CGM SS: Because...The Cocoanut Heart was Undefined

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coolpavni

@coolpavni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Hello rumpu... 😊 first of all sorry for the delay..i'm damn busy wid many things..no time to even surf the net..😔

okk...now coming to ur ff...i just loved the update & its fabulous...!! 👏 superb writing & chandu's emotions are very well described...😃 bt id rather like to read mihika - shanky story than chandrika.. 😉

now, thoda sa criticism.. Try to use textual hindi in their dialogues as much as possible..u hav used colloquial hindi in many places like pyar , koshis n all..if u use textual lang. it'd give more elegance to ur writing...😊

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

wah......mujhe meri saaare reader ki views mil gayi...👍🏼...now I'll continue⭐️...bt blood-relation ki baare me soch ni padegi🤓

pavni,

thanks for ur advice.😛...surely I'll follow it.😊...but m a hair-to-nail Bengali...so hindi stock of words...vry limited.😭

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

hii dear wow loved ur SS.

ur a fab. writer.

tfd pm.

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: surprising
wah......mujhe meri saaare reader ki views mil gayi...👍🏼...now I'll continue⭐️...bt blood-relation ki baare me soch ni padegi🤓

pavni,

thanks for ur advice.😛...surely I'll follow it.😊...but m a hair-to-nail Bengali...so hindi stock of words...vry limited.😭

In That Case, What U Can Do Is Go To Youtube, And Watch The Mythological Shows, They Often Help A Lot...Even I Learnt Hindi Like That... And Now I Can Correct Small (Not Big) Errors...

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

In That Case, What U Can Do Is Go To Youtube, And Watch The Mythological Shows, They Often Help A Lot...Even I Learnt Hindi Like That... And Now I Can Correct Small (Not Big) Errors...

kokli dear, thanks fr suggestion.😊
bt I think pavni don't tell abt mistakes...she wants perfection...I'll try at my level best.
& my hindi teacher is arudi😃...actually her ff Ehasaas...really good hindi.⭐️

Thesaurus:
thanks a lot dear friend.⭐️

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A for Arpita

@A_for_Arpita

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Yeh wala na? Ok Will start reading 4m tom ush k baad comment :-P

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan
Yeh wala na? Ok Will start reading 4m tom ush k baad comment :-P

okk...as u wish Arpi😃

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

read all parts till now
its intresting
upd soon :)

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

are...are...are...maine notice hi nehi ki- meri busy reader ko bhi time mil gayi⭐️...got her com😛...ab to upd karni hi padegi😃...bt m a bit disturbed due to my friend's absence...so plzzz wait a little bit more.

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago