ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#2 Ch 06 Pg 121 08/01 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear:) love it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Yay you updated... That was one hot update...

Awww Khushi is all comfortable with him and Arnav is taking it all wrong... thinking that she is manipulative...

Poor Poor Khushi so innocent...

But he is enjoying being with her...

Ugh that mother of her is so disgusting...

Hope she gets killed by Arnav someday...

Anjali shouldnt be so judgemental... she should try to understand Khushi...

Overall it is getting quite interesting... waiting for their actual SR, demo was good... 😉

Congrats on the new thread...
Edited by shraddska - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Yapieee u updated ur FF...update was realy Hot...luvd it..thnx for pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
wow loved it heart fluttring chapter.i am still thinking of the future.what will kushi do when she will get to know about all these and what will happen and will his family accept her and kushi is so imature for all this.plss nooo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Appy - Glad to see you back...
Great Update...
I am so glad they haven't done anything yet...
In your prologue - I remember Khushi thinking how he made love to her...
Which would have not been possible that particular night only because he doesn't give a shit about her...
But - I am thinking whenver they 'do' make love - at least he would get to know her little better...
And WHAT A MOM! I wonder if all this happens in real...I really hope not...
A perfect reason for her to think about aborting the child when now she obviously knows about her husband and her mom (according to the prologue)
Anyway - I liked the update...
Can't wait to see how things unfold between them...
A perfect way to change a man - through a baby...
Bonded for the womb - Khushi going from 'pawn' to his love and the mother of his child...
Oh - I dont think I have ever told you - I love this title too - PAWN - A perfect title for this story...
Keep up the good work and I hope you are already feeling better...
Lots of love...
-KC
P.S. I do have to discuss something else - which I will PM you for...
Until then...
Keep smiling and keep writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awesome update...poor Khushi so innocent.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
WOWWW!!!

AMAZING UPDATE!!

LOVED IT!!

she is super duper innocent
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
nice updateee...
poor khushh and arnav is behaving like tht...
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update poor Khushi doesn't realise why Anjali behaved like that i hate Mrs Gupta
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Congrats for the new threat :-). Amazing update as always, you are awesome writer and so talented :-) eagerly waiting for the next part 🤗

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