I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY -2 -THE DARKER SIDE Thd 2 - Page 32

first one sounds better to me... Go with your original plot madhu I am with you...

Originally posted by: Madhu123

Just a Question - Select one..

1) Khushi giving up and submitting herself to him for saving her Fathers business.. (WHich means they do IT)
2) Arnav forcing her.. She protesting her best.. (THEY STIILL DO IT)

Now tell me which one sounds better.. For me.. the first one.. Is better than the 2nd.. Since I dont wish to show its an actual "R*pe"

Another thing.. Its a Dark FF .. And the concept itself urges me to write this Part.. As I said Season 1 she did everything .. She took the money, SIgn the contract .. yet not fulfilled her terms..

I dont want Season 2 to be the same.. Decide guys.. I have already drafted that Chapter.. But I can make editions to it.. If I feel Readers are intrested in a different Plot..

I like writing what Readers are comfortable with.. I dont mind changing my Plot according to their Wish.. Just lemme know

I understand where we have Dark Concepts like this.. Negative critics are more than Positive.. I appreciate both..

poor girl is giving in for her father,s greed

Originally posted by: love.khushi

first one sounds better to me... Go with your original plot madhu I am with you...

Originally posted by: Madhu123

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">Just a Question - Select one..

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<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">1) Khushi giving up and submitting herself to him for saving her Fathers business.. (WHich means they do IT)
2) Arnav forcing her.. She protesting her best.. (THEY STIILL DO IT)</font>

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">Now tell me which one sounds better.. For me.. the first one.. Is better than the 2nd.. Since I dont wish to show its an actual "R*pe"</font>

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">Another thing.. Its a Dark FF .. And the concept itself urges me to write this Part.. As I said Season 1 she did everything .. She took the money, SIgn the contract .. yet not fulfilled her terms..</font>

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">I dont want Season 2 to be the same.. Decide guys.. I have already drafted that Chapter.. But I can make editions to it.. If I feel Readers are intrested in a different Plot..</font>

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">I like writing what Readers are comfortable with.. I dont mind changing my Plot according to their Wish.. Just lemme know</font>

<font color="#FF0000" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">I understand where we have Dark Concepts like this.. Negative critics are more than Positive.. I appreciate both..</font>

Di which ever way you show ultimately it will be forced one as Khushi did not wanted to do it but ASR did not leave any choice for her.

Second thing in this one if they do not do it, it will NOT be like first season as khushi did not sign the contract so you CANNOT held khushi responsible for not fulfilling the contract like season 1

Thirdly, I prefer lifeless khushi during the whole act rather then participating in it and giving ASR chance to believe that she willingly did it or enjoyed in future...

Originally posted by: Geet13

Di which ever way you show ultimately it will be forced one as Khushi did not wanted to do it but ASR did not leave any choice for her.

Second thing in this one if they do not do it, it will NOT be like first season as khushi did not sign the contract so you CANNOT held khushi responsible for not fulfilling the contract like season 1

Thirdly, I prefer lifeless khushi during the whole act rather then participating in it and giving ASR chance to believe that she willingly did it or enjoyed in future...

its surely gonna brk the record. . . . . . . heheh. . . .
congos for legal sins. . . !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe the story reached thd 10 so soon !!!!! :)) :) ...

first option is gud one ...really ...and obviously ..u dnt need to do any ectra efforts to make it that mch dark ...its doing fyn
bt as always make them fall in love soon;))

Originally posted by: Madhu123

1) Yeah ultimately it would be a forced one.. Thats why its DARK

2) Khushi Signed something in his office.. She has not checked it yet what she signed.. 2nd thing she tore some papers.. She herself didnt know what those papers were..

3) And ofcourse the KHUSHI that would be on BED with him.. HAS TO BE LIFELESS.. Because she would be Submitting.. She cannot actively participate in it.. Thats impossible..

1) Yeah ultimately it would be a forced one.. Thats why its DARK</font>[/B][/DIV]

I knew it when you skip my question regarding contract that bas***d tricked her...let ASR rot in hell afterwords...

Di I am sorry if I sounded bit rude in my comment earlier...

By the way I do not know what to say to Khushi for signing contract before reading it properly... I give up...

Originally posted by: Geet13

1) Yeah ultimately it would be a forced one.. Thats why its DARK</font>[/B][/DIV]

2) Khushi Signed something in his office.. She has not checked it yet what she signed.. 2nd thing she tore some papers.. She herself didnt know what those papers were...
3) And ofcourse the KHUSHI that would be on BED with him.. HAS TO BE LIFELESS.. Because she would be Submitting.. She cannot actively participate in it.. Thats impossible..</font>

I knew it when you skip my question regarding contract that bas***d tricked her...let rot ASR in hell afterwords...

Di I am sorry if I sounded bit rude in my comment earlier...

By the way I do not know what to say to Khushi for signing contract before reading it properly... I give up...