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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Damn that Shyam!! GRRR
hope they both will come together at the end!

thanks for the PM :)

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

i love the way you write!!!

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

loved the update Kalyaani... Khushi is so selfless... she doesn't want Arnav to be hated by anyone... just loved this lines of your's

"I did not want him to make the choice and his sister, hate him for it. I can live with the fact that he hates me now, but cannot accept anyone hating him for no fault of his"

loved the fact that Payal is such a fierce friend of Khushi, and wants her to live her life with her happiness that is Arnav... hope Arnav comes to know the real reason of Khushi leaving soon and the treachery of Shyam... continue soon

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Finished part3 today morning after many interruptions at home!
Finally cat is out of the bag! Somehow I can't relate and understand this Khushi. Khushi in PoL and RnS have been easier to understand.
For me, This Khushi is just an educated modern version of the show. Self-sacrifice may not always be in the best interest of people for who it was done in the first place.
I am glad Khushi has a friend like Payal who don't shy away from holding mirror to her face. Now waiting for next update.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

please do continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Ugh Shyam 😡 Bloody lecher. I love Payal, she is right, by hiding the truth, Khushi has done herself, arnav and anjali's family a disservice. So she moved away, being the ever self-sacrificial lamb she is, what if the snake moves on to other girls now? Wow, Shyamu hit on Payal too? Rot in hell, evil evil man

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farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Loved the update... Arnav's lack of communication skills r the root cause of his problems but I hope he's learnt his lesson now.

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Stalking helps :D

So, Anjali is strong, makes sense, sides Khushi, actually gives decent elder-sister advice. Drills sense into her hot headed brother. Wow.

The conversation between Arnav and Anjali makes you see two aspects, two points of view towards the same act - and it throws light on how an act can be deemed selfless or selfish depending on your sense of right and wrong, your ego or your need to blame somebody else for your misery. You also managed to talk about the importance of communication and voicing ones emotions in a relationship. Telepathic connections between lovers is romantic alright, but the voice box and the vocabulary must be exercised once in a while :D Great work there.

And he keeps the stubble for her. Yay! I myself swoon, drool and lust over that stubble. The stubble and voice together are enough to slay anyone !

We shall be grateful to Payal & Manorama for bringing these two lost souls together! Wonderful update - cannot wait for the next part!

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prettypri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Hey beautiful conversation..between Anjali and Arnav...almost hope things had played out lie this on the show!

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-PoisonIvy

@-PoisonIvy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

You have this lovely ability to pick on the nuances of human relationships and pen it down so beautifully that one cant help but feel a kinship with the characters.. Every character jumps out of the screen asking for their thoughts and actions to be understood..

I've only read two of your multi chapter fics and I'm waiting for that elusive meeting between Arnav and Khushi in both of them.. ;)