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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#861

woahhh...the 100th update...awesome..it was just too good..very well written..indeed a very good going..please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#862

that was sweet

loved it

curious on what will happen now

good luck for your exams and thanks for updating 😊

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: Leafs

I guess she could tell that behind these bold CAPITAL red letters lives just a little pussy cat 😆

you are a very sweet, warm hearted & wise prson just like naniji👍🏼 & we luv you🤗

Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: arushi_fan

ouh my daughter knows it when i am hurrying on winding up things .. she goes ' i know.. i know (dragging) its time for ur Khushi's serial!!'
she calls it Khushi's serial!! 😛

My sons call it "kushi ka drama" but my hubby argues with them always, saying :"Its not kushi ka drama, its AMMA ka drama!" 😡(meaning i m always creating a drama to watch it)

Hello hi byebye

Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#865

1st m0re than s0rry f0r this super late c0mment.
Well 0f c0urse it was a 100th chapter s0 it had t0 have a leap and yes, it was a leap in its 0wn way. I must c0ngratulate y0u mainly because y0u have 100 chapters in y0ur name, hatred d0minates y0ur chapters, alm0st all y0ur secrets are still hidden, n0t t0 menti0n still n0t a single kiss(I had expected that here, y0u kn0w make warm faster kind :D) sill despite all this y0u have survived and thrived even. I l0ve what y0u write and d0nt really get a feel that its 100 already, thank heavens there's still a l0ng way t0 g0!!

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Dear Aquiline & comrads in circle,

yesterday was a great fun day with you all lovelies, full of celebration, excitement, thrill , fireworks & delicious snacks .Celebrating The Century ,really felt like celebrating Disneyland Paris 15th birthday(i m a theme park fan, so it was a big celebration for me)

Luv you all & so lucky to have find friends like you!

Oops but shyam was very angry to see us celebrating & is planning to creep soon

Edited by kushipugly - 13 years ago

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rrd29

@rrd29

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Heartiest Congratulations for your century...
Brilliant writing... and I loved your characterizations...
Please include me in your PM list
Waiting for your next update

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A_Soul

@A_Soul

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: shass
Dear Lin..am still not in da mood to write..my mind's still fogged wth da happy celebrations..bt a promise is a promise! bt i'll put a disclaimer on dis post..if i hvnt understood nethg clearly..its all your fault😆.. dis vry chp cud not b seen individually,it cn only b understood whn looked at,wth previous 2-3 chps.. so i may sound repetitive,at places..

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN N CONCEIVED👏👏.. hw well,i hv perceived it,is a different story,tho..

Khushi,is one amazing girl..
''the good stars met in ur horoscope... .
...made you of spirit and fire and dew''
- ---Browning [Anne of the Green Gables].😉

appt quote...

she's evrythg dat mks lyf worth living..she mks ppl smile..spreads happiness evrywhr she goes.. bt isnt aware of wht Effects she has on othrs,or may b to wht extent.. dats da essence of hr innocence.. she believes in happiness,is not touched by da coldness n wickedness of da world..dats da essence of hr purity.. she appears lyk a crystal doll,bt is strong,persistent n enduring..dats da essence of hr beauty.. she fights n survives.. dats da strength of hr character.. the QUALITIES of the KEY.. this is wht lord Arnav sees!! ..

You have summerised her character so well shass!! Love it and completely agree!!

The best characteristic of her that i love is 'frighten yet she fights'!!

He saw it frm da vry 1st day..
she fell in his arms..he saw it..its jst a coincidence,doesnt believe..punishes her..
she ran aftr hm during da village festival..he saw it..his ego gets bruised... punishes her..
she engaged in a sword fight..he saw it...gets amused n challenged..punishes her..
she took da challenge of getting painted..he saw it...strtd to get affected..punishes her..
she got lost in da forest..he saw it..got concerned..punishes her..
she ddnt gv up in da dungeon..he saw it..wnts to put an end to it,lets ego rule agn..punishes hr..

Ahhh!!! Now this is what makes me adore you!!

Are you guys (u and hoopoe both) actually recall all this while reading, or guys goes back and read thing again... actually u know what i thing.. you both actually taking it as homework and making your special notes (with actual note and pen, i mean)...

I MEAN HOW YOU GUYS ARE SUMMARIZE, RECALL THINGS SO BEAUTIFULLY THAT TO SPOT ON TIME!!

WOW... JUST WOW!!!

dis is wht i believe he fears...dis is da cause of attraction!! he doesnt hate hr..he hates dat she mks him vulnerable n weak..may be,he has put a fight strong n long enuf,in da past few years,dat lead him ,to believe dat he cudnt get affected by anothr soul ne more..bt she came n she unintentionally,made him discover sumthg he thought ddnt exist or he felt he hd buried fr good,fr sum reason..dats why he keep pushing hr,i thnk he feels threatened by hr.. yes anothr possibility cud b dat he knws he may harm hr in sum way,n he tries to push hr so dat she keeps away.. only time vl tell.. lord Arnav is both..a man..a beast.. sumtmz da beast wins,sumtmz da man.. dis chp ws abt da man in him.. hw his guilt n concern fr hr, compels him to undo whts alrdy been done! ..hw he sees hr almost lifeless,n panics..hw he balances hr head gently wth so much care..hw he frets ovr whr to put hr in his room..hw he feels he cudnt let ne1 handle hr bt him alone [ok,i knw u'll b frowning at dis one..bt a part of me believes dat,n not dat he cudnt call ne1 fr help,bcoz he ws scared of wht they'll say??..coz he clearly doesnt care abt da world whn it cums to his beliefs n decisions].. hw he tends to hr injury.. hw he tks her into his world to gv her da warmth n care she needed.. n hw he strts to lose himself to her!! ..to madness!! .. n probably,in so many years,finally da war b/w da man n da beast strts to settle down..da man in him feels peace n harmony in a long long time.. i bet he'll nvr forget it.. he vl realize frm dis day onwrds,how precious she is fr him..
people may blame him fr nethg dear Lin n u may criticize my judgement too.. bt i dnt knw if u did it intentionally or unintentionally..

i loved dis lordy lord..there ws a certain innocence abt him..certain vulnerability..certain beauty.. i saw a glimpse of it..n i LOVED it !!

ME 2...

PS;

loved dat u chose hypothermia as da reason..
i normally dnt undrstnd symbols..bt i actually did in dis chp..vl leave it fr da othr twosomes.. vl only highlight thm here..
*him luking in the mirror..
read the whole scene again.. and you will be able to connect it to the dream he saw last night... and u will get the catch

*him laying hr on rug n thn on his bed..

I dont see any symbol over here... hoopoe do you?

the only thing here its his ego.. his ego not allowing (his) beggar lay on his bed... so 1st he place her on rug... n then he has no choise if he want to heat her up... so obvious choice was bed!

you know wht best part i found here in this scene... he doesnt wanna lay her on surface as it will be cold for her... yet not on bed as its HIS bed...

wow two different feelings at the same time... LIN is simply superb to showcase such confused contradict feeling!

*him closing da dungeon door yet still stepping in darkness..

hmmm... i have raised the same question in my post.. and though my other twosome will answer... but seems we both r on same boat dear... let c what awesome onesome has to say now...!

when i thought again it may says that... though he has closed the dungeon door, yet there are many other darkness which he still have to fight with.. whose doors are still to close... or actually still to open.. to let the light (khushi) come in and desolve the darkness...

make sence??

* "Like one he was not supposed to touch..""

Oh ya... this one is i missed to mention... indicating to the one you just mentioned... she get harmed if he touches her... wats say?

*may be..da cleaning wound too..
No idea boss...!!! Seems i have not paid enough attention..

loved his conversation wth hmslf.. i laughed aloud at it coz i feel it ws mere justification fr his deeds n concern n guilt..
PPS; HP abt my chocolates..dat ws such a diplomatic answr..u clever girl !! *shakes head*..

Shass... I missed the long long posts tooo... and you know the reason of it very well...

And this time i hv not lost myself in it and so not you my dear... love you buddy!!

Edited by A_Soul - 13 years ago

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#869

CONGRATULATIONS

*sneaks inside the inn* Gaspp!!! OMG party is still on... people are drenched in chocolate, coffee and and vodkaaa stufff... I missed this happening party.

Aquiline congrats buddy!!!!! We have a long way to go.

I'm off to drink some in the glee of the occasion ...

Wow the 100th chapter... !!!!!

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

Beautiful... thats all i can say about this chapter...

Behind all their hatred words for each other there exist two beautiful innocent souls yearning to love and to be loved unknown to the fact that they are already connected through a special eternal bond.

Loved the way how you connected Lord Arnav's earlier dream with the reality. Whatever may be the actual hidden meaning of the dream, but i believe that dream to be the caution provided by his subconscious mind about khushi's distressing condition.

"Is any one there?" she called out hopefully. She held the bars and cried out, "Please, someone! Anyone!"

Many distances above her, her condemner tossed about in his bed.

The dark lady had already vanished, but in her place, lay a lifeless young girl.

However, he was not looking at her face but at her neck for, reposing on her unmoving chest, was a key, hung from the chain around her neck.

"Kushi!" he jerked awake, breaking into a sweat, and stared into the darkness.

She called out for help and he dreamed of a girl in deadly pallor. I think its the special connection of their hearts that made him realise that the girl is khushi even without looking at her face. He somehow realised that she is the one who holds the key to open the lock of his cold heart.

He runs for the rescue of his damsel in distress and bring her back safely to his personal chamber.

"I hate you, Kushi," he muttered, "But I cannot let you die and win this war."

"Heat, you stupid blood vessels!" he grunted into her hair

"It's a worthless gown any way and I can't tear any of my rich shirts to clean your blood,"

"Warm up, girl," he grumbled, "I can't let you stay here the whole night."

I was smiling when i read his constant bickering with her even in her unconscious state. He loves arguing with her... only with her.

At the same time he was worried and concerned for her health... he comforts her in his bed, attend to her wound, provides warmth from his own body... such a sweet love and hate relation they share...

And sometime in his waiting and warming, he slipped into an eased slumber after a long time in his life, surrounded by the scent of her innocence and with the lullaby of her tender heartbeat against his chest, dousing him into the calm of dreamless sleep.

Such a serene vision... two troubled and distressed souls finding comfort in each others arms and sleeping peacefully with moonlight streaming over them from the open window... a beautiful picture to be preserved forever... i felt content.

Edited by hoopoe - 13 years ago