FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow it was wounderful update,
wat arjun heard,
y he is angry ,
continue soon,
sry for the late comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
for the first part:: it was damn cool update 😊
Shree alwayas has love at first sight nah!! 😉
Riya with open mouth..be alert of flies 🤣
loved the eyelock 😳

for the second part:: poor shree have to leave them with heavy heart *sigh*
hope Trishna will help Riya's problem to be tracked out..as she has to deal with Arjun's terrible storm of interogation..precap indicates thats only 😕

hope Arjun get to know soon about the reason behind Riya's lie 😊

update soon Tina...will be waiting 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
My dear Tina,

I am glad to have my favourite FF chugging along once more.

It is coming along perfectly, and by that I do not mean only the Arjun-Riya tussles but the case as well. Obsessions like the one that Ramoo was suffering from can be very destructive; here he has finished off a whole happy family. Justice came to him as well, but to what purpose as far as the Graves or their poor child were concerned? It is tragic and horrible at the same time.

So now Nemesis, in shape of Shaina's telephone number and her call on Sameer's phone, has caught up with our poor Riya, with her harmless crush on the latter having landed her in a right royal mess. Well, let me see how you have her dig herself out of it!

Shyamala Aunty

thank a lot for your comments and likes, and as promised please find the part B below😉

Chapter 4B


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
That was fab ...
Loved both the updates ...
Awww Shree started liking Trishna ...
But OMG Arjun got heard something and that is a proof ...
I guess he heard the girl's message or something ...
The precap sounds really interesting ...
Plz update soon ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
enjoying ur story!

plz dont create misunderstandings between Ariya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good job Tina!
Actually brilliant.
The way you solved the case was awesome.
Ha! Ab I guess Riya ki band bajegi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally loved it.. Precap seems to b interesting.. Waiting 2 see wat Arjun is gonna do nw..

Thanx 4 the pm.. Update the nxt part soon and pm me whn u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice dear . update soon pm me.!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow plz update soon!!!!!!!!👏😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
precap is so interesting...

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