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Posted: 12 years ago
This is one of the best ever reads in this forum...fantastically written...enjoyed every bit of it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phewww tats a marvellous one . . Read in a go. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Kalyaani: Nyc SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I thank Rasgulla_sp for recommending this story...it is sweet,crisp and just d right length!!

The way of presenting d story in his/her format is wonderful as it gives us for in-depth look into d feelings and d turmoil of d characters..and it does not unnecessarily dwell on other matters...

Khushi the ever sacrificing character...my heart aches for both Arnav and Khushi for d two years they spent apart all due to dat b@#%&d Shyam!...Still d Love they had for each other cudnt be supressed cz "it was Always U" for them!!
Thank God Anjali is some spine and is a stronger person than wat she is usually perceived as of ...Payal -there shud be more friends her her in Every Woman's Life!!

D ending gives us our own creative freedom as to how we want it to move forward so tis a superb closing to a lovely story!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
res- I'll read all at one go and comment asap! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww that was such a sweet story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely brilliant...you take story telling into another realm...one of magic and brilliance!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Her story...

That was amazing..:)

Manorma visited Khushi fakin her illness just 2 meet Khushi.

Khushi's a Dr. here..n was in love wid sum architect..4m d day she 1st saw him..

Dey wer in relationship for nearly 8 yrs..n den separated..just 4 his family..n his goodness..

Khushi cnsdrs him as her husband..

D ring part..promise ring was juz too amazing.:)

Thats really amazing.. rare love ..:)

I hav a feelin that this architect z our Arnav..cud relate it wid his sis part n neice..

Manorma z determined 2 make Khushi meet her son..aka Arnav here

His story...

OMG!!

So

Its him n her here..

Yeye!!!

Wen Arnav started narratin about his Khsuhi..i startd cryin..:(

Hw cn sum1 love d other soo much.?

Khushi was selfless..

Loveed d lyn..she had nuthin n gave me evrythin..

N I had evrythin n gave her nothing..

She returned ol his memories..n just tuk his love wid her..

Khushi gav him a letter n askd 4 a break-up..

She left him 4 sum1 else?

Thats nxt 2 mpossible..

She cn neva cheat ne1..

N she would neva cheat her love..

Nw that Manu has found his love..she's screamin n happy n lovin it..

She wnts dem 2 b married..

Wen dey olrdy r in der way..:)

Her history''

OMG!!!

Shyam'he's a real bas***d..

He married Anjali..n was gonna b a fthr..n was runnin afta Khsuhi..

Seriously 'nt new..

But spoilin sooo many lives..he's an 'A' class bas***d..

Khushi left just nt 2 separate Arnav 4m his sis..

A wise decision..but she shud hav told him d real reason of leavin..

Here she's devastated..hurt..n unhappy..n she thinks d person she was in love wid n who loved her back 4 8 yrs would b happy w/o her?

Wow..!!

If her/their love was strong..what she considered..she would hav told him evrythin about Shyam..n would hav stood by him..n accptd whateva decision he wished or was frcd 2 take..

Anther guess..d family knows about Shyam n his deeds and has thrown him out of d family..

I hope soo..

Payal was amazing here..she helped Khsuhi to cum out of her grief.. but bein a real frnd she shud hav taken d initiative 2 tel d truth 2 Arnav..

Nt done..but still..she has been by Khushi's syd..all along.:(

His history...

Anthr amazing chptr it was..

Sooo my guess was right..Shyam had left..

Wen d convo b/w dem strtd I was all teary n ol..

N d momnt I read that Shyam ran away wid kids nanny La I was literally laughin..

Lol

I blamed Payal 4 nt infrmin Arnav about Khushi.

N here she did col him..

D momnt Dr.clld wid d info..i new it was PAyal..it had 2 b her..

Seein Khushi in sucha condition..not accptble..wndr hw she dint do nethin in d last 2 yrs..

Arnav n Anjali new about Shyam afta d kids wer brn..n it had been 3 mnths since Khsuhi had left..

Anjali's each n evry wrd was tru..

Khsuhi accepted evrything//

She justified her act//..

Khushi left coz she new Arnav n Anjali would b hurt afta cumin 2 no about Shyam's tru colour..n that Anjali ssaid.

D committmnt part..seriously..v grls need 2 hear it everyday..that our men loves us.

N here Arnav bein in love wid her neva expressd in real wrds.

He thought if he would hav married her..she would hav nt left..

Anjali agn justified..that she cnsdrd him as her husband..n den 2 she would hav left..

I lovee Anjali..Arshi..Khushi..Payal..:)

Dey ol r fab..

Their story''.

that was amazing mahn.!!!

Hats off to you..

Hav read n no.of love stories..

Hav read n no.of Arshi FF(s) SS(s) OS(s)/love stry

But this z an xceptional stry..

I bow/.

I hav seriously neva read n felt soo happy at Arshi's love,,

I mean 1stly 8 yrs..

No giv n take..juz lov.

N leavin her lov 4 his well nein..though was wrng..:/

Dt lyn yu mntnd ..

"Loving is when you want the best for that person whether that includes you or not" - Anonymous

Seriously..;)

D last chptr was fab..

Khushi new sumthin gud was gonna happn..n felt he was around..n thought she would c him 4m distance n leav..

Arnav cudnt wait 2 meet her..

N wen dey met,,ol went wid love..

One cried her heart out..n 1 loved his hearts content..

I wish d endin part thoda aur achha hota..

Nt cmplainin..

I mean readin this n wen reached d last chptr..i had imagined dem xpressin demslvs in a diff way..

But ol dey did was

B happy..

D last lyns by him..

"during those dark days I have asked myself a million times, if it is possible to lovee you after what you did to me? The only answer I got was 'yes, forever' and even that forever is not enough. Khushi for me lovee is you, it was always you''''"

It was just fab..:)

Trly..

Loveed d poem on d frame..

N d memory linked to it..:)

I see it on your lips, as a beautiful smile

I see it in your eyes as a candle bright

This lovee we have needs no care

This lovee we have is for us to share

Sometimes for you and always for me

Words are not needed, for you or for me

This lovee we have needs no name

This lovee we have is not a game

It knows no hour and needs no voice

It is just a feeling and more than life

This lovee we have is limitless

This lovee we have is timeless

It gives us a reason to cry

It gives us a reason to try

This lovee we have is for us only

This lovee we have is our story

(I hav alrdy copied it 4 my love..)

Don't mind..:P

Edited by reallyhappy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

This is just stupendous!! My heart is still beating wildly, I can't put coherent words right now. How can you write so beautifully? My heart raced with every word I read till the very last one... I had tears reading the final it was just out of this world, take a bow girl, you so deserve it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story yar enjoyed lot keep going

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