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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

loved it!!!!

😔<- this was me when i started reading...and he said he had no home

😭<- this was me during the dinner scene

🤣<- this was me by the end of it!!!

what transition of emotions in such a short update!!!

you are an awesome writer!!!

🤗 this is for you!!!❤️

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awww. That was such a cute OS. Not crappy at all. Loved it and loved the bond between ARHI and Arnav and his kids. Waiting to read more.

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

aww yaar.! it was so beautiful...!!!

literally..!! it really touched ma heart genuinely..!!

at that point when arnav said 'come home' it just melted ma heart.

though at the start i was like did they got seperated or what but finally glad

the way it ended. it was sooo lovely.! wish our show can also arrange some of these

lovely scenes. excellent work.! 👏

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awsum

1st i thought khushi died😭 but she vent to her maika n i vas vry happy😃

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

great OS
liked it so much

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Though the beginning was abit scary but the parts after was just too cute that I couldn't stop smiling

Thanks

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

i don't like it - i loove it :D

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I thought Khushi had died or something. Thank god for you Zehra!! :D

I was like... Omg she is dead... Omg I bet he had something to do with her death, omg Shashi hates him because of what may have happened...

And then you turned the tables on me... :D and I loved that. :D

I'd like a dedication, Zehra ji. #ShamelessV 😆

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

It was so cute! I thought Khushi died or left him! Phew! Now I'm s bit tension free

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Awww cute update i got frightened in the begining but lolz u always write in a way that what actually happens is always totally opposite to what we think... Awesome ... U r lucky to have such sweet frnds n sister for Samiya she is really sweet no doubt

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