SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) - Page 60

Amazing...amazing...i so love dis fic :)

👏 you brought back so many memories of show with this...I really loved it..all updates and please continue with flow that you are keeping...dont rush ..its perfectly fine... I cud imagine scenes being played..and I think both were very much in character...Arrogant ASR trying to let go off this feeling ..attraction but yet falling in more and more...and even craving for more and more...and then confused bubbly khushi trying to understand her dhak dhak..coz of rakshas...but deep down silently expecting him to treat her specially...😳..you are definately an Arshi fan..😊

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

Here is the part one of my promise

These days I can't read anything which takes more than five minutes..I just tend to get bored in between..but your stories make me read again and again.This chapter of Three thousand and one hundred words appeared very small to me..I started missing Arnav & Khushi even before I reached the last para.

Girl..I think you deliver your best when you are busy...I have seen you giving wonderful updates whenever you have exams...Does it work as a stress buster? If that's the case I am surely expecting another update before 13^th...If not this SS / D4D..a OS will do for all of us...Deal? 😉

MBA exams, full time job, 4 year old kid..hmm..did you forget something or didn't say it? LOL..I will take this up offline...I know you already know what it is...😃

Now back to story..

Why did she not want to disappoint Arnav? I want to ask this question to Khushi..

I really liked the entire para from "meant something" till "meant nothing"..lovely para...She is thinking his reaction was nonchalant? Only if she knew what torture he is going through...haha..She is actually thinking he would be like that with Simran too? I want to tell her "Simran is not as strong as you Khushi..she almost fainted when he was behaving abnormally with her few hours back...yes...you are reading all wrong..."..

"What if"...? Sigh...Khushi's thoughts had to break exactly at that point..reminded me of her "Bas kar Khushi...kuch bhi.."

Madhavani Ji..This new character is awesome..he was smiling to himself..poor guy had no clue what was coming up...Is there is continuation to this character?

Akash's name is mentioned now...I didn't even realize that we don't have anyone in the story except the mention of La...amazing...10 chapters of pure Arnav and Khushi..haha..just at this moment I feel like going back and reading all the chapters again...

Ok...Now ASR...I read this line twice "Why they have to find someone for her"...just to be sure whether he said "someone" or "someone else"..hehe..."was she not happy in her life? "...What kind of question is that...so people get married when they are not happy with life..hai re nand kishore...

ASR did it again...in last chapterm he thought of going back to his "normal" routine and immediately thought of giving her lift...now he is thinking why he should be bothered with all this and the very next moment thinking about what she is doing with maddy

"He decided to leave for home. And before that, he wanted see how Khushi was gelling with the Designer team." One question here...does he want to see how she is gelling with the team or he just wanted to see her once before leaving or he would have given lift even if all the drama didn't happen...?

Totally loved this green eyed monster..His plan backfired..haha..I am so happy...

"I thought this would give her an idea" LOL...poor maddy..wrong selection of words? That too while talking to ASR..tch..tch...

Why is he convincing himself that he would have done the same thing if someone else was there in Khushi's place? Assigning Khushi to Maddy was a mistake..so what is his next move...?

Hey...where is "lets go home together" ?

His eyes are on road...but where is his mind?

"She looked up to see Arnav's face with tear-filled eyes but Arnav was not looking at her." He hurt her and he didn't react? 😭

"Khushi watched in amazement his handsome face showcasing a panorama of emotions. " He is hurting her and this girl is noticing his features and reading his expressions?

" Samjhi tum?" " Samjhe aap?" That's our Arnav and Khushi...love them...

He is assigning her to event team? Ok,..I am waiting..I think something big is coming up...

"He was only done venting out one part of the frustration. The rest, the biggest .. could be saved for later." Biggest frustration..? can't wait..

"Khushi could feel his fingers softly touching her forehead and then brush against her skin." Meant nothing soft touches again? 😉

"drowning in the whirlpool of steaming coffee in his eyes. " I told you..you are a dangerous friend...steaming coffee won't be same again... ☺️

"Khushi watched him walk away from him, get into his car and drive away after smirking at her one last time. "..hmm...he had his way at the end...he was near her when he wanted...he tried to keep her away when he wanted to...he again went down to see her when he wanted..he hurt her when he felt like...now he is ordering her to be there at cross roads.sigh...Why?

I have reached the end...but I could not answer your question 😭 I still dont know what is the clue...

Btw...is that long enough? 😉

waah dear..you also counted words ...😲..I think farha ..she is your best reader...😉..but really liked this detailed comment ...😊

Found this now! This is hilarious! Love devi maiya *rofl*

Would have loved to see kushi "touching" all the male models. Would have been very hilarious if in her clumsiness n awkwardness, she had touched places where she shouldn't. And seeing Arnav's thunderous response.

amazing update. Jealous, possesive and confused ASR! me likey!

wah wah ji saga of rabba veee

awsm, read al in 1 go, must say i loved it. Ur sense of humor cracks me always.

W8ng for next update

This was beautiful farah, OMG I cannot tell u how eager I am to read ur updates. Ur style is simply beautiful. Thnks for the pm and pls update soon.