ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#2 Ch 06 Pg 121 08/01

Hira

@hira_arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

😭🥺please update🥺

🥺please update🥺

🥺please update🥺😭

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VYGA

@VYGA89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Plz update soon.Plz update soon.

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raapunzel...

@raapunzel...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

dear i just started to read ur story n completed all chapters...first tym i.am reading ur dark story...arnav n mrs gupta r disguisting yaar...feeling so bad 4 our angel...pls update soon...

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

When will you update this? 😳

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Lily

@NallyLilyLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Arnav is truly disgusting in this fic, his redemption track is going to be a gd one for sure...but is there redemption for such a character?

And I agree with you, mothers like the one in this fic are disgusting and deserve to rot in hell. My heart bleeds for women who have to suffer such atrocities!

Do update soon, i'm very interested to see where you take this.

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Awesome story,poor khushi so naive can't see ugly world around her..I hope Arnav finds her innocence soon n accepts her.

Edited by dazzlerabi - 12 years ago

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samirao

@samirao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Awosome , all of ur stories r just superb , mind blowing ,plz pm me ur next chapter , if it possible for u , thanks in advance

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Ayaat

@Ayaat1216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

It's sad that people have to go through this crap in real life and not just in stories. People like us, who are human and have feelings like us are used of and discarded after and it's really disgusting. The sad part is we can't do anything except spread awareness and help those that we can...
This is one of my favourite stories on IF, pls update soon 😊

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awroneema

@awroneema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Akorshi

yes paro di...plz change the name to gul gupta...
gul deserves more than worse...😡

no plz...in dat case i have to visualize GUL's face wid ASR...omg they r making out,,,,this thought will make me vomit...nahi...i cnt imagn dat gul khan's face in the arm of ASR!

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#420

I read "Pawn"... emmm , trust me i have mixture of feelings!!! I dun know wat to say. My heart pains wen i see such an innocent girl like kushi has to suffer this much!!! Hmm, n wen i read the author's note i was more sad to know that it really happen's in the real world, there are ppl around suffering this pain!!! Its really good that u took such a step to bring it as a story, so that every one has a good knowledge of the outer world..

I could see ur fic r becoming my favorite in IF. Waiting for the further upates!!!

Love,

Deep😛

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