OS:PYAAR YA FARZ pt 8 at pg 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi23

i have updated guys enjoy.

I am not able to find part-4...which pg is it in.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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* Sigh * Why Are You SO Selfless Khushi ?! :( 🤗 Ohh Nooo, Arnav With Lawyer ; O I Don't Want Khushi To Be Stressed Or Angry In This Condition ;| Arnav Becomes ASR When He Does Not Get The Right Solution & Worsen The Situation EVEN MOREEE :( Can't He Show Some Love Which Will Melt Khushi ?! 😳 I'm Afraid For Khushi & Their Baby Now !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update

continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#34
aww, dis is so sweet...pls cont dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice update
Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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excellent update waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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''part 5''
in morning;
khushi was busy in kichen and making breakfast.suddenly door bell rang.khushi said to buaji that she will open the door.khushi opened the door.she was shocked to see arnav on the door
khushi:app yahan...hum ne appse khaha tha na ke yahan mat ana.pher app...
arnav:mein apna haq lene aya hoon.
khushi:hum pher iss baat per bahus karna nahi chate.plz app jain yahan se.[she was about to shut the doorbut she heard another voice.
lawyer:hello mrs.raizada...
khushi:namaste...app ko kiss se milna hain.
lawyer:i m a lawyer and im here to inform u about the court notification.
khushi:notification...kesa notification.
khushi:maaf kijiye.indaar aaien.
lawyer came in and arnav followed him.khushi glared at arnav and he smirked.
lawyer:mrs.raizada ap apne pati se alag reh rahi hain.aur apke pati ki request per court ki taraf se ye notification jari kiya gaya hain.
khushi:hum inke saath rhena nahi shate.
lawyer:mrs .raizada ap pregnant hain.
khushi:ji...
lawyer:court ki taraf order hain ke bache ki delivery tak ap ko apne pati ke saath rhena hoga.isse phele app alag nahi ho sakte.
khushi:hum nahi reh sakte...
lawyer:sorry mrs.raizada.ye court ka order.hum iss mein kuch nahi ker sakte.ap ko jana hoga.
khushi looked at arnav angerly.and arnav passed a smile.
khushi:agar hum nahi gae to...
lawyer:to delivery ke baad humesha ke liye bache ki custody father ko dedi jai gi.
khushi felt like there is no earth beneath her feet.coz baby is her last hope of life and she did not want to lose her last hope.lawyer went.
arnav:khushi pack ur clothes.
khushi:humein yaqeen nahi ho raha ke app humare saath essa karein ge.
arnav:apni wife or bache ko wapis lane ke liye mein kuch bhi ker sakta hoon.
khushi started crying.arnav was also not able to see her in pain but he wanted them back.he had to do.
arnav to himself:sorry khushi.i promise mein sub kuch theek ker doon ga.plz trust me.i will clear all misunderstanding b/w us.i cann't live without u.khushi packed her clothes and went with arnav.
...
at rm
everyone was very happy coz khushi was coming back home.nani,anjali,nk was doing preparations.even mami was very happy except of sheetal..there was double celebrations.one for khushi coming and other for arnav and khushi small baby.after sometime arnav and khushi came.anjali did arti.
anjali:welcome back home.
nani:chote and khushi bitiya apko bhot mubarak ho.
anjali:ab to hum bua banne wale hain.
nk:or mein bhaloo
anjali laughed:nk bahi bahloo nahi chachu.everyone laughed.
arnav picked khushi up and went to their room.old caring husband was back.this time with more care.khushi was still upset.but arnav was in relief coz khushi was near him.
at morning in dining table
khushi was serving food to everyone arnav came .when he saw that he hold khushi's hand.
khushi:ye kiya ker rahehein app.
arnav made her sit and said:tum phele breakfast karo.itni dher tak bhokha rehna theek nahi.
khushi tried to get up but he hold more tightly.
arnav:nahi khushi phele khena.
nani:bitiya chote bikul theek khe rahe hain.
arnav fed khushi food.and left for office.everyone saw a loving and caring husband for khushi and a father for his child in these days.
...
after one and half month
sheetal was now fedup with that.co z her plan was failed.everytime when she tried to create rift b/w arshi.they became more closer.
sheetal:now enough is enough.i have to do something.
suddenly a plan came to her mind.evil smirk appeared on her face.
sheetal:haan khushi ka bacha hi mere plan ka niya mohra hain.
sheetal:jab bacha hi nahi rahe ga to khushi bhi iss ghar mein nahi rahe gi.
she planed to kill arnav and khushi baby.
on the otherside
khushi was in her room and keeping the clothes in the cupboard.arnav came to the room.
arnav:khushi tum ne khana nahi khaya na.
khushi:nahi arnav ji...hum bas a rahehain.
arnav:chalo mere saath.
khushi:app jain.hum ate hain.
arnav:ok come fast.
he went downstairs to the dining table.
precap[sheetal droped the oil in the stair case and khushi was coming downstairs.]
hope u liked it.should i cont.plz tell and plz give ur suggestions too.😊
'' part 6''
sheetal spilled the oil on the stair case.
sheetal:sorry khushi,tumhein apne bache ke bali deni hogi.
after spilled the oil on the stairs.sheetal was coming to the dinnig table.on the way nk saw sheetal and the oil bottle in her hand.he was confused.
nk:sheetak ji app kissi ko oil ki chumpi keri waji hain.
sheetal scared and said:wo...mein...mein aarav ko oil lagane lagi thi.
they were talking but khushi was coming downstairs.khushi fell badly and she screamed.
khushi:arnav jiii...fainted.
arnav and all family members heard khushi's scream and ran towards her.arnav was hell scared.he put khushi's head in his lap and shouted khushi's name.tears was flowing from his eyes.sheetal smirked evily.
arnav shouted:khushi...sobs...plz open ur eyes.
akash:bahi ambulence has come.
arnav picked khushi up and went towards the main door.nk went up stairs to bring his car's key.but he found oil on the stairs.first he was confused then suddenly he remembered that he saw sheetal with oil bottle.then he thought that may oil dropped by hp.he was going to his room but he heard a voice coming from the near room.he went towards the room.he saw sheetal who was saying to herself that her plan is successfull.now khushi has to lost her baby.nk was shocked to hear it.he decided to tell arnav but he stopped due to the situation.
...
at the hospital
nurses took khushi to the emergency room.arnav hold khushi"s hand firmly.
nurse:plz leave her hand.its getting late.
arnav:no i will not.i will go inside with khushi.i cnn't leave khushi alone.
nurse:try to understand sir.we cann't get u in side.
arnav in anger:what do u mean?i cann't go.she is my wife.
anjali:sorry nurse.take her inside.
arnav:di i want to go.plz di.
anjali:chote app shant ho jain .khushi ji or inke bache ko kuch nahi ho ga.
arnav:i will let something happen to my wife and child.
arnav was crying hardly and he was seeing khushi from door glass.there was oxygen mask.and needles were on her hands.he could not bear this all and broke down .anjali came to him and arnav.
arnav:di if something happen to khushi,i will die di ...i will die.
anjali:kuch nahi hoga.plz chote sumbalo apne app ko.started crying.
dr came out. arnav immediately ran to dr.
arnav:dr,is khushi allright.plz tall me damnit.
dr:her condition is very critical.we cann't say anything.
arnav in anger hold dr's collar and was red in anger.
arnav:how dare u say that.if something happen to my khushi and child i will not spare u.got that.
anjali:chote choriye inhe..let him go.
dr went back and arnav was now too much scared.the thuoghts of losting khushi was bothering him.then he went to the hospital's temple for the first time.only pray for his khushi.
arnav:app ke her decision ko meri khushi ne sar jhoka ker mana.or apne iss ke saath essa kiya.kiya bigara hain.iss ne app ka.kyu ker rahi hain app isske saath assa?
arnav:mein ne kissi ke samne haath nahi phelaya per aj main appse apne bache or khushi ki beek mangta hoon.plz save them...plz
dr came out from the ER.arnav ran to him.
dr:congratulations.operation successfull.mrs.raizada and child is now out of danger.
arnav felt a sign of relief and became veryhappy.a ray of happiness appeared on everyone's face.
arnav:can i meet her?
dr:yeah sure but be sure that she will not be upset.it can affect child's health.
arnav opened the room's door.khushi was still unconsience.arnav sat next to her.hold her hand and kiss her forehead.he was feeling like he has found the life again.he whispered
arnav:khushi ...
khuhsi slowly opened her eyes and saw arnav.a tear appeared from her eyes.arnav kissed her eyes to tell her that stop crying.he is there with her in thick or thin.
arnav:khuhsi tum theek ho?
khushi:arnavji hum theek hain and she wiped the tears of arnav.
everybody entered the room and sat beside khushi.
nani:bagwan ka laak laak shuker hain ke khushi bitiya theek hain.
anjai:jab humare chote khushi ji ke saath hain to khushi ji ko kuch nahi ho sakta.
khushi realized that she was going to snach such a caring father to her own child for someone else.she was going to hurt arnavji due to the seperation of his wife nad child.she felt guilty.
khushi:arnav ji humein maaf ker deinhum ne apko bhot dhuk diya.plz maaf ker dein.
arnav:u don't need to say sorry khushi then he hugged her tightly that he never let her go again.
averyone left for home except arnav.he lived with khushi in the hospital.and now he was more carefull than before.he fed khushi food and made her sleep.
...
next morning nk came to the hospital with breakfast and he decided to tell arnav about sheetal's plan.coz that was the right time.
arnav and khushi was in the room.khushi was sleeping and arnav was staring the beautiful sight infront of him.nk opened the door and said
nk:navvav mere bahi i m here with the breakfast,
arnav:nk speak slowly.khushi is sleeping.cann't u see.
nk:oh sorry.
arnav:khushi wake up.
khushi slowly opened her eyes.
arnav:good morning mrs.raizada.eat ur breakfast.
khushi:she smiled back.
nk:navvav mhuje tum se important baat karni hein.
arnav:nk baad mein.abhi mhuje khushi ko khana khilana hain.
nk:its very important.plz
khushi:arnav ji jaiye.hum kha lenge.
arnav:nahi khushi i will feed u.thats it.
khushi made puppy dog face:plzzz
arnav:ok,i will be back soon.
arnav:nurse make sure that she eat properly.
nurse:don't wory sir.u can go.
arnav:thank u.
arnav went with nk outside.
precap:[nk told arnav about sheetal's plan and he was shocked and fuming with anger.hope u liked it. and thanks for ur encouragement.i m not good in writing a stroy.so if u don't like it then plz ignore it.and if u like then plz tell me should i cont?😊
Edited by simi23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice. Please PM me when you update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing pls update fast scary precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Loving d story..

Plz update asap :)

that sheetal z sch a *+_^#

😡 Wants to kill arhi's baby!!

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