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Satarupa

@..Satarupa..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Awesome update 👏

Loved it...

Waing for the next part...

thanks for the pm... 😃

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Awww😛

Such a sweet update!!

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Awww...lovely updt...thnx for d PM dear

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Wow!!! Awsome update manu
hayeee i seriously loved it alot

da way you xplain shakti's mood swings nausea
n da way kunwar take care of her
dat sooo sweet

n i love dat game "i love it wen"
hayeee dis is sooo romantic serious

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

To start with,
"Mere bina" lines...
Gosh i cant describe how much i love them... My all the fav <3

And the Update was awesome...

Loved the way when you described the feeling's of a would be mother !
Poor shakti ! Vomting/Nausea all the time... But that the start for a beautiful thing ! :D
Shakti's POV was described so so beautifully !
All the feeling's ! That was perfect !

Then Kunwar's caring and supportive nature... Awww... :-)
You made me fall in love with him all over again ! <3
And the "I love it when..." was lovely ! Too good !
They play this game whenever the other one is not feeling good or had a bad day... Aww... The perfect man and wife :-)
I loved all the lines of the "I love it when.."'s para ! Specially the first kicking out of bed one 😆 and the line line... "Nothing makes me love you more than the thought of you carrying our child, Shakti." ❤️

It was indeed awesome !
Update soon :-)

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Anyaa_KriYaansh

@Anyaa_KriYaansh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Aaawww!!!
thiss updatee f urs was sugaarr!!
totallyyy cuteee!!:)
luvv it dearr!!
i'm sorry i commented dizz late!!:S
thnxx for Pm !!:-)

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

awesome ff...
luved it...kuwar is such a sweetheart
plshh update next part...
and do pm me

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya
superb
kunwar kitna caring hai
so sweet
loved it

Thank You 😊

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: d3_rox
Awesome.
Amazing...
Kuwar is such a sweetheart..
He is sooo caring...
Really loved the update ...
Plzzz update soon..
Thanx 4 the PM!!!!

-Tehmina!!

Thank You Tehmina 😊