ArHi OS: Biting Dust*Reposted*

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Beautifully written and very emotional os

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Jaya Devi

@Aphrodite88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Oh my goodness awesome!!
Simply loved it!!
the way u tailored the dialogs to the scenes and depicted arnav's pain..
Too good!!
:-):-):-)

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janam

@janam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Wonderful. I had tears in my eyes while reading. Thanks a lot

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

very intense; but please give it an end. dont leave it to our imagination

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I m speechless. Just wanna say u made me cry 😭

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

This really brought me to tears, and ur right this WAS the IPKKND we knew

where the dialogues, scenes, each part held depth, importance, meaning, love, pain, and so much more

dialogues and scene where hard work, dedication, determination, excitement, and passion radiated from our screens

all this in comparisons to the non meaningful arguments we hear in the show today, really beautiful

I'm actually curious to know where each other dialogue is from xP 😆

ur hard work really shows in this OS, really awesome work!

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

That was amazing...loved it!!

I loved how you used the dialogues from the show...Arnav was regretting each and every bad thing he did to her...

Very well written...

thanks for the pm...

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

OMG!!! This is such an awesome masterpiece of writing from you!!

I could actually see everything happening in front of my eyes...from the train falling, to Arnav keeling in the temple an wailing...to all those IPK scenes flashing in my mind whenever I read those dialogues!!!

That is some brilliant imagery skills you have!!

Since you have left it unsure whether Arnav really died or Khushi was taken off the life support, I'm going to assume it was a happy ending ok?? That's the only thing I can tell myself in order to stop the waterworks from flowing!!

Brilliant writing, and thanks for the pm!!!