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Arshi143

@Arshi143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Superb! Very well described emotions! Hope he acts before its too late

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Dandelion

@nikita-nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

u wote so well abt her feelins...!

lvd it..plz updte d nxt part soon..!

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rimaema

@rimaema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

god I'm having tears in my eyes, 😭

you're a very good writer👏

pliz upload soon😊

I'm dying to know how arnav will react😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

the lines at the end of each update are perfectly apt and very moving, bringing out the essence of whatever you've written! kudos to you for coming up with such an emotional piece one can relate to... arnav seems so human, noticing his wife's pain and wanting to speak to her but constantly distracted by either her attempts at diversion or by sheetal! those shards of glass and blood spatters symbolise, at least to me, khushi's shattered and bleeding heart! I was in tears by the end of today's update and felt a pang in my heart... but through it all, I can't bring myself to blame arnav for all the pain... it was just a human, or male, failing!

really eager to see how you are going to resolve the issue

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wiwy

@wiwy

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Sorry for the blank post...was dumbfound

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trina2010

@trina2010

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Sunara why can't Arnav just throw away that brat and her mom from RM?
That witch has got into my nerves really.

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gauri

@GAURI29

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

very emotional dear...
i was on verge of crying while reading...

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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Always read your stories, you write beautifully. Still amazes me what brilliant writers we have on here and ipk cvs who are professionals say they have run out of ideas 😕

Edited by momb24 - 12 years ago