SWARON SS MY LOVE WILL KEEP YOU ALIVE!! - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
it was soo beautiful.. i could feel dat person's feeling.. felt like crying reading n knwing dat sum people lyk dis also exist..
itzz truely beautiful...


Girls dad... : yes i do a loT but every heart beats for a single person...feels special only in its presence ... My heart beats for your mom and her for him.

dis lines did hurt..!! reminded me of sum1..!! continue soon plz ur demand is aso met..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
I just read the introduction and the first chapter and I love it !! I sort of have an idea who is who in this story but I'll keep it to myself for now !! Can't wait to see how SwaRon's love story shapes up in this SS !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
oooh confusion
totally a nice update

update sooon


p.s demand has been completed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
updateee ur demand has been completed!;),
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
now ur demand is also over...u need to update ASAP!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
oh!so here comes the 1st update!😊
wooww amazing stuff.👏yes it was confusing so am badly waiting 4 the update to clear some said things!!!this update was wonderful. i mean how the dad wanted his daughter to know about love about his mom's forever love!... and that too on her engagement ...what a wonderful dad! ❤️

uptil now it's as lovely as the intro. waiting 4 the update.
you'll are doing a great job guys!!
keep writing!! ⭐️

i guess maybe someone was waiting for someone's comment to update!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update nehal and deepu di
i so wanna read further .
update the next part soon..
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Deeps and nehu an extra special jhappi for you both🤗🤗 I knew it, this FF is going to be a painful love story🥺🥺 I hate tragedies but the way you both write is like a magnet that pulls me to this FF😳 Deeps and nehal I am a fan your writings gals but is update mai na ek ajjeeb se kashish hai, that seede goes into your heart❤️ The pain is unbearable if it is swayam who is dead but then we can expect anything coz nehu has got an extra talent to give a twist to the updates, so unless you both wont reveal, i have decided not let my imagination run loose and go to a glum mood.😉😆 nehal ji aap tho bahuth zyada cliff hangers dete hai na, is baar be you have kept us guessing. Well dono ke liye 👏👏👏Btw madams jaldi update kariyo😡😉😆

NEHAL AND DEEPS YOU ARE SUPER AWESOME!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends...thanx a lot for liking the 1st chapter and our team effort...this is the 2nd chapter of this SS...hope you all will like it...



Chapter 2


She was standing near the huge staircase...instructing the workers about last minute decoration details...it was an important day of her life...the most important day of her life in fact...THEIR PRINCESS...THEIR DREAM..THEIR LITTLE ANGEL was going to get engaged today...she was restless... to make everything perfect...to fulfill all her dreams she saw for her angel ...



She looked around...everything looked so beautiful...decorated with white and lavender color flowers...as she wanted...people around her were looking so excited about the ceremony...but she felt an emptiness... in her heart...it was heart wrenching...painful...tears started forming in her angelic hazel eyes ...she closed her eyes to let the tears flow down her cheeks...expecting that it will lessen her pain...


I miss you...i miss you so much...she said ...her eyes were still closed...as if she was searching for someone in that darkness...

She opened her eyes...something caught her attention...in no time she found herself drowning in a pair of deep chocolate brown eyes...



He came close to her and put his palm on her face...she closed her eyes ...tears rolled down her cheeks...he caressed her cheeks...and gave her a smile...his hypnotizing smile...

You have grown old sharon...he said...caressing her hair...

So i dont look pretty now...right?...she inquired...her eyes were still moist but she smiled at his words...

He smiled ...cupped her face ...looked into her eyes...

You were...you are and you will be the most beautiful girl in this whole world...he said with a smile playing on his lips ...

Tears started forming in her green orbs again...

Do you regret loving me sharon??...he asked...wiping her tears...

No...i can't regret loving you..ever...u are the best thing happened to me...i cherish every moment i spent with you...those were the best moments of my life...being loved by you...those moments were heavenly...i still love you...its just that...she took a pause...

its just that ...u feel guilty...for HIM...right...he said...caressing her cheeks...looking at her ..lovingly...

she looked into his deep angelic eyes...he surely reads her like an open book...just like before...

Yeah..i feel guilty ...for HIM...he gave all his life for me ...his endless sacrifices...loved me with all the love in this world...i couldn't return anything...his love is incomplete...because of me...he poured all his love on me ...i couldn't return even a small drop of love...she said ...her guilt ...her pain was evident in her voice...her face...her eyes...

Shhh...dont cry...its not in our hand...we are mere toys in his hands...he makes us fall for someone and that person for someone else...we will be grateful to HIM...till eternity...for taking care of you and our angel...for being a wonderful father to her...

He took her in his embrace...they stood like that ...she was clueless about the time...

Sharon...someone called her from behind...

What are you doing here...standing alone ...lost in thoughts.. ??

She came out of her thoughts...she was hallucinating HIM...like always...she turned around and looked at her husband...the godly person...

Missing HIM??..he asked ...

she could see pain in his calm eyes...she was the reason behind that pain...for his incomplete love...

He walked upto her..engulfed her into a hug.

Sharon...where ever he is today he will be very happy today...dont cry and make him sad.

You know he could never see you crying...and today is his prin...he choked at his words.

Rey...Tanya is swayam's daughter. But you will always remain her Father. She will only be your princess...

You have all right on her... You are the best father, friend to her.

She will always be known as Tanya Rey Singhania Always.

Sharon spotted swayam again behind him assuring her a positive nod. She could imagine him every where...

Thank you Sharon.

Dont be Rey...now got get ready...Our daughter herself will take a great time to get ready...I don't want her father also to be late...

I am not going to handle all the guests alone...

Sharon...you are not ready yet.

I will just finish the final touches and come.

Rey stood in front of the mirror tying the knot of his tie...


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" Tring...Tring...

It was late night when the phone in the Singhania mansion rang... A sleepy rey picked up the call...and what he heard made him lose all control.

He quickly rushed to the hospital and found her best friend her love Sharon...sulked in a corner..teras running down her eyes.

He was beside her in no time.. he grabbed her by her shoulders and hugged her...

She broke down into sobs... Re...Rey... Swa...Swayam...and clutched his shirt.

Shhh! Stop crying Sharon...nothing will happen to him... nothing...

Re...Rey...we were celebrating today...we got the best news last week...and we were planning to announce our marriage...

Rey..do something rey pease...dont let him die...dont let him die...

Shhh! Sharon...shutup shutup...listen nothing will happen to him.

Suddenly she placed her hand on her stomach...and started getting restless in pain...

AaaH!..ouch...

Sharon what happened... Nurse,...

Nurse: Plz cal her down...she is stressing herself...the pain is not good for the baby...

Baby!!...

Yes! She is 3 months pregnant...she may lose the child if the pain continues..

No Rey!! Plz...do something I can't lose him,... nor our baby.

Sharon fainted because of the pain. Doctors gave her medicine and she was resting now.

Rey walked up inside the room where swayam was lying...

He raised a hand towards him...

Rey quickly grabbed his hand... shh! Swayam relax...everything will be fine.

No rey...i know...my...my..time has co...come..

Shutup swayam nothing will happen to you. You get that!

He grabbed his hands tighter...

You...Love...love her right! Swayam asked

Rey was shocked to hear this question from his mouth.

What are you saying swayam? He tried to hide the pain.

I know Rey...i have seen it in your eyes...love for her...Rey plz marry her!

What swayam...??? she loves you and only you...and you two will get back...nothing will happen to you.

No rey...plz...promise me...i know I wont survive...please Rey promise me...You will marry her...

She needs you know Rey...My baby needs you Rey...plz...promise me...I know you will love them both...your love will keep her alive rey... my baby needs a father ...i don't want the world to call names...My love and baby needs you...he choked and started sinking...

Pr...o...mi...se...me...rey...

I promise you swayam...i will love them both I will protect them from every danger...i will try to be the best father to her...i will give her everything...i promise...

Just then Sharon entered and was next to swayam...

He turned towards her...

Sharon...

She just broke down and kissed his hand...

Listen...promise me you will be strong...you will stay for our baby...you will giver her all love...you will stay happy...

She just nodded in between sobs...

He took her hand and placed in Rey's and slowly closed his eyes... giving the responsibility of the 2 persons he loved the most of his Best friend who will love them more than he does...


So how was it? good ...bad ... plzzz do comment... we will wait for your comments and feedback

NEXT UPDATE - PG-30 and after 45 likes 😊



Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG,reading swayam death was painful😭..i was crying all the way while reading it...nehu and deeps..i dont understand..that why on the earth you guys always comes up with something emotional..it was beautifully penned down...but i didn't wanted swayam to die at all😭🤢..no heart feeling it is just my opinion..as i m bit cranky after sneha exit..whenever i read swayam's n sharon's seperation..i don't feel good at all..
but it was beautiful!😊😊
Hope to work on it very very very soon with you both...getting restless!😊

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