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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome piece of writing. Oh how I cried for Khushi and this inhuman man, who put her through hell. He aught to know what he did to her, how he traumatized her after the first marriage. He says that Khushi is thinking all wrong, but Arnav; put yourself in Khushi's shoes and then you will know what humiliation is? What your accusations, insults and man-handling, etc has done to this poor girl? You have literally killed her and if you do not realize the extent of harm you have done to Khushi, then you do not DESERVE her.

Waiting for your next part. Wow!!! my friend, You have shown us the Khushi we wanted to see on screen. You brought out the feelings of a broken Khushi. It will take a long time for a person who has endured so much at the hands of a person, she so desperately loves. Arnav should repent for this, and made to realize that he cannot take people's feelings for granted. He does not deserve Khushi. He deserves people like Sheetal who can make him feel like a worm.

Edited by lara3110 - 12 years ago
jenshad thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update Soon ?! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really felt for Khushi. This is such an emotional piece of work. It's always Khushi who has to suffer.

Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Please update waiting...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

I don't know how many times, I have read this awesome OS. Every time I read it, it just blows my mind. How well you have depicted the feelings of Khushi and many more just like her, going through this phase of life. Just loved it so much and eagerly waiting for the next update. I am sure, how much of your sensitive side played an important role in giving us such a masterpiece. All three parts keep me enthralled every time, I read.⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼

So, my friend, I salute you and would appreciate if you give me a list of your other work.

THANK YOU AND GOD BLESS.😃

Edited by lara3110 - 12 years ago
lara3110 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super, I just finished reading it all over again - all the three parts. Fabulous. Check this site everyday, what happened????? Please update.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting patiently. Good OS like yours need follow up soon. Please update.
lara3110 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are you ever going to continue or do we take your last chapter as THE END
Please repond.
lara3110 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sad, you are not going to continue with "Silent Tears" which was my favorite read. Please give me a list of your other work on this particular track.

Warmest regards😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the three parts in one go... 😊
its fabulous...👏 👏
khushi's pain 😭 was portrayed very well... 😊

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