FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

It was really awesome ...

I just loved their first meeting ...

N why is he actually talking to her so rudely ... Does he actually like her ??? And is sort of upset that riya is rathod's fianc ???

I'm confused ...

Plz update soon ... :)

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow i like that fight!!!! not only riya i also blushing here!😳😳

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

OMG!!! itna bada confusion?? 😲 Riya ki toh vaat lag gayi samjho 😆

Kya kya dialogue tha isme..grandchild!!🤣 fake heart attack!!! 🤣 Arjun's sis-in-law 🤣

Riya toh sirf photo dekhke hi dream karne lag gayi,kuch toh baat hai isme haan 😉

Hayee the first meeting of Ariya,Arjun on Riya...😳😳

kya update tha main bhi day dream karne lag gayi abb toh 😆

great job Tina..continue fast fast 😃

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Vry Nyc yaar ..

Whole part ws filled wit emotion , romance & dreams..

Riya ne phto dekhte hi pechan liya khudus ko..😆

Bechari Dadi , jab sach saamne aayega to sacchi mai attack aa jaayega unhe..

Riya thinks Arjun is d thief😆😆

Cn't wait to read.

plz continue asap.

Grandchildrens??😆😆😆

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

My dear Tina,

This is unquestionably your best effort so far. Not just that, it is very good by itself.

You have not put a single foot wrong in this chapter, plus the emotional quotient, which is very high, has been handled to perfection - warm and genuine,but not at all mawkish. I loved the scenes between Dadi (her fake heart attack was spot on!) and Riya, as also the way in which Riya, so long on her own in life, blossoms under the loving care and attention of the two ladies, especially Dadi.

The dream is of course a big pointer to the future - I see that you are following the film so far - and Arjun's entry leaves nothing to be desired.

All in all, I do not remember when I have enjoyed a chapter of a FF more. I am sure you will take care to maintain this level of excellence in the rest of the story. A major responsibility, I agree, but it has to be borne!

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 2

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
confusion confusion ...mast hai...maza aa gaya...🤣🤣...grandchildren...awesome yaar🤣😆🤣

riya soch rahi hogi...kya musibat hai...🤣

wow riya at her house(after the marriage)...hmmm 😳 riya in arjun's room... impress by his photo only jab samane aayega to kya hoga😆

riya dream...OMG...arjun cover her mind fully she dream about him,,,,,,,,,,,,kya baat hai dear,...dil khush kar diya...arjun ka asar pure room mein aur to aur riya pe bhi...hayeee mein to mar java...🤢

aaa...arjun and riya fight and end on bed arjun on riya...(koi doctor ko bulao...mein mar rahi hoon...)

haruhi26...tere against mein case kar doongi...

😆 thanks for the lovely and funny comments dear

Yep well Riya told one lie, havent you heard the phrase that to cover one lie, one would have to told a hundred lies😆,

hamari Riya phaas gayi, first Dadi and her dreams about grandchildren😆 and now our handsome hunk is here for investigating her😳

Yep Riya liked him in the photo, and now that finally he's here himself then sparks are bound to fly😳

So Kaveri-ji, bed scene killed you or are you still alive my No1 actress🤣

but sweetie if i'm arrested due to your case, how will i finish the story and cause more heart attacks( by showing romantic scenes of course) to you and everyone out there🤣

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: rockz.diva
ohoo different loving it awsome update dear 😛

soo watz gona happnnow waitng waitng 4 nxt part tnkuu for pm dear huggiee

Thanks dear for liking it, i've tried my best to make it lively and funny😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: priya00147
happy dat rathore is still alive after being shot!!
riya is really really in a big prob becoz of dis lie..!!!
rathore's family are sooo lovingg 😊
perfect entry for arjunn 😉 😳
waiting for the precap!!!

Of course dear, he's our second hero, i can hardly kill him, he'll be back by chapter 4-5 i think😊

well one lie is very important specially when uttered in front of people like Rathore's family, specially Dadi and now Arjun😆

Thanks dear😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: FeistySoul
That was one fun update yaar!
ArIya meeting was awesome!
Ab shuru hotha hain Golmaal!

😆 yep theek kaha tumne, Golmaal is back😆

Thanks for liking my story dear😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: prava55663
superb...
Loved arjun's entry...
uff ria embarrassed..
thanks for pm

thanks dear😊

well i wanted an explosive entry of Arjun, hence the thief and bedroom scene😆

well yep she'll be embarrassed, she was in bed with a stranger, just imagine if Mrs Rawte had come just at that time, she'd be the one to have a real heart attack😆

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