SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) - Page 65

Originally posted by: swat.g

Goshhh this chapter is BLOODY BRILLIANT ❤️ GOSH i am just in love with this story..more n more each day!!! First the tear from khushis eye coz of asr's indifference...n then lol khushi taking male models measurements...gosh loved the way arnav reacted...his anger on poor maddy...awwesome n his jealousy..n his end wala pen scene...ufff m dhak dhaking here!!! ❤️ ur writing..n hugs

Originally posted by: sunny1111

awesome...i like the possessiveness of both A & K...
and the pen scene was...what shall i say..i have no words..totally unexpected 😳dear.. only u would do that...no really..i seriously like u.😃
but loved it, love the characters, love the way u picturise...brilliant ff 👏
update soon don't keep us waiting for long.

Originally posted by: sahada

Hahahaha CUTE!!!! Ths Ch took me back to the show's fiery, flirty, raabe ve'ey days of Arnav n Khushi- before the Shyam-Khushi terrace misunderstanding...

All smiles and grins update ❤️

Originally posted by: psarada

Loved the update. I am now feeling like DM in your story - Just wish both Arnav and Khushi open up and talk to each other and figure out what they are feeling for each other. It was lovely and the romance was subtle. Thanks for the pm Farah.

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Farah Darling

Abar... abar..abar... I get no PM for this update 😡. What The!!!

Anyways...I am way to happy with this update to be naraz with you over one silly PM re. Loved it. 😛

Yeh Mr. Raizada does funny things to Ms Gupta's knees eh? And Ms.Gupta continues to drive him crazy with antics & her smell. I cant help but remember the discussion about smells a few days back 😆.

Madhavanji ne kya Shyamu types cupid play kiya hai...Yayy!!!!👏

I know you are very busy having important discussions with your son 😉... but do update soon. And cheers for the MBA semester end girl.

Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Hi Farha, thank you for the pm and chapter. This was a great update & I had a huge smile plastered on my face throughout the chapter. Possessive & protective Arnav is a treat to read! Arnav is one confused dude and in the process he is confusing Khushi even more. 😆 Poor girl. *Haiye* You made me slip off to Rabba-Ve land. I'm totally loving this story! Oh and I hope all goes well for you, till then I'll patiently wait for the next chapter. :)

Originally posted by: kajulove

firstly thanks for this wonderfull uodate of saga rabba ve

and i have no words to describe u
u r super writer

Originally posted by: reshmimohan

😊 Oh ho!

I am chanting :

Update! UPdate! UPDate! UPDAte! UPDATe! UPDATE!

I am waiting and waiting and waiting..

Now I sound like a pest. I know.

But u see...I love this story!!!!😉

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

Here is the part one of my promise

These days I can't read anything which takes more than five minutes..I just tend to get bored in between..but your stories make me read again and again.This chapter of Three thousand and one hundred words appeared very small to me..I started missing Arnav & Khushi even before I reached the last para.

Girl..I think you deliver your best when you are busy...I have seen you giving wonderful updates whenever you have exams...Does it work as a stress buster? If that's the case I am surely expecting another update before 13^th...If not this SS / D4D..a OS will do for all of us...Deal? 😉

MBA exams, full time job, 4 year old kid..hmm..did you forget something or didn't say it? LOL..I will take this up offline...I know you already know what it is...😃

Now back to story..

Why did she not want to disappoint Arnav? I want to ask this question to Khushi..

I really liked the entire para from "meant something" till "meant nothing"..lovely para...She is thinking his reaction was nonchalant? Only if she knew what torture he is going through...haha..She is actually thinking he would be like that with Simran too? I want to tell her "Simran is not as strong as you Khushi..she almost fainted when he was behaving abnormally with her few hours back...yes...you are reading all wrong..."..

"What if"...? Sigh...Khushi's thoughts had to break exactly at that point..reminded me of her "Bas kar Khushi...kuch bhi.."

Madhavani Ji..This new character is awesome..he was smiling to himself..poor guy had no clue what was coming up...Is there is continuation to this character?

Akash's name is mentioned now...I didn't even realize that we don't have anyone in the story except the mention of La...amazing...10 chapters of pure Arnav and Khushi..haha..just at this moment I feel like going back and reading all the chapters again...

Ok...Now ASR...I read this line twice "Why they have to find someone for her"...just to be sure whether he said "someone" or "someone else"..hehe..."was she not happy in her life? "...What kind of question is that...so people get married when they are not happy with life..hai re nand kishore...

ASR did it again...in last chapterm he thought of going back to his "normal" routine and immediately thought of giving her lift...now he is thinking why he should be bothered with all this and the very next moment thinking about what she is doing with maddy

"He decided to leave for home. And before that, he wanted see how Khushi was gelling with the Designer team." One question here...does he want to see how she is gelling with the team or he just wanted to see her once before leaving or he would have given lift even if all the drama didn't happen...?

Totally loved this green eyed monster..His plan backfired..haha..I am so happy...

"I thought this would give her an idea" LOL...poor maddy..wrong selection of words? That too while talking to ASR..tch..tch...

Why is he convincing himself that he would have done the same thing if someone else was there in Khushi's place? Assigning Khushi to Maddy was a mistake..so what is his next move...?

Hey...where is "lets go home together" ?

His eyes are on road...but where is his mind?

"She looked up to see Arnav's face with tear-filled eyes but Arnav was not looking at her." He hurt her and he didn't react? 😭

"Khushi watched in amazement his handsome face showcasing a panorama of emotions. " He is hurting her and this girl is noticing his features and reading his expressions?

" Samjhi tum?" " Samjhe aap?" That's our Arnav and Khushi...love them...

He is assigning her to event team? Ok,..I am waiting..I think something big is coming up...

"He was only done venting out one part of the frustration. The rest, the biggest .. could be saved for later." Biggest frustration..? can't wait..

"Khushi could feel his fingers softly touching her forehead and then brush against her skin." Meant nothing soft touches again? 😉

"drowning in the whirlpool of steaming coffee in his eyes. " I told you..you are a dangerous friend...steaming coffee won't be same again... ☺️

"Khushi watched him walk away from him, get into his car and drive away after smirking at her one last time. "..hmm...he had his way at the end...he was near her when he wanted...he tried to keep her away when he wanted to...he again went down to see her when he wanted..he hurt her when he felt like...now he is ordering her to be there at cross roads.sigh...Why?

I have reached the end...but I could not answer your question 😭 I still dont know what is the clue...

Btw...is that long enough? 😉

Originally posted by: indi52

"Khushi could feel his fingers softly touching her forehead and then brush against her skin. What was he doing? She then felt his fingers moving slowly towards her left ear and his thumb dipped firmer as he stopped almost on her ear. What was he doing?? She felt his thumb then slowly going up, tucking her hair beyond her ear and pulling something out. What was he doing???"

farha, that was lovely. above, the bit i felt was exceedingly well writte, got straight into the feeling. what was he doing? punctuation building up the moment, 👏. i see you are going to be updating after a while. no prob, i'm waiting.

and all the best for your management studies.