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Posted: 12 years ago
Are we going to get a "Jadoo Hain Nasha Hain" from you? Because on 2nd of November 2011, that magical episode had created history. And this year, it is just as bad as it was epic last year. So my dear? What have you got hidden in your designer sleeves? I am dying to know!
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Posted: 12 years ago

ayooo a new twist in the making?? Just when khushi is turning a corner?? Poor Arnav will not have the strength to cope with it, Smitzy.. please be a bit gentle with him...cant wait for the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: N.Mussarrat

Are we going to get a "Jadoo Hain Nasha Hain" from you? Because on 2nd of November 2011, that magical episode had created history. And this year, it is just as bad as it was epic last year. So my dear? What have you got hidden in your designer sleeves? I am dying to know!



omg lady!! you're doing a HUGE comparision.. me a humble soul can't ever recreate something like that 😳 but but but.. I do promise that it will be worth the wait and it will be more emotional than my usual standards 😊 so stay tuned!

PS - designer sleeves? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 awsome update 👏 👏 👏 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's nice to see each character playing its part and not just the main lead are focused. Any story's success is all about the setting and execution. This IPK is a perfect world scenario, where writer is very sane! :-D

Waitin to see how Akash and Payal are going to bring these 2 stubborn heads together.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy

Bahut koshish ki aapse nafrat karne ke humne, Arnavji. Par, ab to aapse... nafrat karne ki bhi himmat nahin hoti... Nahin hoti... And Khushi's knees buckle, her feelings finally overwhelming her as she sinks to the ground and arches her back low to bury her face in her hands.

Lovely update! Above part was so emotional... so moving! The build up and description of the scene was perfect... I could feel the way Khushi went into a daze and walked outside and then just couldn't hold it in anymore! Very intense! Moved me to tears.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update was good as always. but more than that i loved the suggestions you gave to 4Lions. I hope they pick your story. 👍🏼 this is a strange situation wherein a PH with paid writers on staff is canvassing for ideas. but hey, never know when an opportunity presents itself. This could be your big break into screenplay writing AND getting paid for it.

Coming to this update. Khushi is slowly moving towards acknowledging her feelings and more importantly his efforts at redemption. that is good.
Loved your attention to detail in terms of Garima addressing her as Koosie. Love Buaji. Always. Even when she kicks arnav out of the house.😆

NK Khushi antics causing angst for Anjali. Loved her quick reaction when Arnav showed up.

The sisters conversation brought back memories of old IPK with Khushi Payal bonding. Something that they have forgotten once Payal got married. The scene you described was poignant, yet strong. a dignity about it. tears are there but it was not maudlin 👏👏👏

More power to you, Smita. Jeetey raho! Jeettey raho!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smitzy

What an update. I love her confusion, indecisiveness and the fact that she just cannot hate him no matter how hard she tries to do so. All so real, so needed...

What next..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Another great update. The story is building and layering nicely. Khushi is beginning to see truth and Payal is helping her. Loved the two sisters close like this. NK is totally nuts but I love him just like he is. Mamiji does not like not knowing what is going on in RM; she is just such a fun character.
So now, Smitzy, we are waiting and ready for our Arshi to meet. What have you got up your sleeve that will be outstanding???
Thank you for update and pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved that - you are building the suspense & I know that when they meet - its going to me one epic monumentous event especially as it will be written by you

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