U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated ) - Page 14

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doing😊
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awesome...feeling pity 4 rey...jaldi unn donum ko milado...thanks 4the pm...
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As always..awesome update dear..
Finally Rey realized tat he only loves his baatcutter
Nw update d nxt Part soon n thnx fr d pm I hav sent u buddy req
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awesome...feeling pity 4 rey...jaldi unn donum ko milado...thanks 4the pm...

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Originally posted by: deepshakriya

As always..awesome update dear..
Finally Rey realized tat he only loves his baatcutter
Nw update d nxt Part soon n thnx fr d pm I hav sent u buddy req

thaks dear😊

realise toh usse hoga😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 11

NXT DAY...

rey woke up...went to his balcony...inhaling the fresh air...

rey: kria...nah mera baatcutter tumhe yakin diladoonga ki mai sirf tumhe pyaar kiya tha...sirf tumhe kisi aur se nahi...mai tumhe apna zaroor bana loonga...i promise...
(sayin this he went in got ready hd his breakfast n headed to the collage...)

he reached collage...he saw tani walking towards him...he went to her..

rey: tani mujhe tumse baat karni hai...

tani: (thinkin) rey mujhse baat karna chatha hai...

rey: tani...tani

tani: haan rey boliye??

rey: i want to talk with u..

tani: sure...chale??

rey: kahan??

tani: fire exit...

rey: nahi!!! hum yaha hi baat karenge...

tani: teek hai...boliiye...

rey: vo actually...vo...

tani: boliye rey...

rey: (closed his eyes for 2 seconds...remembered kria)...dekho tani...mujhe maaf kardo mai sirf kria se pyaar kartha hoon...mai manti hoon ki mai tumhari taraf attracted tha...lekin kuch bi ho meri zindagi mai kria ki jagah koi nahi le saktha...i love her oly her...mai tumhari saath kabhi bi apna limits cross nahi ki...karna bi nahi chahta...hope u understand...m sorry...

tani:(innocently) its ok rey...mujhe pata hai aap sirf kria ko pyaar karthe ho...mai aapkeliye bahot kush hoon...

rey: thank u tani..thank u so much(sayin this he went away...happily)

rey ke jaan eke baad tani ki expession changes...

she searches for kria in the whole collage...finally found her in locker room..she went in n closed the door...

tani: aap aise kyu kar rahi ho??

kri: maine kya kiya(confused)...

tani: (crying...magarmach ki aasun)...aapne bola tha na ki aap meri aur rey ke beech nahi ayenge...lekin aap aise kaise kar sakte ho???

kr: dekho tani jo tum bol rahi ho...mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha...

ta: rey mujhse pyaar nahi karte

kr: aise kyu kehrahi ho??

ta: rey ne khud kaha ki vo apse pyaar karthe hai..mujhe nahi...mai unke bina kaise rah sakti hoon...i love him...

kr: aisa nahi hai he loves u...

ta: jaha tak aap uske samne ho...hai kabi nahi ho sakta...

kr: dekho tani...rey sirf tumhe pyaar kartha hai...sirf tumhe(her voice was breaking down)...sayin this she goes away...crying

tani:(evil smile) chalo kuch toh hua...

kria was just walking lost somewhere...yash comes from nowhere...

ya: hey babes...

kr: yash...

ya: ok...cutie kria(she just smiled)

ya: aisa boot banke kyu ho??

kr: mai boot...(started their chasing game...while chasing she was about to fall but someone caught her...she opened her eyes to see who it was...it was him whom she loved more than her life...n will be loving...REY

kr: thank u..

rey: always for u...

yash comes b/w...

ya: thanks dude...meri angel ko save karne keliye...

rey:(thinkkin) angel my foot...wait angel hi toh hai but oly for me...

kr: yash chalo...

they both moved...

ya: kria tumhare liye ek surprise hai...

kr: surprise kya hai??

ya: tumhe wait karna padega...

their classes finished everybody was in rehearsal hall except kria, yash n tani...

nil: viky mera life itna boring kyu hai??

vi: mera bi...

vish: ya man hum kitna masti karthe teh lekin ab...

voice: ab kya??

everybody turned towards the door...they were shocked ...happy beyond limits...

all: KARAN SIR!!!

all literally jumped on him...n gave a big hug...

ka: guys leave me...mai mar jauoonga...

sh: sir aap yaha omg!!

vish: (dreming) i cant believe...

yash kya hai mujhe batao...all agian turned towards the door including karan...

ya: kria wait...

rey saw yash closing kria's eyes from back...his blood boiled...he grited his teeth n closed his fists...

kr: yash jaldi...

ya: k there u go...(he removed his hands)..kria blinked twice...for a clear image...when she saw karan sir...she gave a huge smile...ran to him n hugged him tight...karan also responded to it...koi cheez jal raha tha kya hai kya hai...haan rey jal raha tha...

kr: (broke the hug)
karan sir aap yaha??

ka: kyu mai tum logon ko milne nahi ha sakta kya??

yash came to him n hugged coz yash knew karan will come today,...

sh: offcourse u cn sir...

sw: but suddenly...swaron shared a llhh...karan noticed this n looked at rey...he smiled saying yes...karan was really happy..

ka: mai yaha apna shaadi keliye invite karna aya hoon...

girls: shaadi..

ne: nahiii!!!!

sim n rin: nooo!!!

sw: guys be quiet...sir shaadi??

ka: (smilin) kyu mai shaadi nahi kar saktha kya???

rey: nahi sir not like that...aap suddenly bola na issliye...

ka: so guys u all specially invited for my marriage...so u all should come...

kr: shaadi kab sir...??

ka: 2 weeks ke baad...n u all will be leaving tomorrow...

all: tomorrow...

ya: ya tomorrow...

meantime rdx also entered...(in my ff there's no vp n avp...)

rdx: so guys coz karan was our counsellor...n divide mitana iss collage mai he is also responsible for it..n we love him...so authority ne ye decide kia hai ki...there will b no classes for two weeks...so u can go to karan's marriage...so guys exited...

all: yesss!!!! whohhh

thats it guys...

give ur comments...

love ya😊



Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res..unres..yeah mei firse frst to coment..update as always awesum,amazing...finally rey ne tani nani ko bol hi diya ki voh us chudail se pyar nhi krta..uss chudail se toh koi animal bhi pyar na kare rey toh dur ki baat..n atracted my foot..woh toh yeh chudailni padhi hogi rey ke piche ..tbhi usne haan kahan hoga..n ye tani nani,chudail,besharam,behaya..dramebaaz,nautanki bitch magar mach ke ansu bahane kriya ke pass chali gyi..badi ayi..pyar toh dur ki baat ye toh atention tak deserve nhi krti..n bichari kriya firse udass ho gyi..thnx to yash for litening kriya's mood..he's so sweet..aww..rey catched kriya before she can fall..'dreaming'..n woh rey ki toh angel hai sbse phle baki sab ki baad mei...omg..yeah..suprise was karan sir..yipee karan sir aa gye..aab toh kriyansh ke milne ke chances badh gye..woho..n .ate hi swaron ka llhh dkh ke pata chal gya n rey ne bi isharo hi isharo se...kya baat..kya baat..karan sir ki shadi..ohoo..kaun hai voh lucky girl..sari grls kitni udas ho gyi thi n boys ke mann hi mann mei ladu phoot rhe honge..lol..hope wahan kriyansh ke beech kuch problems kam ho na ki uss tani nani ki wajah se badh jaye ..n no college for two weeks..waah kash mere school mei bi kisi teacher ki shadi pe aisa hota ..lol..luv it..superb...update soon...;) n thnx for d pm...
Edited by d3riya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update i really liked it while reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
woahhh...!!!! KSG back...!!! Grt...!!! Now he is going to answr that cheap naani...!!! Huh...!!!! She is truely a b****h ... !!! Always cum in btw our sweet kr...!!!! Plzzz updatee soon...!!!! It 's getting more nd more intrsting...!!!! Loved it...!!!! Nd congratzzz dear u r getting more nd more lyks on evry update...!!!! Mns u can say it's really an osssoomm concpt ...!!! Nd plzz update soon...!!! Thanxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
hate tht taani...
karan sir back n shaadi. interesting...
plz update soon n thnx for pm...

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