~Unfulfilled Desires~A SwaRon SS - Page 9

Originally posted by: mahak_28

areyyy itni jaldi khatam..ye to serial se bhi chotu tha...:( nyc uppdate bt lamba update kro plsss

Originally posted by: Rutu

Awesome concept Vedika, nice start as well, but itna chotu update, not fair!🤔

Thanks for the PM

Next update+Imp. note coming up in a few mins😃

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Next update+Imp. note coming up in a few mins😃

yayieee 😛

Chapter 2:

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Sharon- Lo aa gaya tumhara pati parmeshwar

Kriya- Chup! Rey kya hua, itna kyun chilla rahe ho?

Rey- Baatcutter, meri sherwani ka button tut gaya (sulking)

Neha- Kriya you fixing button, I help to making Sharon the perfect bride

Sharon- Haan, haan aap please mere best friend ki help ki jiye, varna ye pure ghar ko apne sar par utha le ga!

Rey- Kitni understanding hai meri bestfriend (Hugs Sharon)

Rey whispers in Sharon's ear-Who tumhara intazaar kar raha hai peeche ke lawn mein (winks)

Kriya drags Rey out of the room-Ab chalo bhi!

Neha- Sharon you two minute waiting, we girls welcoming the ladkewale and coming

Sharon- Haan Neha, tum log jao

(muttering) Tum log jaoge tabhi to main usse mil paungi

All the girls scamper downstairs in excitement to welcome the boy's side and their family.

(Play the song in the background please-also found this swaron vm very sweet,do have a look!)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdtKnaoXXug

In the Lawn

-------Sharonnn! Kahan ho tum? Mujhse ab aur intazaar nahi hota… tumhe dekhne ko yeh aankhein taras gayi hai, aur kitna tadpaogi, please aa jao na…

Instantaneously, the sweet melody of her anklets bombarded his thoughts in an attempt to tease his calm and composed soul.

He turned to the direction of the euphonic tune as quick as lightening to recognize the familiar slim figure of his to be wife, waiting in anticipation for him to lay his eyes upon her, eventually resulting to her blushing crimson with shyness.

There she was, standing merely a few metres away, her mesmerizing beauty decked from head to toe in in a ravishing red bejeweled lehenga adorned with exquisite and exclusive ornaments enhancing her allurement.

(Sharon's Lehenga 😃)

http://www.google.ae/imgres?q=red+wedding+lehengas&num=10&hl=en&biw=1123&bih=712&tbm=isch&tbnid=vAOfbU5vS0YnRM:&imgrefurl=http://www.marigoldevents.com/2010/06/designer-indian-wedding-lehengas-and-more/&docid=m6QzK9sSAP1yYM&imgurl=http://www.marigoldevents.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/manish-malhotra-karishma-kapoor-lehenga.jpg&w=400&h=500&ei=UQORUIq8CYewhAfRgoCYCg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=739&vpy=358&dur=470&hovh=217&hovw=176&tx=70&ty=110&sig=117405642865417131315&page=2&tbnh=133&tbnw=114&start=30&ndsp=36&ved=1t:429,i:217

(His Point of View)

How can you play with my feelings like this?? I jus can't resist you anymore Sharon, you look like an angel fallen from above, just for me.

Aasmaan se ek farishta jisko khuda ne banaya sirf mere liye.

Look-Look Hawa-Hawa

(Her Point of View)

Kuch bologe bhi ya aise hi mujhe dekhte rahoge??

Vaise, aaj tum bhi koi shehzaade se kam nahi lag rahe ho.

-------(Clears throat) Sharon, aaj maar daalne ka iraada hai kya? (smirks)

Sharon- Swayammm, koi apne hone wali biwi ko aise compliment deta hai? (full on angry mode) mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni, main jaa rahi hun yahan se!

Sharon turns to leave but Swayam holds her wrist in full on majnu mode

Swayam-

Tumhari aankhon ke peeche

Tumhari muskaan hai chupi

Kissi ne na dekhi

Sirf, mujhe hai woh dikhti

Tumhara guroor ho,

Gussa ho

Ya ho tumhari naaraazgi

Tumhari har uss ada mein chupi hai saadgi

Swayam embraced Sharon in a hug bursting with affection and warmth, re-assuring her with unconditional love oozing out from his heart.

Their passionate moment was ruined by the unforeseen blaring uproar of excessive coughs, which instantly brought them back to reality.

In front of them, stood, the newly married couple, Mr and Mrs. Singhania. beaming from ear to ear at the to be weds.

Rey- Aaj ek aur bakra halaal hone jaa raha hai! (referring to Swayam)

Kriya- Aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho, main aapko itna torture karti hoon kya? (baby face)

Rey- Nahi.. nahi..woh.. bus.. (Swayam interrupts)

Swayam- Lo shuru ho gayi inki pyaar bhari takraar, bas bhi karo ab!

Vaise, tum dono yahan kya karne aaye ho… (mutters under his breath) Kabaab mein haddi!

Kriya- Voh jiju, actually shaadi ka mahurat nikhla jaa raha hai, to aap dono mandap tak chalne ka kasht karenge ya ek saal ke baad shaadi karenge?

Swayam and Sharon- Ek saal?? (Shocked)

Swayam- Mein itni der tak nahi wait kar paunga, Sharon jaldi chalo!

Sharon, Rey and Kriya burst out laughing and our majnu (Swayam) gets lost in Sharon euphonic laughter.

Rey (whispers to Swayam)- Ab to ghoorna band kar, besharam!

Swayam- Tujhe kya problem ho rahi hai, mujhe haq hai, vaise bhi woh meri hone wali biwi hai!

Kriya- Acha, ab chalo bhi…varna ek saal..

Swayam NAHI!!!

They all proceeded to the mandap where the traditional rituals and rasams were conducted and fulfilled by the new generation Majnu and Laila.

They were ultimately bound by pure love, legally for the next seven lives.

Aasmaan pe jodiyan voh, sabki banata hai

Jispe jiska naam likha hai, voh to mil jaata hai

Rasmo ke gheron mein, agni ke pheron mein

Sindoori chaon mein, rishton ki bahon mein

Dheere se leta hai anjaam

Yeh bandhan, saat janamon ka,

Yeh bandhan, saat janamon ka.

Precap- Suhaag Raat with a HUGE Twist!!😆

Hope it was long enough!😊

As usual eagerly awaiting your precious likes/comments and criticisms😃

P.S- You must have guessed by now that the lines spoken by Swayam were from D3 and the last lines are from a beautiful song I found on the net.

Hey dear...i just loved this part...romantic moments ..lovely poems....Kriyansh bit was also cute...loved their frndship... ...lovely update .. u kept ur promise of a longer update ..thanx dear ... now can't wait for the twist..plz plz update soon😊😛😳

Amazing update Vedika!

I loved the cute sweet romatic moments between Sharon-Swayam 😳 U showed Swayam in full on Majnu mode today..loved that

The Rey-Kria tiff was funny it added a comic element 😆

Cant wait for the suhaag raat bit 😃

Thanks for the pm.Update soon