SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: tash10
It's just pure luck that I fell on this 😆

Congrats on the new thread 🤗

Will get back to this soon 😳

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I had to read it now, else I will never read it 😆

OMG Khushi is a total sanka devi!! She actually thought Arnav was going to kill her?😲🤣🤣 I could imagine her reactions!!🤣

I loved the use of this expression 'jalebi gifted calorie' ❤️

And the accidental kiss on the palm!!☺️ Me likey!! Very much in fact!!☺️

I love how you stay true to the concept of the lemony smell and here Arnav was really close to that!!😳

The whole tyre changing part made me travel down the memory lane to the epi where this happened!! Thank you for this 🤗

Arnav's staring session was so cute 😳 He is falling for her more and more!!😃

Loving the pace of the SS! It gives such a realistic feel, letting both Arnav and Khushi actually realising their feelings. It's still a start for love to bloom, but Devi Maiyya is here na 😉

PS: My mood is also ruined by the rumours floating around!!🤔 But your update was fab 🤗 I just realised that my comment got a bit long 🤣🤣

Your comments always lift up my mood!! 🤗

And it is really great to know what you felt about my udpate .. coming from you, it means a lot! 😊

I am really happy that this update made you feel good! I am just trying to get you guys walk down the memory lane .. recreating the original moments .. 😊 those were the days ... *sigh*

The smell is the core concept of the story ..and I will keep it flowing. This smell is what will conclude the story.

Thank you so much reading! 🤗

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Viji

@-Viji-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Congrats on new thread di🥳

Farah di..Awesome one again🤗by reading the update...all i can say is missing the old IPK...😒

Only Khushi can hav such wierd thts of Arnav killing her lol...😆

Awww...Arnav standing and watching khushi...I can totally imagine that scene in my mind...

So aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai...All thanks to devi maiyaan...😆

And the day is nt over yet..Wow😉Wat Surprise do u and devi maiyaan have for us????😉

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

nice update. wonder what else is in store for them today.

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Great update..
The first stirrings of desire in Arnav..I didn't know changing a tyre could be so seductive..

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Haha..poor arnav had a hard time controling himself..thanx for lifting my mood after barun leaving fiasco..take care

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

amazin part

congo for new thread

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

awesome update...

congrats on d new thread.

thanks 4 d pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

congrats on your new thread
man was that funny or what her thinking he was gonna kill her
god does she come up with the weirdest things or what naa
and dude you dont know how to change a tyre wow
and you didnt almost didnt let her do it either
god dm is having so much fun with the two of them right

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

congrats on your new thread
aha both of them dont realise what the other is thinking=]

wonder whats going to happen in the day

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

sorry sorry but i have to res this, you will know my opinion by tomorrow nigth promice 😃

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wow, really really wonderful, update superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

Loved it too too much!!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Khushi is just Khushi, how can she think that Arnav had hired someone to kill her, yes, she has a unique mind, only her can think something like that. But the moment was lovely, Arnav was thinking that she kissed his palm, 😲 what he said "bloody hormones" 🤣

the great ARS who can control evrything but he isn't able to control his own hormones. Poor Arnav, this is love stupid, yes mixed with lot of desire.

The best best part was Davy Maya's sentence when Arnav said that Khushi was indeed crazy and naive.

"Oh yes," Devi Maiya rolled her eyes in amusement, "Only if they knew what the other was thinking!"🤣 🤣 yes, Davi Maya is always rigth. They would change immediately their idea if they knew what they feel for each other.

Khushi changing the tire was a lovely and cute scene, but most interesting thing was that Arnav was mesmerised to look at her.

And I know something interesting is going to happen in the next chapter as Devi Maya says that the day is not yet finishedm and then even the romentic moments

Can't wait to read the next part, update as soon as possible.

Thanks a lot for the pm, and for this amazing update

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago