VirMan SS/Winds of Desire- 10th chap updated! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
felt very bad for manvi
but witing for virman wedding and post marriage love story...
thanks for the pm
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Rab ne bana di jodi
nyc movie
nyc staRT
do pm me plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Shruti :) *hugz* it's a beautiful but heartbreaking part.

Brilliant writing, especially on showing Manvi's overwhelming grief for the loss of the two most important people in her life. Beeji's bedside request and Manvi's promise was emotionally portrayed. Manvi's loneliness was heart-wrenching. I'm waiting to see Virat's reaction to this promise!

Wonderfully written <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Hey, firstly you should know I rarely read on IF cause a) I don't have time and b) yeah that's it.
I'm also a crappy comment giver, but I'll try.

You've really captured the emotions of Maanvi.
It was sad, but the fact that you made me feel her loss, well I became sad too.
It was written fantastically, kept me reading the after each full stop.
So I guess she's emotionally vulnerable right now, let's see how that turns out.
Can't wait to read next, I promise to improve my commenting skills, (will take time)
Take Care, Ava
:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
this was beautiful the way u portrayed manvi's emotion was amazing
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
oh so emotional
poor maanvi
but glad she will marry virat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
omg, that was beautiful! I just. I don't even know what to write. Keep up the good work and remember to PM me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Nice Update... Waiting 4 Virman to meet again 😊

Pls PM me when u update next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.

omg, that was beautiful! I just. I don't even know what to write. Keep up the good work and remember to PM me!


Thank you so much! Getting compliments from an ace writer feels nice😛!
Will defiantly PM you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: anu1989

Nice Update... Waiting 4 Virman to meet again 😊


Pls PM me when u update next...


Thanks a lot! Ermm..VirMan meeting, that would take some time
I surely will..

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