FAN FIC - Page 20

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Next day………..

Bhumi goes to wake arjun and again finds him still in sleep……….she remembers the previous day's(morning's) incident ….smiles shyly and goes ahead to wake him up………..

Bhumi is dressed in a lovely red dress……her hairs wet……..lookin fresh……

Bhumi goes near his ears and whispers

B: GOOD MORNING!!

Arjun wakes up with sluggish and lazy eyes…..

A: hmmmmmmm

B: arjun utho………jaldi………

A: (looks at her lovely) bhavri……….

B: (ruffling the hair on his forhead) hmmmm

Arjun looks at her lovely and thinks in his mind…..

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

A: tum roz mujhe aise hi uthaogi naa…..hamesha……….

B: (a bit surprised) par main

A: bolo uthaogi na mujhe har roz issi tarah……..hamesha………

B: (not able to say anything and feeling shy)main……….

Just keeps looking at him……..

Arjun sits up and comes near her and says lovingly……

A: hmm……..happy birthday!!!! Bhavri……….

Bhumi is more than delighted………..

Bhumi gets and goes away from there….arjun smiles and says

A: bhavri………main har subah tumhe apne paas chahta hoon isi tarah……..

Arjun restricts bhumi to go to the kitchen for the day and orders food and cake from a restaurant………

Chintu …arjun and bhumi spend the day just chattering and laughing………arjun then asks bhumi for coming out with him in the evening for which bhumi agrees……

In the evening ….

Bhumi is her room, getting ready for the outing with arjun………she is really excited abt it……..Suddenly she hears a knock on door……

She opens it and fnds arjun……….

B: tum….main ab tak tayar nahi huyi……

A: mujhe pata hai………isiliye to…….brings a packet in front of her……

B: ye kya hai

A: open it!!

Bhumi opens it and is very happy………it has a very beautiful black chudidar with a kurti and dupatta to match with………….

B: arjun……yeh……main

A: bhavri main chahta hoon ke aaj tum ye dress pehno………plz……

Bhumi shies and nods her head…and closes the door………

Bhuumi gets ready……she is about to leave……..when the door is knocked again……..

Bhumi goes and opens it……….Arjun is stunned after looking at bhumi……she appears really beautiful and is not able speak anything………..

B: arjun tum……..ab kya huwa…..

Arjun has also changed in to a black suit with white shirt……….

Entering her room and closing the door……..

A: ( nodding his head) hmm……..kuch nahin andar aao

A: ye lo

B: (looks down at the box) ab ye kya hai………..

She opens it and is surprised to find a beautiful diamond necklace……..

B: yeh……(surprised)

A: pasand hai………

B: lekin yeh to bahut mehenga hoga

A: tch!!tumhe pasand hai ya nahi

B: haan….but …

A(interrupting her) bas to phir……..

Takes her to the mirror ……and makes her stand before it and he stands back …takes the necklace out of the box ……….smiles ……..puts her hairs aside and puts the necklace in her neck……

Bhumi blushes………. he looks in the mirror standing close to her……..with his hands on her arms….😳

A: BEAUTIFUL!!!!😳

Then forwards his hand to her……..she places her palm on his hand……..and he takes her away to the place where his car has been parked……..

He opens the car door for her………she sits down…..and he sits on the driver's seat……..Both drive along………

B: arjun par hum jaa kaha rahe hain……

Arjun stops in front of a posh hotel……..both get down……….

They go inside and find no one……..bhumi stops at the enterance……..

B: yahan koi bhi nahin hai………kyun….yahan….

Looks at arjun……

A: who isiliye bhavri (taking her in) kyunki maine ye poora restaurant aaj ke liye book kiya hai

B: pura reastaraunt!!!!

A: hmm(drawing a chair for her to sit)

But bhumi is a bit shocked

A: arre bahvri……….baitho naa………

She sits down……..the air is romantic…..and in the candle light they keep looking at each other……Suddenly the waiter comes and says…..

W: Sir ….till the dinner is served……would you like to dance??

A: (looks at bhumi) yes!!

Bhumi feels a bit shy…😳…arjun asks for her hand and she does so………

They both start dancing……and get lost in each others arms……..in each others eyes……

The sky is full of golden stars shining in the light of the moon, but the most beautiful light I see is in your eyes

The waiter intervenes…..

The waiterbrings in the food and both of tthem have it …..suddenly arjun looks at her and keeps looking at bhumi,who is busy in relishing her food…..arjun smiles

Bhumi suddenly notice this and asks him as to what happened

B: arre kya huwa…khana khao na……

A: (looking lovely at her)

Saamney baithi raho ,dil ko qarrar aayega

Jitna dekhengey tumhe,utna hi pyaar aayega

(thinking to himself)

B: arjunnn!! Kya huwa

A: uh!!nahi kuch bhi to nahi(smiles)

They have the food………and return to the car……..while returning…..instead of going to home……..he takes another route…

B: arre yeh to humare ghar ki taraf nahi jaata……….

A: hmmm pata hai……(smiling)

B: to hum kaha jaa rahe hai………..

A: surprise!! Tumhe thodi der main pata chal jayega……..

Bhumi becomes too curious and keeps asking him till he reaches the place……

A: lo aagaya….

B: (looking out) yahan………iss sunsaan jagah par kya hai……..jo yahan laaye ho…..

A: bahar to chalo…

They come out……..

Its very cold……..and winds are also blowing…not much but small winds……

Bhavri……running her palms across her arms……..its chilling over there……

B: yeh hum kaha aaye hain………aur kyun aaye hain……

It's a beautiful and romantic place………

A: (looks lovely with his eyes full of passion) isiliye kyunki main tumhare saath kuch waqt akele bitana chahta hoon….sabse door……take tume apne liye chura loon……

Bhumi feels shy…😳….they don't speak just look at each other….

Arjun thinks in his mind…………..

Jab Khamosh Aankhon Se Baat Hoti Hai,
Aise Hi Mohabbat Ki Shooruaat Hoti Hai;
Tumhare Hi Khayaalon Mein Khoye Rehte Hain,
Pata Nahin Kab Din Aur Kab Raat Hoti Hai..!!!

Arjun comes near her….bhumi pushes him aside and goes and sits in the car….

Arjun is stunned for moment and then smiles the next moment………

Bhumi blushes and feels very shy………her heart beating fast and very rapidly…..she smiles………arjun opens the door and sits in……..

The light is on inside the car………she looks at him……..his eyes don't have the lovely look anymore……..they are filled with passion……..he comes near her…..and brings his hand to her face and brings her close to him………

This time bhumi couldn't stop him…..he looks at her……his gaze drops to her lips….he brings her face very close………further close ……….and then they unable to stop themelves ……kiss...

After some minutes………the car door opens and bhumi comes out of it……..

Bhumi is embarrassed…blushing……..feels shy……..and is unable to look up…..her heart beats even more rapidly and faster than before……..her head spinning…… a bit shaken up………

She smiles………thinking what just happened inside the car ……he had just kissed her..……….

The thought bought a blush in her face……….

Meanwhile arjun comes out of the car………he is happy and smiles and goes near bhumi………

Stands in front of bhumi……bhumi is unable to look at him……but he brings her close to him and cups her face in his palms and compelles her look to at him………

Arjun smiles a her………bhumi is just blank and is unable to say anything as if her lips are sealed……….

Suddenly arjun notices that tears are rolling out of bhumi's eyes……..

A: bhavri kya huwa tum……

Bhumi is silent …….looks on and wipes the tears……

A: bhavri kya tumhe……jo huwa…….(a bit worried)

She places her palms on his lips……..and says

Last night, thinking of you. One tear roled out.

I ask why are you out.

Tears say, there is someone so beautiful inside your eyes.

Now there is no place for me in you eyes.

Arjun smiles on hearing this…….

Then arjun brings her close to him and they hug……..bhumi thinks to herself

B: main hamesha tumhare bahon main isi tarah rehna chahti hoon……zindagi bhar……..(smiles)

Arjun tightenes his arms around her and she feels as if all this is magic……..she feels secure in arjun's arms……….

Both stand like that for few minutes……….

After sometimes bhumi manages o say

B: arjun main ghar jana chahti hoon…..its getting ttoo late….

A: (loosening his grip on her and looking at her) theek hai

Smiles and gives a small kiss on her forhead………..they drive back to home….

In her house……..

Arjun enters with her in her house……Bhumi proceeds towards her room……she doesn't look back at arjun…..He doesnt feel like going to his room......not even to his room......he wanted to be with her...........

Bhumi goes in her room……..looks herself at the mirror and blushes……the incident in the car keeps coming in her brain……….of how sweetly he had kissed her……

Just then arjun enters the room……she doesn't notice it………he comes from behind and stands besides her………and keeps staring at her lovely……bhumi sees his image in the mirror and blushes……… arjun feels happy seeing bhumi blush…….😳😳

Bhumi moves away from the mirror and stands near a window……where slightly wind is blowing……..

Arjun moves behind her……..her hairs come on his face……he pushes them aside slowly……and nears her………

Bhumi feels her heart beating faster…..Arjun eyes still have those passionate look......

He comes close and slowly pushes the duppatta from her neck and the dupatta falls down……..bhumi…surprised looks down and then at him…blushing……she looks back at him......she is still not facin him......or rather is unable to.......

He brings his arms around her waist……and slowly places a small kiss in her ear…..

Bhumi is a bit surprised…….then he slowly…goes down kissing her nape of neck…..then her shoulder….unable to control himself or the situation.......

Bhumi suddenly turns…around……

He still doesn't stop and smiles and kisses her neck ….then comes up in her face and kisses her cheek ….then the other side……then her eyes…..her nose……..he brings her even closer..........her hands go back to his head and fingers start ruffling his hairs..........

Bhumi has her eyes closed…suddenly remembering that happened in the car…a smile spreads thru her face……..then he suddenly stops and smiles…..

She opens her eyes…..looks at arjun……..he does nothing and looks at her lovingly and then……..

A: bhavri……..

Moving away from her a bit………

A: bahut raat ho chuki hai……tumhe so jana chahiye……..

B: arjun!!

She feels as if she has no control over herself…..she goes and hugs him tightly……

A: ae….bhavri kya huwa……

B: u wont leave me naa??(feeling a bit insecure)

A: bhavri aisa kyon soch rahi ho!!

B: to phir kyon jaa rahe ho!! Mere paas raho naa…..dont leave me please……mat jaao……

Arjun falls silent and then after few moments……..

A: bhavri

She looks up!!

A: bhavri mera yahan iss waqt rukhna theek nahi hai!!

B: kyon!!

A: (sighs) bhavri!! Smajha karo….tum ab so jaao …..hum kal subah baat karenge theek hai!!

Places a kiss on heer forehead and smiles

A: good night!!

And goes away from the room……….

Bhumi is a bit stunned and surprised………a bit shaken up ………

She changes and retires to bed………but is unable to sleep………

The incidents that happened that day kept coming to her……….she felt that all that happened was a dream……and what happened between them was some pure magic……

She smiled happily……..

B: I love you!!

Pyaar ka izhar kar do

Ab hum say nahi raha jaata

Likh ker hi iqraar kar lo

Agar hoton pe nahi aata

Saying she tried to sleep

On the other hand arjun remembered the incident …..lying on bed………but was not able to sleep……….

He lay ………sleep not at all nearing him……..he remembering what happened and then says to himself

The Shining Star Up High
Reflects In Your Eyes
A Loving Romantic Night
When We Fuse Our Hearts
With a cherry Between My Lips
Savoring It So Sweet
While Caressing Your Limbs
Approaching To Give You A Kiss
Embracing Me Against Your Heart
Told Me How Much You Love
My Flirt And My Romance
As You Love All My Songs
Passion Struck That Night
Our Darling Romantic Souls

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