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tina_1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

awesome story...sendin ya a buddy req

plzz pm me whenever u updt

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upatel89

@upatel89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

This story has been very fun to read, drama and humor all in one!

I would also like to thank you for also including an english version, THANK YOU!

I look forward to reading more 😊

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

chap 22 scene 2
awesome part...
poor Arnav hes too irritated...
and Khushi has no idea about this...
very good now shes going to RM...
Arnav is not gonna leave this chance...
so painting hmm will Arnav come to know about the cameras?
hope he will...
cont soon dear...

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Your story is just brilliant! So intense, dramatic and the best part- no loopholes. There was a closure to Dadi, I m sure Shyamu's gonna get his comeuppance soon. Although to be honest, I m not sure if my heart could ve handled it if he had actually left her at the mandap. I am a little weird like that, I can read angst, but I cant watch it :P Great job! Please update soon :)

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Look who's back...ME!!(yaad hai na!)😆

Yes i know ur very depressed regarding the whole Barun fiasco, well whos not!
So il write bada comments for you!😃

First of all i can see new readers joining...soo damn happy for you!
Like Seema said "May ur tribe increase!"👍🏼

And Smita, yes im gonna kick ur ass!! :p

Chapter 19.3 :

Awww...Awww...i couldnt stop awwing.😆<3
Loved how she remembered all those memories and how in return he did too!!

And i soo can imagine Buajis booming voice! And i just loved her dialogues!

Roses!! Knew it...so damn sweet of him...awww...i can so visualise the whole damn house in red roses...and i loved Khushi reaction to it. She was just mesmerised with the whole thing!<3<3
Arnav, if Khushi isnt coming with you, can u please take me with you!😳😉
Song thats in my head now "Dil garden garden ho gaya!"😆

I really like how u potrayed the jeejaji-saali relationship, really sweet!
And he transfrd the property in Buajis name!! 😲 Dude i love you!<3 :)
Can he get more caring, romantic and what not!!

And yess!! The loophole of Mr and Mrs Creepwa! Thank you!

And its that sari isnt it??

Chapter 20.1 :

Okay..Can i just give Arnav the biggest of the biggest Jhappi!!🤗<3<3
How is it that every single time u write i fall for him!<3

Telepathy i tell you between the lovers, both were thinking the same exact thing!
Aww...as usual Arnav calls and stutters...really sweet scene!

Also like how Mami was super excited and has actually started saying Payal quite a few times now. And i loved Akash's stance on Payal! :)

Loved how he asks abt Shashis health and he already made all the arrangements! Aww...Ek dam damad jaisan kaam kiya isne...and i liked the fact how Garima understood him.

"To iska matlab, uss raat hum tum ko tumrehi ghar se bahar nikale rahe?"🤣
True that!
LOL...Arnav is soo damn scared of the Gupta ladies!😆

"Yii Sankeswari aur woo Sankeswar bilkul ek dooje ke liye hi bane hain" Well said! :D

To be continued...😉

Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 12 years ago

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Chapter 20.2 :

Arggh...here comes the creep! :/

Why? He just makes me sick with all the fake lovey-dovey talks!
And what!?? Did he just accept he flirted with Khushi! 😲 And she forgave him! :/
Is Anjali ka kya karoon yaar...still cant blieve there is a person as dumb as her.
See Khushi is naive, Anjali is just dumb! :/ Please isse ismein thoda dimaag dena.
Though happy in a way...cause after all hes our dear cupid! :D

Looks like hes using his dear brain, just want to see till when! And umm those papers Lucknow property?

And i want to give a big hug to you for giving us such a big Payash scene!🤗
And i just loved it<3 Just love the bond between them. So strong.
I still cant comprehend why the Cvs failed to develop these characters! :./ Theyv got so much to them.

Love how understanding they r of each other :) And how they just spoke abt the lost couple and shared their fears and i like how Akash calmed her down and supported both way! :)

"Ek time tha jab Bhai aur Khushiji ne humari love story ko aage badhane mein help ki tha. Shayad, ab hamari baari hai" <3<3:)

And its the saree!! :D:D

Chapter 20.3 :

Itna lamba update! Agar yeh itna lamba hai toh ME kitna bada hoga!😲

Loved it...Almost had tears seeing Khushis state!
Thank god she found what was happening around her. Zor ka jhatka toh deinitely laga!

The part where NK was saying "She loves, she loves me not" reminded of a scene of a movie or a tv show! Dont remember which though!
Aww...such a sweet talk bet NK-Khushi! Hes already committed even before dating! LOL!

I seriously adore the sister bond between them<3
It just tugged my heart the way Khushi silently slept on Payals lap and just let out her confusion abt what he was doing!
And the way she cried...Khushi...hope u listen to Payals advice. It will make things lot easier for you!

To be continued...

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Haww...Ramanchi ki tune Smita!
You wrote an ME when i wasnt there! :/

Mahaepisode :

First of all thanks for explaining sargi. Always wondered what it was since i saw K3G!😛
Oyee...Vrat Katah bhi batati yaara! :p

I just love the way u explain stuff, u knw abt decorations and stuff. I can totally visualise the whole thing! :)

Shyamji my foot! :/ Usse sachi mein nahi pata abt the bank thingy! :S

And NK is actually stalking Nandini!! Oh and when he gave ger flowers i really thought she would freak out! But she smiled! :)
Hassi toh phassi! ;)

Yes..!! Payash acting as cupid!! :D
Good goin Akash! Smart play...so subtle and yet effective! :)

You know what i loved about the karvachatuth of Garima and Shashi that he was able to move his hands and feed her!<3
Seeing all that...it must just hurt Khushi like hell. It was supposed to be her day as well if things had gone right...
She fasted for Sallu!🤣 Hadh ho gai yaar! Ohk thank god not for him but for Price Charming!

Awww...God i love her...not only she prayed for his long life but wished to add hers too!!<3 After everything that has happened...

Yeh lo...der aaye durust aayee...When Arnav is here why fear! :D
"Khushi" just the way he says it! *swoons and twirls*

"I think karwachauth ki vidhi abhi poori nahin hui hai" <3:)

The whole thing from where he jumps in walks to her holds her pallu, see through it, the staring contest...Dhak Dhak Dhak...<3

Finally the damn confrontation between them waited for long and what a wait it was!!

"Main tumhe kabhi akela nahin chodunga Khushi,kyunki tumhare bina meri saansein hi ruk jayengi,"kyunki, tumhare bina meri dhadkane band ho jayengi,..tumhare bina main jee nahin paunga, Khushi. Because I love you..."<3<3<3<3:D:D:*
Need i say anything! *Stops her tears of happiness...

Maa ke payals!!<3 *And the tears start again...

And woaaah!! What a way to end this...a proposal! :O
This was just fantastic Smita! :D Loved every bit of it!!👏

PS - Smita, how the hell did u survive after watching the ME and reading this?! :O ;)

Still to be continued...😆

Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 12 years ago

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Chapter 22.1 :

And the dude gets thrown out of the house again!😆
I tell you only these Gupta women can treat him this way! Just loved how she pushed and shoved until he fell out of the damn window!!

"aur... hum bhi... I love you too Arnavji!<3:)
Aahhh..shes thinking is she!??

I just love how u potray relationships! Anjali-Arnav...small yet touching!
And rightly said the baby steps that he took worked its magic! :)

And now Khushi-Payal! :)
And the plan worked! Awesome cupids they are!:D

Chapter 22.2 :

For the past few updates iv been noticing, since they arrived in Dilli too many flashback thoughts!:)

Bechara frustrated! Well who wouldnt be...propose kia and this is the reaction!
"Itni mehnat karni pad rahi hai, tumse ek haan sunne ke liye Khushi Kumari Gupta!" True that! :D

Iv eaten in the parathe vaali gali...its quite good. Diff experience :)

Hum Arnavji ko chahte hain<3*Yay!
I tell you there is no need of the creep to be acting as a cupid when Payash is there!:D
Yay! Khushi is going to say yes...well unless u do ramanchi! :/

Ohk..so Anjali really doesnt knw what her creep of a husband is upto. Chalo usne apna dimaag use kia and atleast she froze it!!
Damnit Arnav, poochleta to kya ho jaata tera!

Oh crap...Anjali experiencing pain and top of it painters are here...matlab creep is here! :/

PS - Hope i made up for not being around! :)

PPS - Will be disappearing again, will let u knw when! :p

Muaaahh!

The End...😆

Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 12 years ago