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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha1989

After reading the update I can only say that Virat's character here is very unpredictable... I think more than Manvi it's Virat whose life is messed up and he thinks that he could make everything fine by asking her to leave... I mean it's so realistic, when people are confused and are tangled with issues they kind think like how Virat does... I really need to know about Viren and Jeevika more here... My curiousness has gone to its peek... Please continue soon with a long update... 😳

Thank you for the wonderful and long update 😃

True that! Actually I wanted to show Virat as a confused soul kind of unpredictable in this SS, and I'm glad it worked. Aww..you've certainly caught the point that I wanted to show in this update..how couldn't you? You're the "beyond control" girl 😆.

Virika- yes it's coming! Thankyou fr the comment!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart

True that! Actually I wanted to show Virat as a confused soul kind of unpredictable in this SS, and I'm glad it worked. Aww..you've certainly caught the point that I wanted to show in this update..how couldn't you? You're the "beyond control" girl 😆.

Virika- yes it's coming! Thankyou fr the comment!



I can't believe that I'm actually liking it when you'll address me as the "Beyond Control" girl 😆
Will wait for your next update eagerly 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohk well umm i like this virat...his attitude <3...nd manvi lol poor gal had to bear virat but atlast they moved towards friendship...chalo dosti ki starting toh hui...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Shruti.. Just finished reading all the chapters.. Awesome story⭐️.. I loved it to the core.. It is really amazing.. You did a brilliant job dear.. I loved the concept very much.. You described each and every emotion beautifully👏.. The begining was quite emotional.. I was really feeling bad for Manvi... Her whole life turned upside down in an instant.. Her loneliness, her grief, everything is very well portrayed👏.. I loved that moment when she was leaving Hrishikesh.. her thoughts touched my heart.. Virat seemed to be an immature, confused and arrogant person.. Though I didnt like the way he treated Manvi at the begining.. But I cant blame him completely.. He was forced into this marriage.. He barely knew her.. But I really liked Manvi's positive attitude towards life.. She wants to give life a second chance.. She wants this marriage to work.. I loved the part where Virat opened up to her.. It was an emotional yet beautiful moment.. And now they are friends, I guess it is just the begining of a beautiful journey.. Virat is really an observant.. I guess girls like guys who pay attention to them😉.. I hope they will fall in love soon.. I liked Jeevika in this ff.. She is cool and fun-loving for a change 😆.. Im really eager to know whats gonna happen next.. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey !! Sorry for commenting late but the update was superb !!
Finally virat and manvi are friends ! great !!
But you know its quite rude of virat to tell manvi to move out of his life after all he knows she has no one . But anyways i love ur story. Thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superb like always
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved this update.Love this guy Virat.❤️This guy pays attention to even small things and he does those for her .❤️Wondering when he falls for her, how much loving and caring he would be as u said before.Loved this side of Virat😊. Now they are friends.Hope they get closer and he falls for her first .Usually i would want a girl falling for a guy first( a little weird I am😆😆), but here I want him to fall for her first 😊😊.Waiting eagerly for the next update.Thanks for the pm😊


Aw thanks! "This guy"..😆, shows how much you don't like the rude one. Sure everyone likes sweet and caring guy. HAHA a girl falling for a guy, isn't every story show. Let's see who takes the first step towards love. You're welcome!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Hey Shruti.. Just finished reading all the chapters.. Awesome story⭐️.. I loved it to the core.. It is really amazing.. You did a brilliant job dear.. I loved the concept very much.. You described each and every emotion beautifully👏.. The begining was quite emotional.. I was really feeling bad for Manvi... Her whole life turned upside down in an instant.. Her loneliness, her grief, everything is very well portrayed👏.. I loved that moment when she was leaving Hrishikesh.. her thoughts touched my heart.. Virat seemed to be an immature, confused and arrogant person.. Though I didnt like the way he treated Manvi at the begining.. But I cant blame him completely.. He was forced into this marriage.. He barely knew her.. But I really liked Manvi's positive attitude towards life.. She wants to give life a second chance.. She wants this marriage to work.. I loved the part where Virat opened up to her.. It was an emotional yet beautiful moment.. And now they are friends, I guess it is just the begining of a beautiful journey.. Virat is really an observant.. I guess girls like guys who pay attention to them😉.. I hope they will fall in love soon.. I liked Jeevika in this ff.. She is cool and fun-loving for a change 😆.. Im really eager to know whats gonna happen next.. Please continue soon.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊


Heya! Thanks for your kind words. You're too fast, I didn't really guess you'd be able to read it so fast! ⭐️ Jeevs is sure a big change in this, I don't like her when she cries (Ironically that is what she does in the show everyday😆). Are you a Virika fan! If then God Forbid me! And thanks again...you're welcome Btw!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha1989



I can't believe that I'm actually liking it when you'll address me as the "Beyond Control" girl 😆
Will wait for your next update eagerly 😳


You're work has such an impact that people forgot "Aysha" and are rather refering you as "Beyond control"😆! I'm kidding btw! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Superb Update...! Finally they r frnds...frnship makes things easier specially trust...thnks for the pm!~

Thanks! I agree..you're welcome!

Originally posted by: shona9

A long update after a long time ...!!!!! I often give long updates, but yeah this time it was late and longer.
Thanxxx 4 dis ...Welcome!
Good to see dat frndship has started...
Waiting to read more after dis...
Thanxxx 4 d pm...

You're welcome!

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Awesome update... A new start... loved it... ❤️

Thanks Shivani!

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Hey its nice...n thnx for the updt

Thanks and you're welcome!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: hangok

owww this is sooo good, im really suprised how he noticed everything about her,just great, now at first friends than lovers ❤️

thanks for pm

Friendship creates magic! Anyways thanks!

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