do dil ek jaan-taarey❤️(part 9 updated)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome dear🤗...update soon !!

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poulomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey guys sorry 4 being sooo late.studies u know.but lets start the 4th part wthout much bakbak.

part 4:

rey at the fire escape sitting on the stairs.

rey to himself:taani nay meri bajay se itna sabkuch saha or maine kya kiya????hamesha uski feelings ko hurt kiya????kitna galat samjha tha maine use.

rey was basically trying to fight with his mixed feelings of happiness and anger(more on himself than shivam).then he hit his fist hard on the wall.his eyes were teary-he was crying.he remembered all the moments he had spent with taani.

rey:main taani ke bare main itna kyun sochta hun.pata nehi kyun but she has really become my weakpoint

suddenly he say taani infront of him.

he thought:taani yeah pe kaise aa gayi???

then he spoke sofly:taani i am sorry mere liye tumne itna...

and he touched her cheeks.but she was not there.he was imagining!!!!

rey:oh gosh!!!!main to pagal ho jaunga.yeah kya ho raha hai mere sath?????

suddenly he seemed to be surrounded by taanis all calling out his name.

rey:yeah kya ho gaya hain mujhe???pehli baar kisike liye aisa feel kar raha hun.kahi mujhe taani se pyaar to nehi ho gaya.nehi rey yeah tu kaisi bate kar raha hai.o swayam ki behen hain.

then he said:per rey aisa kahi pe likha to nehi hain na ki apni bst frnd ki behen se kisiko kabhi pyaar nehi ho sakta.

rey:tyo mr reyaansh singhania finally tume pyaar ho gaya.jis lerki ki feelings ko tumne itna hurt kiya tha usise tume pyaar ho gaya.haar geye na tum uske paas.taani ka mere liye itna concern,pyaar finally jit gaya.per pehli bar haarke itna accha lag raha hain.

rey stood up:tyo ms taani shekhawat aj yeah mr reyaansh singhania ka dil sirf aoke ke liye dharakta hain or yeah bat main aj apko batake hi rahunga.o bhi apne tarike se bas krishnaji meri madat karna and he smiled sweetly(u know rey's killer smile)...

guys i hope u like this part.the next prt is the confession and ofcouse chipku scenes

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Zuna4Taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hooo hooo miss thani shekawath reyansh singhania comng for uuu👏...heee heee😊😊😊 ...i really realy really loved this😛...hand shakes poulomi...keep it up.👏.

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dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome update.

Rey ka dil sirf taani ke liye hi dharkta hai..

continue writing and update soon.

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Shivangi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

hey poulomi.. read all ur parts.. They were awesome.. keep writing.. continue soon.. n could you please pm me when u update?

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annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wowowwowo its aweosome w8ing fr confession nd plz pm me...

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-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awesome update... Plzz update... N plzz pm me...!!!

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...Tansy...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Gud job poulomi
Keep writing :)

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raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hi u write soo good

its just beautifull...

its being 9 day long time post ur nxt prt plzzz i am waiting

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poulomi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

hey guys sorry sorry sorry sooo sorry 4 being late.actually studies u know and thnks 4 the positive response and i feel like killing the cvs for not giving us a proper taarey track.btw lets strt.

part 5:

rey was at his house thinking abt taani as usual."soch to liya he ki use propose karunga per kaise????aise hi to nehi bol sakta na usko she has done so much 4 me"then rey got an idea.he called taani.

tayaam's house:

taani was lost in thoughts of rey."sab kuch bata to diya maine pata nehi rey kya soch rahe honge o gussa to nehi hey???main bhi na o kyun gussa honge.main unki lagti kaun hoon???"then she thinks"kach main unki kuch laghti jaise mere liye o to mere sabh kuch lagte hain per o to sirf kria se pyaar karte hain"and tears filled her eyes thinking of tht rejection day.suddenly her phn rang and her thoughts were broken.she picked up the phn without looking.

taani:hello

rey:taani mujhe tumse kuch bat karni hain abhi?

taani(shocked):boliye

rey:aise nehi.tum mere ghar pe aa jao

taani:per

rey(in a stern voice):bas aa jao

taani: ha per main bhai ko kya batau

rey:kuch bhi or akele ana

taani:ok

soo tanni got ready and went downstains.

taani:bhai main jara bahar ja rahi hoon

swayam:bahar kaha?

taani:oo rey ke ghar.o o actually ojab mere gs the tab unone kuch presentations banaye the.to ab mujhe unko kal vp sir ko dikhana hain.but usse pehle unke ghar jake mujhe acche se samajhna hoga presentations ko.

swayam:to chalo main vi tumare sath chalta hoon main vi usse mil lunga.aise bhi aj college main o kisiko na batake hi chala gaya

taani:nehi nehi nehi nehi matlab ki iswaqt sharon bahabi ki call aati hain to app waha jaenga to app unse nehi bat kar paenge.ap rey se kal mil lena.

swayam:ha iye bhi thik hain.thik hain tum jaon.

at rey's house

rey was just moving to and fro

rey:itna time kyun lag raha hain use

suddenly the door bell rang.

rey:taani...

rey opened the door

rey"to finally aap aa gaye ander aiye"

taani:ha per apne mujhe kyun bulaya

and she went inside.she saw mesmerised.the whole house was decorated with beautiful roses.