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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awww that was real cute couldnt even stay away from her for 15 hours loved it

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

listen, lady, and listen good.
your stories are not crappy.
if your story brings a smile to even one of your reader's face, ...no.. a smile, a tear, a sped up dhadkan.. your story serves its purpose.

now stop saying your story is crappy, dont mock the talent that God gave you.
accept that some will like it, some will not, and thats the way of life.
please, dont write in your post that you think so low of your talent.

btw, happy eid!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

loved the sweet khushi and the crazy arnav.. so sweet OS.

you gave dialogues and plotlines to the supporting cast!!
anjali being the loving sister, bua-ji so perfectly in character, saying tanik and all..
amma- babuji getting senti about not having a grandchild born at khushi's maika.. awww.

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Viviann

@Viviann

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Very nice os! Keep writing ;-)

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

lol i was at first damn scared!!!
then awww very cute!!lol and i loved that 3 kids during Kanya puja thing! hahahahahah i was laughing so hard when i watched her saying that line!!
one of my favorites of hers!! 🤣

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Cute OS...loved it!!

When I read the start...I got scared..

But here Arnav was missing her only after a day...Sweet..

Nicely written...thanks for the pm...

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112642

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Arnav has really and truly fallen for Khushi!😆 bechara ghar jamai ban gaya risking himself to hordes of maasis', aunties and ofcourse Garima and buaji fawning all over him..

And Arav--> ❤️ and Muskaan❤️❤️. You know what, I have always thought, if ArHi ever had a girl, their girl should be named Muskaan.. what else could they name of a woman, named Khushi?

As usual, I loved this OS to bits. Aap ke baare mein kya bolun? 👏 As I always say, it always your writing style, that makes me come back for more!

👍🏼

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I thought this was cute!!!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

When I started reading it, I thought something had happened to Khushi and their kids but thank God she was just away coz she is pregnant.. Arnav cant stay away from her, how cute is that.. Loved it Zehra..

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Are u kidding? Adorableee OS!!! First I thought she left him.. then shes dead.. but awww shes at her maayka.. n shes pregnant for the 3RD time!! hahaa blesss!!! N i think 3 kids is Enough!!!! I loooved it wen he said he wud stay there.. so cuteee!!! Greaaat OS!! :)

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