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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Reserved. It's been so long I've read something from you! :(

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Loved it!
Plz update soon😊

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KaaminiJha

@KaaminiJha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Great work!

PM me when you update!

Please!

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

i thought we were having massage here 😆

never mind..may be in next update...

its an lovely OS...i am loving it...

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DaisyHoney

@DaisyHoney

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

when r u going to update the next part waiting eagerly😃

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Lovely1

@Lovely1

Voyager

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Sis,

Read all three parts in one go!
Awesome!👏

Kaash.. itni imaandaari deekhatein CVs..
But, what the heck - I enjoyed it right here from my Behna!

feeling a little low these days...😭

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deepterence

@deepterence

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

i'm hanging to the cliff yaar..pls update soon...nd make sheetal pay for her devious plan to make my angel cry...

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Just read this!

Awesome! Your writing is so beautiful, I could imagine each and every scene!

Thank you!

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lovesarunalways

@lovesarunalways

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

awesome story...😊

Please continue soon and PM me updates!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Hey...do you plan on continuing this, say just a couple or so chapters more just to bring it to its conclusion?

I really liked your SS, it was so much true to character and appropriate rather than the horrible 'awesome-2some' and 'cool college basketball days' track between Arnav & Sheetal on the serial.

I was flabbergasted how the CVs changed Arnav's back story from a tormented, melancholy and bitter soul into a "Yo Dude" type sporty college jock...it was fics like yours which helped me hold on at that point. 😊

Like you said, it really was mind boggling how the smart, calculating, analytical ASR had no clue how insecure his wife was becoming, about his bonding with his ex and her kid who looked like his clone! And furthermore, the creatives kept on showing Arnav indulging in super friendly banter and reminiscing with his ex, even after knowing that Khushi was having doubts on the extent of their past relationship!! Now why would any loving spouse do that?

This is the reason why your SS rings so much more true, as it sticks to the essence of the characters and doesn't fly off the handle into some weird parody 😊 So please, please do continue the SS and give your readers a good ending.

Cheers

Edited by RamnVij - 12 years ago