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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
A lovely ending to this SS.
Beautiful
Heartfelt
Touching
Sweet
Fun
Intense
Loved every moment of it.
Arnav proposing to Khushi as he did, infront of all the media, models etc was pretty surprising.
Perfection at its best. They sooo belong together.
As for the making love short scene, that was really well written.
Looking forward to the epilogue. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
ofcourse love to read epilogue...
love the update..so sweet and understanding and short story
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovedd ittt!!! it was cute and emotional!!

awesomee!!!

keep writing wonderful stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, a lovely ending :)
I love happy endings, ArHi together <3
Fantastic SS!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunfanatic_Ji

Hey Zara,

What a beautiful ending! Loved it!
Poor Aman dude.. LOL ;)
I Loved the office romance and her bringing lunch for him, awe so cute. thanks😳

The proposal was really sweet.
And he was asking her it again n again hahaha Arnie boy is really desperate to hear her YES again n again...ummmhmmm😉😆

This was one of the best SS I came across on IF..
I dont get the idea of those peeps who bashed you.. Well they should scan their pea-sized dimaags nce or as many times as possible before bashing sucha cute love story and the Writer..i can handle them. 😆

You did a great job girl and cheers for writing this beautiful story.
I'm gonna miss this. Planning to read it again ;) aww thanks

I hope you come up with such stories again.
Love,
'J'

PS : can you pls send me the link for the last update of 'Vines with Thornes'ok i'll pm it to you.
I'm sorry I messed up. Couldn't find the pm.


gift
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb ending i loved it sooo much

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Posted: 12 years ago
Good story and perfect ending.Expecting new stories from u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just ignore what others say but as your reader I would like to say that u r a good writer & the story line was so cute & awesome. The flashback shows how concern Arnav is for Khushi & he dearly loved her. The proposal was just mind blowing & the last scene was the cherry on top of the cake, delicious...hope u will end it officially with a beautiful epilogue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zara, enjoyed your outburst against pesky readers emanding you change your storyline! you might ask them to continue it the way they want, if they are so desperate... I think your story had its own pace and came to a logical conclusion
aman's embarrassment was funny as was khushi's irritation with arnav for the position she generally found herself in while with him... lunch seems to be the last thing on their minds, especially arnav's 😉... he at least had the sense to renovate the glass-walled cabin to something more private 😳! otherwise everyone in his office would be going around looking like this: ☺️! khushi's misgivings about restricting arnav's amorous side in their relationship and his manner of assuring her were very moving and quite natural! his fear of losing her to cancer must have been quite scary to deal with!
loved his proposal and her acceptance... taking the next step in their relationship is again very natural and he reiterating his proposal was very adorable and unique! well done!
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww loved it
actually was the perfect endiing
love that arnav was insecure cus of her cancer scare
and how he comforted her about the kiss thing
this ff was brillant to read=]

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