Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13 - Page 12

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PART 8


Daddaji: Bahu hamara kala coat kahan hai.
Vanshika: Main la rahi hu bauji.
Shlok: Ma humne yeh black wali nahi white wali socks pehni hai.
Inder: Meri blue shirt nahi mil rahi. Kadambari kahan hai meri shirt.
Kadambari: Haynee yeh baap bete biljul ek jaise hai nikame. Aai sholku aai ji.
Jeevika: Maa main ne Tarun ko Viren ji ka naya suit dia tha press karne ke liay abhi tak aaya nahi hai. Aapko paa hai kahan hai suit.
Vanshika: Nahi beta please tum khud dhoondh lo main bauji ka coat lekar jarahi hu.
Viraat: Bhabhi meri ghari nahi mil rahi.
Jeevika: Aai devar ji.
In the vadhera house everyone was running here and there to prepare for the party.
Kadambari chachi entered her room only to see her husband and son struggling with their clothes.
Kadambari: Yeh lein aapki shirt. Aur yeh rahi teri white wali socks. Khush.
Inder chachu and shlok nodded in positive.
Jeevika hurriedly walked towards maanvi's room.
Jeevika: Maanu apni dawai kha le.
Maanvi(from bathroom): Rakh do di main kha loon gi.
Jeevika: Pakka na
Maanvi: Haan di pakka.
Viren: Jeevika mera suit.
Maanvi: Jao di jiju bula rahe hain aapko.
Jeevika: Haan main jati hu tu jaldi se naha kar tiyar ho jai aur dawai kha lena.
Maanvi: Ok di.
Viren: Jeevika!
Jeevika: Aai viren ji.
Jeevika walked forward into her room.
Jeevika: Viren ji aapka suit tarun abhi tak laya nahi hai .
Viren(frowning): Toh ab main kya pehno.
Jeevika: Ek minute.
She reached the cupboard and picked up a box wrapped beautifully.
Viren: Yeh kya hai Jeevika.
Jeevika: Khud hi dekh lein.
He unwrapped the box and saw an elegant cream color shirt with white coat.
Viren: Jeevika yeh tumne kab.
Jeevika: Jab hum shopping karne gai the toh main ne yeh aap ke liay lia tha.
Viren: Thank you.
Virika hugged eachother.

On the other side Viraat was unable to find his watch. He was calling Jeevika but she seemed busy. Vanshika was passing by when she saw him finding some thing.
Vanshika: Kya dhoondh rahe ho beta.
Viraat: Ma meri ghari nahi mil rahi. Kal tak idhar hi table pe pari thi.
Vanshika found it in his drawer.
Vanshika: Yeh lo beta.
Viraat: Thanks maa.
Everyone gathered in the hall by 6:30. All were looking very smart.

Vanshika


Chachi


Bua


Inder


Daddaji


Viren


Jeevika

Maanvi


Viraat


Daddaji: Ab hamein chalna chahiye. Rasta bahut lamba hai.
Three cars moved on . One was taken up by Daddaji, Vanshika and Swamini bua while the other was occupied by Inder chachu and family. The last one was chosen by the foursome. Within an hour, they reached the venue.
Vikram family: Welcome. Aai under aai.
They were directed to a enchanting hall. It was decorated with red flowers all over the place perfect for a luxurious party.
Shree and Vikram descended from the stairs. They were looking a charming couple. Jeevika, Maanvi and chachi went to Shree and Viraat Viren to Vikram. They talked for sometime then advanced forward to the dance floor. Vikram Shree and Viren Jeevika were the main couple in spotlight. Viraat and Maanvi were standing alone on opposite sides.
Maanvi: Abhi acha mauka hai main Viraat se poch leti hu.
She excused from the guests to talk to him. But as soon as she reached the spot he was standing a while ago , she saw no sign of him. She then saw him talking to his friends besides the bar. She tried to catch her attention but failed in her attempt.
Dance floor
Shree: Vikram mujhe pyaas lagi hai.
Vikram: Acha main abhi pani lata hu.
He went to the bar. He heard his friends talking.
Friend 1: Viraat yaar tu ne apne music career ke bare main kya socha hai.
Viraat: Kuch nahi main abhi bhai ke office ko join karne ka soch raha hoon.
Friend 2: Aise kaise. Yaad hai college ke waqtoon mein teri awaz ke larkiyaan fida thi aur teri awaz ke charche pore newyork main mashhor the toh tu ab kaise music ko chor raha hai.
Viraat: Main apne bhai aur chachu ka haath batana chahta hu bus aur kuch nahi. Agar bara break mila toh zaroor gao ga.
Vikram: Toh break mil gaya.
Viraat (turned behind to face Vikram):Matlab
Vikram: Tu abhi meri party main gai ga.
Viraat: Abhi main kaise.
Vikram: Dekh jin singers ko humne bulaya tha woh shaid late ho jai tab tak tu hu entertain kar de.
Viraat: Magar abhi.
Vikram: Haan abhi. Main ne tere bhai ki shaadi main madad ki thi na ab tu meri party mein madad kare ga.
Viraat: Hisab poora kar raha hai.
Vikram: Tu jo bhi samajh le. Tu gai ga toh gai ga aur woh bhi abhi.
Viraat: Acha theek hai.
He took the mic and went to the stage.
Viraat: Ladies and gentlemen.
Maanvi figured the voice. She moved were she can see him more clearly.
Viraat: Aaj mere bahut hi khas dost ki shaadi ki salgira hai.Hum sab ki taraf se Vikram and Shree ko bahut saari duaien aur wishes hain. Tum log issi tarah haste muskurate rehna hamesha. Aaj iss khaas mauke per main in dono ko ek gaana dedicate karna chahte hu jo mere dil ke bahut kareeb hai. So enjoy the song.

Roshan hai yeh zameen aasmaan sab ishq ke dam se
Dhalte hain din raat sab ishq ke daam se
Khushiyoon ke beshumar behisab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har murad ishq ke hi dum se
Tu hai mera khuda
Ab na hona juda
Karde karam ke dil yeh chain pai ga
MAULA MAULA MERA
SHUKAR TERA MAULA RE
ROBARU HUA HAI MERA YAAR
Jeevika and Viren were dancing with each other like a happy couple while Viraat and Maanvi danced together like cute friends.


Sajde main tere hi jhuk jao main sada
Teri hi bahoon main ho jao lapata
Chaya ho dhoop ho rasta bhi ho naya
Humko ab kaisa dar
Sang jo hai tu chala
Ab tere saare hi gham hai mere
Ab meri khushiyaan teri hain sada
Tu hai mera khuda
Ab na hona juda
Karde karam ke dil yeh chain pai ga
MAULA MAULA MERA
SHUKAR TERA MAULA RE
ROBARU HUA HAI MERA YAAR

As soon the song they heard clear-cut voices of the clapping by the guests. They thanked Viraat for such a beautiful song and congratulated Viren Jeevika for a romantic performance.

Soon afterwards it, the waiter came with the cake. Vikram and Shree cut the cake and feed each other. Viren took a piece and feed Jeevika too. Seeing them Maanvi felt the urge to feed Viraat too with her own hands. She did not understood why this feeling came over her mind. She took a piece and slowly moved towards Viraat. She could saw him clearly standing alone. A few guests came in her way. For a second she lost his sight but then regained it after a moment. This time only his back was visible to her.
Maanvi: Viraat.
She called him but he did not responded back. She moved towards his front. The view she saw disturbed her lot.
A girl in her mid 20's was feeding cake to Viraat with HER OWN HANDS. Her hands were on Viraat's shoulder and it seemed like he was also enjoying her presence. Heart-broken Maanvi threw the cake on the floor and walked silently where whole family was. She was constantly eyeing them ,sometimes from the corner of her eye sometimes from front. Her uneasiness was seen by Jeevika.

Jeevika:Kya hua maanu. Tu kuch ukhri lag rahi hai.
Maanvi: Di kuch nahi bus bore horahi hu.
Jeevika: Bore kyun? Tera partner in crime kahan hai.
Maanvi: Yahan woh partner nahi Viraat hai. Viraat Vadhera. Usse apne fazool dostoon se waqt mile tab hi mere pass aai na.
Jeevika: Tu aise kyun bol rahi hai. Ab kya kia mere devar ne.
Maanvi: Di aap hamesha apni devar ki side lete rehna. Dekho toh zara kaise us larki ke saath kandhoon pe haath rakh ke baatein kar raha hai.
Jeevika: Aare woh larki toh Vikram ki behn hai woh pichle hi hafte videsh se aai hai.
Maanvi: Agar bahar se aai hai toh kuch bhi kare gi. Thori toh sharam kare. Ek hi mulaqat main itna free kyun horahi hai.
Jeevika: Maanu shaid tujhe pata nahi hai. Riddhima Viraat ki US ki dost hai. Wahan dono bahut ache dost the. Balke yeh toh Viraat ke band mein main guitarist thi.
Maanvi: Magar di aise.
Jeevika: Chor na maanu. Aur agar tu bore horahi hai toh hum chalte hai. Waise bhi iss halat main tu zyada der tak bahar na hi rahe ho acha hai.
Viren: Kya acha hai bhai.(Viren saw them talking so went on joining them)
Jeevika: Maanu bore horahi thi toh main ne socha ghar chalte hain.
Viren(looking at his watch): Haan waise bhi 11 baj gai hain. Subah office bhi jana hai . Main abhi sab ko bula kar lata hu.
He told all the family members to check out. Maanvi saw that as soon Viren told Viraat to go he hugged Riddhima saying goodbye.
Maanvi: Bye karne ke aur bhi bahut tareeqe hote hain. Sirf gale milna hi nahi reh gaya.
The vadhera's thanked Vikram's family for inviting to such a grand party and made an exit from there.
On reaching home, all went to take some rest.

Viraat: In do dino main jo kuch bhi hua, mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha. Maanvi mujhse zaroor kuch chuppa rahi hai aur main sure hoon ke yeh koi bahut bara raaz hai jo ab tak kisi ko nahi pata. Warna Maanvi bhabhi se har cheez share karti hai. Yeh baat nahi ki to iss ka yehi matlab hua keh Maanvi ne mujhse sabse chuppaya hai. Magar us ne kaha tha keh woh bahar se aakar mujhe sab saach batai gi. Aisa karta hu main abhi maanvi se mil kar saare doubts clear kar leta hu.
He was about to go when he noticed that his phone was beeping. It was a unknown number, however he picked it up.
Viraat: Hello
**** : Hi Viraat
Viraat: Ji kon
**** : Yeh ji ji kia laga rakha hai main hu.
Viraat: Main kon
**** : Tumhare maa duffer. Riddhima baat kar rahi hu. Itni jaldi awaz bhi bhool gai.
Viraat: Oh tum. Nahi aisa koi baat nahi hai bus itni raat ko unknown phone nahi aata na.
Ridz : Sorry main ne tumhe disturb toh nahi kia na.

In Maanvi's room
Maanvi: Shaid yehi sahih mauqa hai keh main Viraat se baat kar saku. Mere khayal main woh abhi utha ho ga toh abhi baat kar leti hu.
She went to Viraat's room. She was about to knock when she heard Viraat talking with someone.
Viraat: Arre nahi yaar main disturb aur tumse. Bikul nahi.
Viraat: Main tumhare liay 24/7 free hu. Jab bhi chaho tum mujhe phone kar sakti hu.
Maanvi was listening it all carefully. She was surprised to hear these words from Viraat saying to anyone besides her.
She remembered her and Viraat's talk few days ago.
Flashback
Maanvi was very bored so she decided to go to Viraat's room for some entertainment. For the permission she called him.
Viraat (in sleepy tone): Hello
Maanvi: Hello partner.
Viraat: Maanvi. Tum abhi.
He checked his watch . It was 2 am.
Viraat: Maanvi tum ne time dekha hai. 2 baj rahe hain. Tum soi kyun nahi.
Maanvi: Woh actually mujhe na neend nahi arahi. Toh socha tum mujhe kuch entertain kar do. Main tumhare kamre mein ajao.
Viraat: Ek parai aurat mere kamre main. Acha ajao. Per karo gi kya.
Maanvi:Woh main akar batati hu. Balance khatam horaha hai. Acha bye.
Maanvi entered inside Viraat's room half sleep half awake.
Viraat: Ab bata kya kare gi.
Maanvi: Video game khel loon.
Viraat: Partner ho tum meri. Meri har cheez per haq hai. 24/7yeh partner tumhare liay hazar hai.
Maanvi: Thank you so much.
All night they played inspite of sleepy Viraat.
Maanvi(talking to herself): Viraat tum toh hamesha mere liye free the na toh ab kya hua. 24 ghante ho gai hain. Main tumse baat karne ki koshish kar rahi hu per tum riddhima main busy ho. Jao ab main bhi nahi baat karo gi.
Jeevika: Maanu. Jaldi aa. Beeji ka phone hai.
Maanvi: Aai di.
Hearing Maanvi's voice Viraat realised that she was his door step. What if she heard his conversation?
Beeji: Kaisi hai meri bachi.
Manvi: Main thek hu. Aap kaisi ho?
Beeji: Main bhi bilkul thek hu.
Maanvi: Aur badi beeji, chachu, chachi, dabbu.
Beeji: Sab thek hain. Rok na dabbu.
Maanvi: Kya hua beeji.
Beeji: Dabbu tujhse baat karna chahta hai.
Dabbu: Maanvi di kaisi ho.
Maanvi: Sabar nahi tha. Beeji se baat toh karne deta. Waise main bilkul thek hi.
Jeevika: Maanu tu baat kar main aati hu.
Dabbu: Di aap yahan kab arahi ho.
Maanvi: Jaldi aao gi dabbu. Kyun yaad arahi hai meri.
Dabbu: Nahi woh baat nahi hai.
Badi beeji(from behind):Tere liye larka dekha hai humne.
Viraat hanged up the phone. He wanted to talk to Maanvi desperately. She was talking on phone with Beeji. He walked towards her.
Maanvi: Larka kyun.
Beeji: La mujhe phone de. Maanu. Kal teri chachi ki porani saheli aai thi. Tujhe yaad hai manjila.
Maanvi: Haan woh chachi ki sofisticated wali friend.
Beeji: Haan wohi. Ussi ne bataya hai uski koi dost hai chandigarh main rehti hai. Pardo ka karobar karte hain. Bare paise wale hain.
Maanvi: Magar beeji aap yeh sab mujhe kyun bata rahe ho.
Viraat was listening to her talk without her noticing his presence as her back was facing him.
Beeji: Kyunke uska beta tere liye humne pasand kia hai.Tere liye larka mil gaya
Maanvi: Larka.
Viraat heart sank listening maanvi talking about any boy.
Maanvi: Magar kis liye.
Beeji: Teri shadi ke liay.
Maanvi: Shaadi.
(Beeji rocks Maanvi shocks)

Life is a precious thing which is lived only once. So enjoy it to the fullest.
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