu??
And, Arjun did he has no feelings for her... He accompanied her only to get hold of Sikander... N vineet is sikander.. That means he is a police turned gangster...!!
Waiting for the dreadful night's description...!!
Actually I can't wait..!! So, update asap..!! Take care..!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

purva trp high karne k liye aisa cliffhanger omg
update was just wow dear loved it very much swthrt
continue soon n thanks for pm
sorry for commenting late

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Superb. Cannot wait for the next chapter. wonder if Sikanader will harm Riya by any chance.

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

@Shuchi : U r a nanha munna reader ...awww...Dis ria revealing thing was not initially in my mind...yeh to bas write karte tym idea aa gaya ..n i added...

Next part wud have dreadful nite description...

@Samiya: Added Nanha sa teist in d story ..Thanks for reading n for d precious comment

@Jenny :

Thanks for d idea ..Sikander harming ria ...wud b nice plot😆...

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Shru

@funkylicious

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Honestly I read the 1st five Chapters... sixth start kiya tha but it was little bit emotional..sorry yaar I'm too sensitive in these matter shayad tabhi I was very emotional isliye couldnt continue it then but jaldi aage read karungi.. but I'm sure tu happy hongi that I read something right😉

I feel like a VIP sab ke FF/SS's pe late comment karne ki aadat ho rhi h shayad🤣

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Okay first of all purvu... I love the start I mean everything through Shree's eyes!!! hayeee😳 I love Shree in show just after Arjun so definitely love the concept...

The way you started from the day Shree joined ETF... till Riya enters instead of Roshni...

I loved Arjun-Roshni jodi hayeee akdu bhi romantic ho sakta hai and the prank by Sharmishta...

Shree-Sharmishta jodi is awesome..

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Love it yaar awesome blossom hai...I know meri itni tareefee wont be enough.. But yaar mujhse honestly batau I dont know how to do tareef😔 sorry... but dil se keh rhi hu I love the way u executed everything I just love the diary format..👏.it touches my heart... nothing is in present everything is in the Diary...😃😳

Continue sooon well I should say I should continue readng this soon... jst didnt wanna delay my comments any more!!! nahi toh mujhe hi bura lagta😆 Emotional hu na🤣

👏👏👏👏👏👏 Loved it... muaaah🤗

PS sorry for the short reply🤣

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

@Shru : first of all Thank u for d amazing n "Chotu " comment

U loved Shree;s POV ..aww thanks dear

actually initially i was confused whether to write t wid SHree's POV or from Arjun's ...

but i guess writing from Shree's POV was a nice decision ..bec i can add fun elements more to the story

U like ArNi n shree-sharmishtha ...THANK U 🤗

Keep on readin n keep on giving d Extra Precious comment

Will wait for u to read more

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neelima

@purecure

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Ok dear as i said i was busy wid exams n den dis colg thongy...bt yea i love ur ss dats y will read it now ol other parts whixh i havent...so will b commentinf on each part ol tegether...

Sry for late comment on ol...!!!