OS : Feeling Khushi : Part 3 updated on Page 28

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I wish they d show this on the show. But no, they had to show that awesome-twosome crap.

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IPKWA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I've realized that the past episodes have been solely Khushi's POV and I really hope that what you have written would actually be Arnav's.

I absolutely loved it!

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sweetieangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Loved the part 1
Eagerly waiting for part 2

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

O thanks a looot for giving Arnav an actual brain and feeling.. Im waiting for this Arnav for so long now.. He needs to realise what hes doing to that poor soul.. I bet shes making jalebis at home

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laddoo598

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

You know what's eery? I was listening to Surili Ankhiyon Wali when I started reading this one and then got a pleasant surprise to see the song mentioned at the end. Very nicely written, loved Arnav's thought process..

Dadi ji ki kasam?? I don't like the sound of that. Please post the next part soon, aapko Rabba Vey ki kasam!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Post the next part soon pleaseee... This is too good!!!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Very well written! Waiting for part 2. 😊

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Loved ur story ur potrayed of arnav...!!! <3 Waiting 4 the next update.But looks like it'll take a while since aapne dadijji ki khasam kayi.😃

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newmoon2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

excellent start
cant wait for the next part!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

a great beginning... at least this arnav seems to have noticed his wife's disappearance and, having added two and two together, realised something is bothering her! wow, his brain works! loved his irritation with sheetal... eagerly awaiting update!