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binimoti

@binimoti

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This is heights of brilliancy👏

Awesome

Such a heart wrenching OS, still subtle and emotional, beautiful

The dialogues and their relation was fab

Great writing and I had a happr reading period love it

God bless you and you continue being a tremndously talented writer

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punyashree

@punya25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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Simply wonderful!! ⭐️

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Reswa!

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Zehra i dint even think that this OS would be a sad one :( I was not prepared for it at all.

And i cried like anything reading this!

It was beautifully written!

I can't believe that these beautiful dialogues were IPK's because nowadays whatever dialogues we are getting is Bullshit!

I can't take a sad ending :'( So i assume Khushi is gonna recover from coma.Arnav and Khushi lived happily ever after!

I just can't imagine them dying! No way!

And i have a doubt! Is this scene set on before marriage? Because the dialogues are very old ones.

So is it after he realizes his love for her?

Awesome one Girl! 👏

Edited by GayuArnav - 12 years ago

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Out of this world...Beautiful and brilliant...brought tears to my eyes...But you ended the story in such a way that we can yet hope for a new dawn for them...May be she recovers from the coma and Arnav fainted due to the extreme mental pressure he was undergoing...Hats off to you dear and Thanks for the PM

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Res-

Zehra, it was indeed ur 'Masterpiece'👏
U made me cry ,yaar😭
The dialogues were taking me to the golden days of IPKKND

I am believing that they r safe, sound , most importantly - Not Dead😊

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

😭😭

heart wrenching one dear

i cant help cry at the emotions display

the mud scene was the best

it was painful throughout

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Gazal..

@Gazal..

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Res-ing since 1996😆

Res !

Un-res :

I am speechless...It was fantastic👏...the comparison, Dialogues...everything was too good...!!!!❤️

This is the intensity that IPK is lacking these days..!!!!🤔

Love,

Gazal

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

YAY looking forward to reading it :) Please post it soon and please do post chapter 4 for A Jalebi-fied Tale :) Please Please Please

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

thinking thinking...is it a romance? an angst? eeep! i hope angst.lol

xxx

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Let me catch my breath
WOW
I know this is your story to tell but can we please have a happy ending.
Please please tell us that both are alive, he just fainted and she came out of coma...

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