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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

hey ... how did i miss this SS.? my be because i dont visit IPKND fourm... the SS is beautiful, unique... the title is very interesting...the title "It Was always you" saying by whom? arnav or kushi? kushi has gone though so much... u did perfect job with the characters... this one is quite different from "POL". manorama is a strong lady... is manorama trying to set kushi with arnav? if yes...why do i feel like manorama knows about kushi and arnav relationship (i feel it was arnav with whom kushi had been in relationship)? now onwards i m going to demand 2 fictions updates every time do continue soon.i like this manorama than the one from serial... your MN is strong, good at heart, confident ... and kushi is a doc... thats cool... do u know i love the profession... i respect them... they give us life... hope to make my daughter as one...

"Love is the only kind of fire which is never covered by insurance" - Anonymous

so true...nice quote...

waiting to read "his story..."

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raina

@Girlabouttown

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

very interesting. I bet Arnav is not that Architect guy.

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Deepa

@harshdb

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

u know...

the sentence: "I know not" - is kind of different from the regular writing style... impressed with the style of language which u use...

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

start...

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

amazing..!!
.are both women talking about the same man 😕

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Kalyaani I'm so siked for this!!!

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

NICE

I THINK THE ARCHITECT IS ARNAV???????

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Excellent k. Very very interesting.

Oh no, one more story to wait for updates. 😛

Will this also get updated on nov 5th only.

So what should be my wishes for you, may your pen have enough ink or may all your bread and butter and jam work get taken care of magically or you get the most efficient set of assistants who leave you with enough time to ... 😆

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Excellent k. Very very interesting.

Oh no, one more story to wait for updates. 😛

Will this also get updated on nov 5th only.

So what should be my wishes for you, may your pen have enough ink or may all your bread and butter and jam work get taken care of magically or you get the most efficient set of assistants who leave you with enough time to ... 😆

What a lovely comment, U. I second that and hope we get the update we so want soon. How're you? Been ages, hasn't it?

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
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K it's one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read on this forum.

Right at the start where Khushi wonders why a particular patient visits her in spite of being healthy got me hooked.

Why have you made Manorama a Mallik instead of a Raizada?

What went wrong between Manorama's family and her brother-in-laws kids (Arnav and Anjali???)?

If Khushi and Manorama are talking about Arnav then your Arnav is an architect... hmm... What could be about Anjali that would make Khushi and Arnav separate?

Khushi said she changed her name to feel more married but she calls herself Dr. Gupta. Why?

Why is Manorama so adamant that Khushi is the right girl for Arnav? She's so sure about it that she's ready to propose on his behalf? Well she thinks of him as a son but does he think of her as a mother?

You were planning to write drama and ended up penning a thriller. So many questions. Need i say update soon?