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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
M so sorry fr d late comment !!

I personally loved d start.. aftr all it started wid REYAANSH.. he was dancin..tht too on dil de re...
dis song always sends me to "Kriyaansh dreamland"

his every incomplete step... SHE completed it!! lovd dis particular line..

hoh.. saw d new face of Reyaansh thru ur ss.. he seems to b all proudy,egoistic,arrogant,mean n all!
whts kriya's mistake,, if his parents found her d best fr thr son.. huh..

d way he behavd wid kriya.. I ws feelin lik maaring him

awww.. Kriya does loves Reyaansh a lot!
Fr him.. She's trying to change herself! Reyaansh.. cnt u c dis...

kriya.. agn a selfless gal! she chose her dance ovr her studies..she dint want her father to pay fr her eng medium school fees.. thus she decided to mk dance hr evrythn.. n she succeeded!

wonder.. whts gonna happen nxt!!

Entirely new n diff concept.. Lookin forward to it..😊

i guess.. DANCE wud bring dem close!!

update soon.. M waitin!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
PART-2


umm...acha ab dhaato mat mujhe...frankly speaking mai abhiwildcat likhne wali thi... uski song and dil se we adjacent in list...mai wildcat ki saari pics etc collect kar rahi thi and thus by fate dil se played and as usual rehmaan imprisoned me...so isika update deneka man kiya so giving hope no probs for u ppl... DIL SE RE is the core and only reason for this concept ...thanks rehmaan!!!!!! so finally jumping into update...


asrey finished his meeting rey's dad came down...

vijay: rey...free???

rey: yup dad...

vijay: so garden mei chalo have to talk...

rey: yeah...

he was following his dad when vijay stopped and called kriya *waise rey's parents dnt have problem with kria wearing western and all*
vijay: kria ...

she came runnign from kitchen..

k: haan papa???

vijay: beta do cup chai???

k: aap chaliye mai abhi laati hun...

he nodded and left followed by rey...

he settled in the and spoke...

v: rey yaad haina after one week u will be leaving for US??

r: yeah dad...wo bhi...

he stopped getting irritated...

v: rey..i know wo teri pasand ki bilkul nahi hai but give her a chance...she is not bad...may be wo tujhe pasand aaye...and.

he stopped seeing kriya...rey was silently listening not wanting to be rude with his dad

after kriya left he spoke...

v: dekho rey...i dnt know tum isse kaise loge...request order.i really dnt care but meri baat dhyaan se suno...ur not gng to a neighbour city...US jaa rahe ho... with ur wife...wo bohut maasoom hai...uska dhyaan sab tujhe rakhna padega...i dnt know tu kya karega but agar use koi bhi problem ya kuch bhi ho then remember my reaction will be very serious and fault kisika bhi ho i will blame u...u have to face me then...mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...apni married life settle karne ki koshish karo and uski dhyaan rakho...im repeating agar use kuch bhi hua then i wont spare u...u have to answer me kk... and ye mat socho ki tab se sirf uski dhyaan rakhne ki baare mei baat kar raha hoon...its just becoz teresaath wo hai teri dhyaan rakhne keliye...use wife ki tarah dekhna shuru karo...and haa waha job kar rahe ho... mai waha ki house rent doonga bas...baaki sab tu apni salary se karega... kriya ki saari responsibility teri...i wont give any financial help ...tumlogon keliye maine ghar rent pe liya hai high rate pe so bas wo rent mai pay karne wala hun...and yaha se jaane ki paise mai dekhleta hun...once u step there everything ...ghar chalana sab teri responsibility...kitna bhi mushkil mei ho mai tujhe financial help nahi doonga...and haa waha ye parties sab kam karo... responsibilities handle karna choti baat nahi...and last but not least ...tumhara aur uska donon ka dhyaan rakhna...koi emergency ho toh i will be a call away and agar koi bhi tension ya problem bhi ho dnt forget ur dad is there kk...ab andar jaake ke kriya ko bulake aao...

rey turned back and called a servant...

v: maine tumhe bola bulane ko...go and bring her along with u...

rey sighed...he left annoyed and went to kitchen...as he entered the kitchen he saw her roaming here and there hyperly asking kaka to give her this and that...

r: hey ...

that one was enough for her to stop and look back

r: dad bula rahe hai...chalo...

she saw at the curry cooking on the stove and at him..

r: now what???

k: vo sabji...

r: tumhe baat samaj nahi aati..use dekhne keliye cooks hai now move out...

kriya nodded slightly feared and hurt too...she quickly washed her hands and walked back with him...and sat with vijay...

v: beta dekho...jahan tum log rehte ho waha tumlogon ki neighbour Indian hi hai,,,,...maine sab already dekhliya...so dnt fear...waha adjust honeki koshish karna...and haa rey ka dhyaan rakhna ...kaam mei khud ko bhool jata hai...kk..uski poori responsibility teri...

k: ji papa...

v: kk now go...

rey looked up

bas itni si baat keliye mujhe ise bulane keliye bola??? dad!!!!!!!

rey went in to his room ...

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2 days before leaving..at night...

rey was working on his lap sitting on the couch when kriya hesitanty came and stood before him...

rey after few mins noticed her

r: what/???

k: wo...*cleared throat* wo aapki kapde pack karni hai...aap thoda aake denglenge ki kya pack karna hai toh...

r: ahh...kk chalo...he said and kept his lappy aside and went to wardrobe leaving her stunned...he casually spoke to her??????/

r: khade khade kya dekh rahi ho???pack nahi karni???

he asked normally AGAIN!!!!!!

she nodded and went...for sure he is in a happy mood...y not..just a few secs back het got the news that his friends had arranged a party next day...

kriya nodded and went there ...she packed as he handed her his clothes...she stood up and went to pull that big trolley over the wardrobe...she went on her toes to pull it ...no...then she stood almost on figers and pulled that heavy bag but ...phew...she never saw it is opened... and pulled it...it contained some old clothes etc which directly ended on her head making her fall off the balance and end up stiing wtih clothes all over her...she as always in hurry and fear that he may get angry she pulled but making it worst and thus got trapped inside the clothes and to add more effect a small handkey was left on her head and after getting totally she struck and sighed looking down...but in next second her head shot up...he was laughing...nah rofling seeing her...he sat beside the bed and was laughing hard looking at her...looking at her it reminded or he imagined her like she was sitting helpless and a chick on her head in place of that cloth...she was mesmerised seeing him laugh...actually it was the first tym she was actually seeing him laugh this close...she tried to come out but was failed again...

r: h...umm...uhh...w..wait...haha...wait...i ...i wil...haha...

he walked to her and kneeled before her...dnt know y he for second was laughing heartily...he looked at her and controlld his laugh again and lifted the cloth on her head...

r: nice one...haha...he saw the hankey and throwed and made her come out of it...he felt nothig..but the slight touch of his finger tips made it all in her...she literally started shivering...

finally he rmovd everything and stood up...

r: do it fast ...mujhe nendh aarahi hai...

she nodded and quickened the work...rey was packing now as he said and she brought clothes...he asked her to bring some suits ...she found all but failed to find one ...she was searching ...rey twice asked whether she got...finally seeing that she is not getting he stood back of her and started checking... that means now she is in b/w his arms and her back towards him...he leaned in forward to search the inner row of the wardrobe...

as his hot breath touched her cheek she shivered...her breathing rate increased...she somehow maintained herself and stood...finally he found it..
r: got it...he said and moved back...kriya turned swiftly to leave when rey leaned again to take the matching tie...thus resulting in his lips brushing hers as soon as their lips touched they froze...the chilled air made its magic melting him slowly... she wa abt to move back when he unconsiously started to kiss her...she breathed hard and clutched his collar tight...he was abt to make his way into her mouth when he gained sense...he flinched back...he ruffled his hair and turned around sayin...

r: baaki kal pack karlena ya ma kardoonga...

saying so he went to bed and slowly slept of...leaving a shocked ...uneven breathed kriya just to think abt what happened just a few mins back...


okay isse jyaada nahi deti...now enjoy!!!!!!!!!

like and comment plzz...

enjoy...

love

deetha



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah.. I jus got over wid commentin on d first part n here is d second... lucky me!

I again loved it... kriyaansh lil lil moments.. 😊
dat wardrobe scene..wea kriya was btwn Reyaansh's arms.. haaye.. i cud picturise it all...

omg..they almost kissed!
Reyansh started plantin kisses on kriya.. bt.. aghhh... Realisation struckd him.. aghhh.. fr d first time..m hatin dis word "realisation"

i think..Reyaansh's dad is doin all dis purposely so as to made him realise d value of money o rathr to mk him face d truth tht how much it tks jus to earn some money...!! Probably..dis is y.. he's only payin d rent.. n rest..he wud hav to do on his own.. probably..thr he wud realise.. tht middle class hona koi low grade baat nhi h.. Reyansh.. he's a pampered child.. now he wud get to know wht actually earnin money all by urself is... this might help in bringin Reyansh closer to kriya!!

somethn has alrdy started..bt thrs lot more to come...😊

m lookin forward to it!
umm..wht on lappy made kriya stunned... umm.. I hope..Reyaansh ka koi affair n all nhi h..haha

waitin fr d nxt part.. update soon..
n agr time lgne vala h toh plz ek br aur "Dil se re" sun lo..😆😆

amazin update..m lovin how u takin dis story forward!
Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
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ahhh!!!! atlast mjhe tym mila
kbhi ni socha tha accounts itna tym lega bt xams mai kch b ho skta h

soo coming to update
hmmm sachi bolu i dnt lyked it much...mjhe thoda sa thanda lga
noo as in i dnt wnt dat physical contact bt still pta ni kch missing sa laga jo tere updates mai hota h

sorry bt kya kru...teko pta h na mjhe tere DEETHA STYLE ki adat ho gyi h

bt still kch kch moment cute lge lyk da way he said "hey" n den his laugh aww i m imagining him

n shoolllyyy *kaan pakad kar*
Edited by shaffy_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
unaaa mera first place chala gaya ab to mai morning mai hi comment krungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
hawww i want wildcat

mai vaishu ko bolungi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

hehe its ok i m just kidding :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

u mean siffu di????😲


haila...!!!

n i never new it...!!!!

omg...!!!


haila!! mjhe koi shiffu bhi bulata h mjhe to pta b ni tha

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

to padho na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha


hehe its ok i m just kidding :D



ooopsss😳

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