VirMan SS/Winds of Desire- 10th chap updated!

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Lavanya

@..Lavi..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Hey. Its Awesome. I want to write one story! bt dno wat to! Its simply superb!

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Sofia

@SweetAngels96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

It was awesome
Really looking forward to the nxt part
N thnxx 4 pm

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Sheel Kurani

@Sheel22

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Awesome dear...loving it... Waiting eagerly for next part...:)

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Krupaa

@forever_young

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

That was an awesome update!!

You have portrayed the emotions sooo well!!
i can feel maanvi's helplessnees, lonliness...it is just pefect!
an amazing update once again!! Loved it!!
Thank you for the PM!

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oriyana

@oriyana

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

I must say this is a beautiful story... I Love it... Love it to the core... All the emotions and feelings were presented beautifully...

Plz pm me when u update.. Thanks! 😊

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Delena

@Delena-cious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

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That was an amazing update! so finally Viraat and Maanvi have come face to face. gee i dn like viraat here he's so immature and arrogant. he's embarrased at the thought of introducing a girl from Hrishikesh?! well thats quite rude ! he have put up a condition😲 haww! i really really hope maanvi change his mind soon. she sure wil i guess!😳

the last goodbye to her place. so touching! can almost imagine it! she is all alone in the world and she is going to get a husband who is a total stranger to her. atleast she got vanshika and viren and jeevika. they have accepted her instantly. only viraat is left!

continue soon! cant wait to see more of virman..and i mean moreee😉😆

fab update as always! 🤗

Edited by Delena-cious - 12 years ago

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Hey sweetie *Hugz*

A wonderful update, Vanshika mom is such a darling to Manvi... a lovely beginning to this relationship.. Virat does seem a tad immature... one of those rich guys who only know how to have fun and party... Virat and Manvi haven't spoken to each other once! 😲 and they've gotten married. A very interesting start.

P.s Will try to write something, an OS, hopefully soon :)

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Ava

@SmileXD

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Firstly, sorry for the late reply, school + ill = near death :(

Loved the update, wow Viraat must hate her. Who wants to be forced to marry someone you barely know? This suprisingly made me happy though, I want to see the hate before I see the love, not a die hard romantic you see. ;)

Great work and beginning, loved the update a lot :)

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

I luved ur story. I must say ur concept is great... Do pm me whn u cont. 😊

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Nisha

@nisha33

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

i don't remember reading this ff ever, maybe i did, well i don't remember so i reread all the chapters.

boy it was amazing! i swear i thought manvi's to-be-husband will cheat on her, she'll be devasted and then virat, the knight in shinning armor, will save her but as usual i was wrong. i loved how you shaped up the story. the second chapter was so emotional. felt terrible for the poor girl, manvi.

virat is such an arrogant prick but i still love him 😉

the way your are shaping up the story is quite interesting.

i am excited to read the next chapter and see which direction will you take it.

want to say update soon but take your time and update when you can.

thank you for the pm

hugs

nisha