SWARON SS MY LOVE WILL KEEP YOU ALIVE!!

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@Parvathi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

This part was just so damn beautiful. The pain in the man was so clearly brought out. How can someone even talk like this about the woman he married and the man she loved. The way he describes their love just makes my heart ache. Loving a person, who you know can never love you back has to be the most difficult thing ever. Seeing that person with someone else just shreds your heart into a million pieces that can never be put back together with the cracks. But still you are ready to stand their and watch them with a painful smile because all that matters to you is that , that person is happy, that his smile is still playing on his lips.

I am so gonna be in love with this story man.

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@rockstarriya_26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

*res* unres

ok now.. I loved the start... loved the bonding and pain... I have felt that pain so I can relate to it very well! You have described it beautifully...loved it... 👏

Edited by rockstarriya_26 - 12 years ago

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@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I loved the intro..though I see a tragedy coming in its way.still would like to read ...

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@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Awesome update guys..
i guess the girl is swaron's daughter and the guy is rey...😃
liked the father-daughter bond very much..😊
i am loving rey's character,how kind hearted he is to hold sharon's hand accept her and swayam's daughter as his..😃.
well i think this story will proceed from the past ..
again a wild guess..🤔
one doubt-is swayam dead?
n if yes..
mere swayam ko maar dia🥺
bt then how come it be a swaron ss.
oh god m so damn confused.😳.
i will go mad..
eagerly waiting for the next chappy.
page 16? Huh..
here i cum😈

Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago