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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

CAN NOT wait to see what she is cooking up in her head! but love how they both wont give up on each other even separated!

sometimes what we think is helping one by leaving it really isnt... !

love this concept!

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Loved it kalyaani can't wait to see how this story ends up

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nomad.ness

@nomad.ness

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

great concept.

Can't wait until they actually meet since they both don't know who the other actually is.. yet.

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

omg this is stupendously brilliant..!!

update soon...

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

OMG! Another absolutely wonderful tale of love from u...

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

"True love never dies, it only gets stronger with time" - Anonymous

opps.. how did i miss this quote?? its beautiful...

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

I think I love the idea of dividing into his story and her story, and though both the stories meet, as in they are essentially the same given two different perspectives, they stand alone separate too , just as beautifully.

I love the idea of the SS, and you are doing a brilliant job at bringing all the emotions, all the hidden secrets out in your own way, which is quite excellent given how complicated it gets to maintain the flow, when you divide into his and her stories.

Thanks for the PMs, Looking forward to read more on this.

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Reem

@TRND86

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

This is such a wonderful story. They gave up so much for each other and still crave for one another. I like this Khushi; strong yet vulnerable and married in her heart & soul. That is what you call true love. I hope they meet soon. For the first time, I am going to say that Mami rocks! 😎 Looking forward to the next update.

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

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Good morning kalyaani,

how r u?

Oh… payal… a true friend…

So my guess was right. It is all because of shyam. I guess payal is a bit rude to kushi. But she is right in her way. And so Kushi. its sad that she is not willing to go back… she is not ready to fact the reality. she strongly believes that she is correct.

Very sad part. Continue soon. Would like to read how the problem will get solved.

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago