SWARON SS MY LOVE WILL KEEP YOU ALIVE!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

This is simply magical work...it has been a pleasure reading it and associating with all the characters...each one from Swayam, Sharon, Rey and the daughter of Shareyam...as Sharon beautifully put it Swayam may b the cause of her birth but Rey is her father...really luking up to the next part pretty soon

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Trushna

@swaronland

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Just read both parts & it was pleasure to read ur work

eagerly waiting for next part

update soon & thanks for pm

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

This piece pulls the strings of my heart. Swayam is dead, Sharon is alone though with Rey, but still she hallucinates about Swayam. I'm short of words, dunno what will be in the next updates.

Sorry for keeping the comment short, but this is painful yet beautiful😭

Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

I cried reading the last part. Swayam's dead? :( :( :( :( :(
Update soon.

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

no res for me...nehal u r so dead!!!😡

coming the update ...what was that...
i mean hv i actually read an update or watched it!!!
it was so awesomely written...sharons pain...her guilt...her emptiness...

everything was so beautifully penned... And rey...srry to say but i loved him in this ss...its impossible to love and care a person who doesn't love you...
last few line were heart wrenching...swayum died...sharon lost her love..he life...and rey...he left alone with the responsibility... of taking care of his best friends love...

loved it update soon...
himani..

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago

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Mahirah

@Mahirah

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Eeepppss kya update tha ?!?!?!👏👏

Swayam is dead 🥺 but is still very much alive and is still with her princess 😳 that is soo SwaRon😳😳

The update was painful yet perfectly penned 👏👏

Nehal and Deep M soo proud of you girlss😃😃

the way you described SwaRon's story and Rey's love for sharon was soo amazing :')

cant wait to read more :'D

update soon 😉

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Lovely update deeps and nehu, well done!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aaliya

@LethallyFloral

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Amazing update, thanks for the PM (:

Update soon xoxo

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

oh!gosh!you guys are unbelievable!!👏⭐️
yuo guys really have surprised me there.by making ShaRey happen!! 😲
damn innovative concept!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
🤗 love you guys yaar!!
in the start,the confusion was still on...😆when finally you'll broke up by saying rey you're only her father!!n i am like this!😲
brilliant job guys!was what i told!
the best part was the hallucination!!😳OMG!!the way it was written OMG!!❤️
lovely.i know though swayam will always be Sharon's!but this statement... *sigh*
She will always be known as Tanya Rey Singhania Always.
the blue part was toh beyond my words and emotions...
coz literally i was crying by the time it had got over.ehehe i know i cry a lot! 😆but the way it was written..and how it was connected to the 1st one OMG!!and i really couldn't beleive swayam said that and how he placed HER hand on rey's 😭 n the way he rey assured to him!! ❤️ ReYam... ooh!gosh!!
love and hate this update!!
wooohoo this SS is really really awesome... n the way it's got this title OMG!!oh!god!itni badi demand kyun dete ho!!
deeps di and nehal you guys rock!!👏⭐️

Edited by Satluvsd3 - 12 years ago