At first, I was a bit wary to read this ... I was like, 'ok. This may, or may not be a sad ending ... if it is, it's
going to be OK ... kind of'
Then I read the Chapter title and I was like, "
DAYUUM, this may very well have a
happy ending!!' 😆
And just the pace of it was awesome - things were happening quickly and rapidly, which sort of put me on edge; in that I was thinking "will he make it or won't he?!"
I also liked that mini-insight into Anjali :D
Aw, her letter to him!!!!
Bechaari Khushi ... it's just like her, always thinking about others ... she's so bloody self-sacrificing!! :(
Erm, just one thing though - you've written: "I need to leave you for you to obtain your true love and idle partner. Which obviously I aint't."
Did you mean 'ideal' partner? :/
And 'ain't'? 😆
What I also liked was that you've written Arnav as sort of two - the 'ASR' aspect of him hates losing, and doesn't go down without a fight and that's where we've got him trying to look for her, as well as his fury at her misunderstanding. Then on the other side, you've got the 'Arnav' who won't let his love go at any cost - he realises what exactly his life would be without her and knows he must get her back! (Did that actually make any sense? It kind of did in my head, but I dunno if I explained it well? xD)
AND THEIR CONFRONTATION! AWWW :')
I was grinning massively like an idiot when he caught her hand, just going, "YESSS!! He got there in time!!" xD
"You light up my world like nobody else" - Reading this line, my thoughts just went off in One Direction 😆 hahaaa
Bless.
Just too awww-inducing! :')
Loved it! :D
And I'm quite proud of my stalker skills too! I was second! 😲😆
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