IPKKND OS: Shattered {Part Three - Page 48}

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

This is awesome really i mean khushi behaving the right way till precap. Glad Arnav gave his anger a rest n used his mind. Yupiii this shital bitch... Glad ASR thrown her away... No pls he is already making efforts to pacify her n to clear all the MUs plz dont make Khushi leave like that

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Poor khushi. Uff arnav!!!! whywhywhy

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deep5128

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Awesome luvd it! Update soon

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Lovely parts! Really sorry i couldn't comment on the last part, have been extremely busy with school :/

Anyways, you described Khushi's feelings really nicely.

Arnav, although unintentionally, did hurt her through Sheetal.

Can't wait for the third part.

Update soon 😳

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Wonderful Li. Though I am really sad for Khushi, Arnav deserves this. What the hell? Why was he treating her like that? There is some thing called humanity, and she is his wife!

I cannot wait to read how they will get together now, or separated.

Beautiful OS Li!

Thanks for the PM

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

SS! Sorry for the late comment!

So he finally realized, huh? That idiot! You know what? Let him stew some more! She's going to the station? Par kyun? Is she going back to Lucknow???

I see a potential FF! 😆

Continue soon!

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Sniffy!

@Shahid_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Loving this OS! Eagerly waiting for the third part xx

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Crinklez.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Loved part 2. Hating the show at the moment and really want something like this to happen. Khushi and Arnav need some distance so that he can appreciate what he has.

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

OMG!!dt was amazin..👏👏👏👏👏nw dis z wt v col frustation..ryt?evry1's almost same frustated..i mean..m in..:Dwell..i too want Khushi to shout n yell lyk dis..yellin evrythin dt she thinks n has in her heart..only dn wud he no wt z she goin thru..i mean sayin once dt ..he dint lyk Khushi's idea of callin Sheetal 2 liv wid dem..n later mingling wid her..n her kid..dt z nt accptable at all..good Khushi left 2 her buaji's place..nw he knows she was ryt..n wt was Sheetal here 4..well..she was runnin 2 Railway Station?i want a happy endin..as it wont mean nethin dn..i mean shwin soo much lov in d 2 chptrs..n den sprtin dem..NO...please..make him regret..though he's alrdy..n let him beg 4 her forgiveness..she wud defin.forgive..knowin how much he loves her..:):)dis was ossum..hopefully..d nxt chptr wud b more ossum..:)

doo pm me wen u update more..😛😛thnxx😊😊

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SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Liyaaa~ 😭 not a sad ending pleaseee~

I rather have Arnav redeem himself and say sorry~

I love how you expressed his anger towards Sheetal and of course how he expressed that he'll love Khushi till his last breath 😳 that's the ASR I know, and I loved how u expressed his thoughts conflicting against one another

Khushi is planning to leave Delhi permanently?

I hope u continue this a bit longer even with a separation track in between I hope there a happy ending =D

do update soon! loving this OS!