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Originally posted by: simi23

''part 5''
in morning;
khushi was busy in kichen and making breakfast.suddenly door bell rang.khushi said to buaji that she will open the door.khushi opened the door.she was shocked to see arnav on the door
khushi:app yahan...hum ne appse khaha tha na ke yahan mat ana.pher app...
arnav:mein apna haq lene aya hoon.
khushi:hum pher iss baat per bahus karna nahi chate.plz app jain yahan se.[she was about to shut the doorbut she heard another voice.
lawyer:hello mrs.raizada...
khushi:namaste...app ko kiss se milna hain.
lawyer:i m a lawyer and im here to inform u about the court notification.
khushi:notification...kesa notification.
khushi:maaf kijiye.indaar aaien.
lawyer came in and arnav followed him.khushi glared at arnav and he smirked.
lawyer:mrs.raizada ap apne pati se alag reh rahi hain.aur apke pati ki request per court ki taraf se ye notification jari kiya gaya hain.
khushi:hum inke saath rhena nahi shate.
lawyer:mrs .raizada ap pregnant hain.
khushi:ji...
lawyer:court ki taraf order hain ke bache ki delivery tak ap ko apne pati ke saath rhena hoga.isse phele app alag nahi ho sakte.
khushi:hum nahi reh sakte...
lawyer:sorry mrs.raizada.ye court ka order.hum iss mein kuch nahi ker sakte.ap ko jana hoga.
khushi looked at arnav angerly.and arnav passed a smile.
khushi:agar hum nahi gae to...
lawyer:to delivery ke baad humesha ke liye bache ki custody father ko dedi jai gi.
khushi felt like there is no earth beneath her feet.coz baby is her last hope of life and she did not want to lose her last hope.lawyer went.
arnav:khushi pack ur clothes.
khushi:humein yaqeen nahi ho raha ke app humare saath essa karein ge.
arnav:apni wife or bache ko wapis lane ke liye mein kuch bhi ker sakta hoon.
khushi started crying.arnav was also not able to see her in pain but he wanted them back.he had to do.
arnav to himself:sorry khushi.i promise mein sub kuch theek ker doon ga.plz trust me.i will clear all misunderstanding b/w us.i cann't live without u.khushi packed her clothes and went with arnav.
...
at rm
everyone was very happy coz khushi was coming back home.nani,anjali,nk was doing preparations.even mami was very happy except of sheetal..there was double celebrations.one for khushi coming and other for arnav and khushi small baby.after sometime arnav and khushi came.anjali did arti.
anjali:welcome back home.
nani:chote and khushi bitiya apko bhot mubarak ho.
anjali:ab to hum bua banne wale hain.
nk:or mein bhaloo
anjali laughed:nk bahi bahloo nahi chachu.everyone laughed.
arnav picked khushi up and went to their room.old caring husband was back.this time with more care.khushi was still upset.but arnav was in relief coz khushi was near him.
at morning in dining table
khushi was serving food to everyone arnav came .when he saw that he hold khushi's hand.
khushi:ye kiya ker rahehein app.
arnav made her sit and said:tum phele breakfast karo.itni dher tak bhokha rehna theek nahi.
khushi tried to get up but he hold more tightly.
arnav:nahi khushi phele khena.
nani:bitiya chote bikul theek khe rahe hain.
arnav fed khushi food.and left for office.everyone saw a loving and caring husband for khushi and a father for his child in these days.
...
after one and half month
sheetal was now fedup with that.co z her plan was failed.everytime when she tried to create rift b/w arshi.they became more closer.
sheetal:now enough is enough.i have to do something.
suddenly a plan came to her mind.evil smirk appeared on her face.
sheetal:haan khushi ka bacha hi mere plan ka niya mohra hain.
sheetal:jab bacha hi nahi rahe ga to khushi bhi iss ghar mein nahi rahe gi.
she planed to kill arnav and khushi baby.
on the otherside
khushi was in her room and keeping the clothes in the cupboard.arnav came to the room.
arnav:khushi tum ne khana nahi khaya na.
khushi:nahi arnav ji...hum bas a rahehain.
arnav:chalo mere saath.
khushi:app jain.hum ate hain.
arnav:ok come fast.
he went downstairs to the dining table.
precap[sheetal droped the oil in the stair case and khushi was coming downstairs.]
hope u liked it.should i cont.plz tell and plz give ur suggestions too.😊
'' part 6''
sheetal spilled the oil on the stair case.
sheetal:sorry khushi,tumhein apne bache ke bali deni hogi.
after spilled the oil on the stairs.sheetal was coming to the dinnig table.on the way nk saw sheetal and the oil bottle in her hand.he was confused.
nk:sheetak ji app kissi ko oil ki chumpi keri waji hain.
sheetal scared and said:wo...mein...mein aarav ko oil lagane lagi thi.
they were talking but khushi was coming downstairs.khushi fell badly and she screamed.
khushi:arnav jiii...fainted.
arnav and all family members heard khushi's scream and ran towards her.arnav was hell scared.he put khushi's head in his lap and shouted khushi's name.tears was flowing from his eyes.sheetal smirked evily.
arnav shouted:khushi...sobs...plz open ur eyes.
akash:bahi ambulence has come.
arnav picked khushi up and went towards the main door.nk went up stairs to bring his car's key.but he found oil on the stairs.first he was confused then suddenly he remembered that he saw sheetal with oil bottle.then he thought that may oil dropped by hp.he was going to his room but he heard a voice coming from the near room.he went towards the room.he saw sheetal who was saying to herself that her plan is successfull.now khushi has to lost her baby.nk was shocked to hear it.he decided to tell arnav but he stopped due to the situation.
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at the hospital
nurses took khushi to the emergency room.arnav hold khushi"s hand firmly.
nurse:plz leave her hand.its getting late.
arnav:no i will not.i will go inside with khushi.i cnn't leave khushi alone.
nurse:try to understand sir.we cann't get u in side.
arnav in anger:what do u mean?i cann't go.she is my wife.
anjali:sorry nurse.take her inside.
arnav:di i want to go.plz di.
anjali:chote app shant ho jain .khushi ji or inke bache ko kuch nahi ho ga.
arnav:i will let something happen to my wife and child.
arnav was crying hardly and he was seeing khushi from door glass.there was oxygen mask.and needles were on her hands.he could not bear this all and broke down .anjali came to him and arnav.
arnav:di if something happen to khushi,i will die di ...i will die.
anjali:kuch nahi hoga.plz chote sumbalo apne app ko.started crying.
dr came out. arnav immediately ran to dr.
arnav:dr,is khushi allright.plz tall me damnit.
dr:her condition is very critical.we cann't say anything.
arnav in anger hold dr's collar and was red in anger.
arnav:how dare u say that.if something happen to my khushi and child i will not spare u.got that.
anjali:chote choriye inhe..let him go.
dr went back and arnav was now too much scared.the thuoghts of losting khushi was bothering him.then he went to the hospital's temple for the first time.only pray for his khushi.
arnav:app ke her decision ko meri khushi ne sar jhoka ker mana.or apne iss ke saath essa kiya.kiya bigara hain.iss ne app ka.kyu ker rahi hain app isske saath assa?
arnav:mein ne kissi ke samne haath nahi phelaya per aj main appse apne bache or khushi ki beek mangta hoon.plz save them...plz
dr came out from the ER.arnav ran to him.
dr:congratulations.operation successfull.mrs.raizada and child is now out of danger.
arnav felt a sign of relief and became veryhappy.a ray of happiness appeared on everyone's face.
arnav:can i meet her?
dr:yeah sure but be sure that she will not be upset.it can affect child's health.
arnav opened the room's door.khushi was still unconsience.arnav sat next to her.hold her hand and kiss her forehead.he was feeling like he has found the life again.he whispered
arnav:khushi ...
khuhsi slowly opened her eyes and saw arnav.a tear appeared from her eyes.arnav kissed her eyes to tell her that stop crying.he is there with her in thick or thin.
arnav:khuhsi tum theek ho?
khushi:arnavji hum theek hain and she wiped the tears of arnav.
everybody entered the room and sat beside khushi.
nani:bagwan ka laak laak shuker hain ke khushi bitiya theek hain.
anjai:jab humare chote khushi ji ke saath hain to khushi ji ko kuch nahi ho sakta.
khushi realized that she was going to snach such a caring father to her own child for someone else.she was going to hurt arnavji due to the seperation of his wife nad child.she felt guilty.
khushi:arnav ji humein maaf ker deinhum ne apko bhot dhuk diya.plz maaf ker dein.
arnav:u don't need to say sorry khushi then he hugged her tightly that he never let her go again.
averyone left for home except arnav.he lived with khushi in the hospital.and now he was more carefull than before.he fed khushi food and made her sleep.
...
next morning nk came to the hospital with breakfast and he decided to tell arnav about sheetal's plan.coz that was the right time.
arnav and khushi was in the room.khushi was sleeping and arnav was staring the beautiful sight infront of him.nk opened the door and said
nk:navvav mere bahi i m here with the breakfast,
arnav:nk speak slowly.khushi is sleeping.cann't u see.
nk:oh sorry.
arnav:khushi wake up.
khushi slowly opened her eyes.
arnav:good morning mrs.raizada.eat ur breakfast.
khushi:she smiled back.
nk:navvav mhuje tum se important baat karni hein.
arnav:nk baad mein.abhi mhuje khushi ko khana khilana hain.
nk:its very important.plz
khushi:arnav ji jaiye.hum kha lenge.
arnav:nahi khushi i will feed u.thats it.
khushi made puppy dog face:plzzz
arnav:ok,i will be back soon.
arnav:nurse make sure that she eat properly.
nurse:don't wory sir.u can go.
arnav:thank u.
arnav went with nk outside.
precap:[nk told arnav about sheetal's plan and he was shocked and fuming with anger.hope u liked it. and thanks for ur encouragement.i m not good in writing a stroy.so if u don't like it then plz ignore it.and if u like then plz tell me should i cont?😊

nice story eagerly waiting 4r next part👏👏
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Nice update...Plz PM me u r next update


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''part 7''
hi guys,sorry for the being late.actually there was my exams so i could not cont so here is the updates.enjoy.i m going to reveal sheetal's plan.😉
arnav:nk whats wrong?
nk:navvav i want to tell u something very important.
arnav:nk u know there is nothing much important for me right now except khushi.
nk:i know but its very important.
arnav:ok tell
nk:navvav khushi ji did not fell herown.
arnav:what do u mean?
nk:she was fallen by someone.
arnav:shocked and in anger what...who is that?
nk:sheetal ji
arnav[shocked]:sheetal...how do u know?
nk told him all the things which he had heard by sheetal and oil bottle in sheetal's hand.arnav was now out of control and was full of anger.
arnav:i cnn't believe it.how could she do this to my khushi.how dare she?he closed his fist in anger and it seems like he will kill her.
arnav:khushi let her stay in home and she respected her .and she...is so cheap.
nk:even i could not believe my eyes but this is truth.i was going to tell u but khushiji's condition was critical.thats why i thought to wait sometime.
arnav:why she did thisto my khushi?
nk:i heard her that she wanted to kill khushiji'schild.so that khushi ji will go out of the house.
arnav:how dare she to tried to kill my child.i will not spare her.
he was in anger and nk was afraid to see arnav in that avatar.he did see him like that before.he tried to stop him.
nk:navvav plz calm down.
arnav:i will not let her stay in my house near khushi anymore.i have to do clear things and get her out of the house.i cann't see khushi in pain.
nk:wait...
arnav:nk plz let me go.and u stay her with khushi and take care of her.i will be back.
nk:ok
he drived the car like a mad.the whole scenes of khushi was falling from cliff.he found him breathless. and then falling from stairs.he thought that what if something had happen to khushi.
arnav:no no never.i will never let the death to take my khushi away from me never.then sheetal's plan is far away.
arnav reached home.he opened to the door with bang.and shouted sheetal's name in anger.
arnav:sheetal,sheetal where the hell u r?come outside.
anjali:what happenned chote?is khushi ji allright?
arnav:di where is that sheetaal?
sheetal:yes arnav,what happened/how is khushi now?i hope she is fine now .i was very worried.
to hear this,
arnav:shut up,donn't u dare to call my khsuhi's name from ur dirty tough.
sheetal:what do u mean?
anjali:thats the manner to talk to ur guest.
arnav:get out of my house.
sheetal:what?what i did?
arnav:oh u really don't know what u did?
sheetal"no
arnav:i said get out.don't be innocent.
she was crying [fake]
nani:what ru doing chote/
arnav:i don't wanna see her face.
anjali:but what had happen?can u tell me.
arnav:she tried...to...kill my child di...sobs.tried ...to...harm my khushi just for her sake.
everyone was shocked.sheetal was now afraid.she tried to defend herself but when arnav asked her that why she did id.so in fear she said
sheetal:i did not spilled the oil on staircase.i swear.
everyone again shocked and crying.
arnav:how do u know that she fell due to oil?
sheetal:i... mean...wo...wo..main
arnav:enough is enough.get out.otherwise i m calling police in the crime to tried to kill unborn baby.
anjali was crying hardly.coz she can understand the fear of losing child.coz she had lose her child.she can understand the pain of arnav and khushi.she donn't want to let anyone to harm them.she went to her and slapped her hardly on her cheek.
anjali:don't u feel any shame?khushi ji respected u so much and in return u gave her pain.chee...
payal was crying and akash consolling her.
payal:kya bigara tha khushi ne apka.jo apne iske sath essa kiya.
nani:hum soch bhi nahi sakte ke app iss haad tak gir sakti hain.
sheetal in anger:enough...shut up u all.
sheetal:arnav i love u.i did it bcoz i wanna get u and that cheap girl was coming b/w us.she deserves pain.
arnav slapped her:don't dare to utter a single word against khsuhi.i will forget that u r no no u was my friend.got it.
arav:yeah mr.raizada she is not my mom.
everyone shocked.
arav:i have decided to tell u coz khushi is very innocent and sweet. i also cann't see her in pain.i havenot my parents.i m orphan.and khushi gave me true love care.so i wanted to tall u that this lady bought me from orphanage and ordered me to act like u.so khushi can doubt and get out of ur life.this was the plan of her.
arnav:apne ghande macsad ke liye tum ne iss bache ka istamaal kiya.our masoom khushi ko muhra banaya.
anjali:shame on u.
arnav hold her hand and threw her out of the houselike he did when shams truth come out.he let arav inside.anjali looked at arav in pity and went to him and hugged him.cried.
arav:u can take me to orphanage.he creid.
anjali:no u will stay with us in this house.
arav:really.i can stay with u all and khushi.
arnav:yes,u will stay here.
everyone was happy and agreed with anjali's decision.
arnav:di i m going to hospital.khsuhi is discharging from hospital.
anjali:thats the great news.we should do the preparetions.
arav:i will help u.
anjali:yeah sure.
arnav went to the hospital where khushi was talking to nk in pleasure.arnav thought to hisself that he has found the world's bset wife and now he will never let this happen to her again.he entered the room
khushi:arnav ji ap khahan chale gai the.
arnav:ugent kaam tha.
arnav:nk khsuhi ne khana khaya.
nk:yeah ,she was not eating but i forcefully made her eat.
arnav:good.now u can go.
nk:why?
arnav:bcoz i want to spent some time with her.
nk:ok.
precap:[there is great hustle and bustle in rm and khushi is back home.]
how was that.hope u liked it.if u like it then i will cont😊take care.
''PART 8''
nk has gone.
khushi:apne itni der quen kar di...
arnav:urgent kaam tha.
khushi:hum se bi zayada zaruri...
arnav:tum se zayada important mere liye koi nahi.
khushi blushed.
arnav:chalo ab ready ho jao hum ghar ja rahe hain.
khushi in happiness:kiya ghar...arre wa
ahircar humein iss kedhane[jail]se nikalne ka moqa milhi gaya.
arnav smiled to see his pagal wife.
arnav at dr's cabin:
arnav:dr is khushi completely allright now?
dr:yes but much care is needed.
arnav:yeah i will take care of her.
dr:come for regular checkup in every month.
arnav:we will surely come.can i take khushi home now?
dr:yeah sure.
arnav:thank u dr.
at private room of khushi.
arnav:come on khushi lets go.
khushi tried to stand up but arnav stoped her and
arnav lifted khushi up .
khushi:arnav ji app kiya ker rahe hain.chorien humein.sub dekh rahe hain.
nurses smiled at them.
arnav:dekhne do.tum meri biwi ho.mein tumhein kabi bhi ootha sakta hoon.i don't care who is watching me or not.
after this arnav and khushi reached at rm.
arnav still lifted khushi.there was quite dark.they were at mein door.
khushi:arnav ji itna andera quen hain yahan paar.
arnav smiled bcoz he knew about surprise.suddenly light illuminated and whole RM was decorated with lights and flowers.bcoz khushi likes roses n lights.there was cake and written on it ''welcome back at home''.to see this surprise she got happy like a lil child and started jumping.
arnav:khushi what r u doing?[concerned]
anjali did arti of khsuhi ,arnav and brought khushi towards cake.khushi cut the cake and ate.everyone was happy about khushi's recovery and that khushi's baby is safe now.they were happy bcoz of coming of a new member in their family.
arnav lifted khushi up and took her to their room..
arnav made khushi sit on bed with comfort.a small tear appeared from his eyes.khushi noticed that and raised her hand to wipe his tears.
khushi:arnav...ap...quen...rorahe hain.
arnav:khushi plz promise me ke tum mujhe kabhi chor ker nahi jao gi.plzz...sob
khushi:shhh..
arnav:plz khushi i cannt live widout u plzzz.i will never let death to take u away from me.never ever.
khushi:i will never leave u arnav ji.sobs...
they both hugged each other.arnav made khushi lay down on bed and slide next to her.they selpt by keeping their hands into each others.
precap[arnav did not office and became too much concerned about khushi.everyone is shocked to know that arnav will no go to office till khushi's deliveryn do work from home.]
...
hope u liked this update.i know its too late but after ipk ended i had no idea to write something.then due to some if friend's encouragment.i wrote.tell me should i cont😃mistakes plz ignore.
Guys plz suggest some points to cont this OS.thank u.
Edited by simi23 - 12 years ago

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