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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 3

As the sun light fell onto Aranv's face he picked up his pillow to cover his face. He rolled around lazily to find some comfort, but suddenly he heard a sweet voice in his ears. The voice was very distant.

Birds flying high you know how I feel
Sun in the sky you know how I feel
Breeze driftin' on by you know how I feel

Arnav walked over to the large window and rubbing his eyes he looked outside. He opened the window and stuck his head out and that is one he saw her. Dressed in a pink floral cotton dress, singing in her own world. Arnav stood there captivated by her voice mixed with the chirping of the bird. A pleasant site to behold early in the morning.

It's a new dawn
It's a new day
It's a new life
For me
And I'm feeling good

Arnav grabbed his shirt from the bed and threw it on and started towards the garden. He flew down the stairs, and opened the back door. He stood a little far behind a some shrubs that hindered her view. Unaware of his presence she continued her regime of watering the rose plants and singing as she went along


Fish in the sea you know how I feel
River running free you know how I feel
Blossom on the tree you know how I feel

However, Suddenly Arnav stepped onto a broken stick crushing with his feet and attaining Khushi's attention. She immediately stopped singing and looked at him a bit embarrassed.

"Why did you stop?" he asked disappointed

"emm" she replied shrugging her shoulders.

Arnav continued walking towards her.

"You have the most beautiful voice I have ever heard" he commented earnestly.

"Thanks" she replied instantly. "I guess its good enough for my garden"

"Are you kidding" Arnav said shocked by her modesty.

"Ok! Stop it now, and get ready for breakfast. Remember you have to go meet Dr. Anderson today?"

Arnav thought it best to not push any further and he walked back in the house still mesmerized by this girl.

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"Just look the other way this won't hurt a bit" remarked the nurse sensing the growing tension on Khushi's face.

"To think I would be use to this by now" she said looking at Arnav who was standing next to the bed.

He smiled at her attempt to pacify herself. Arnav went closed to her and as the needle pricked her skin she grabbed his arm, digging his nail into his skin.

"Sorry" she shrieked as soon as she realized. Arnav did not respond.

"All done Ms Gupta" the nurse replied, "The doctor will call you when both of your reports are in"

Both started towards the parking lot.

"So what is today's plan" asked Arnav to break the silence

"What plan?" Asked Khushi

"OH! Come one don't tell me you are not going to show me around, I bet there are other places apart form this hospital that are worth watching"

Khushi chuckled at his dramatic retort.

"How funny? OK! Fine we can go to the museum of natural history"

"Umm NO thanks I am not 12, tell me about the night life?" he asked raising his eyebrows.

"Ok! Well nine is bedtime." She replied intelligently to avoid the topic. But Arnav was not the one to give up easily.

"Don't tell me you have never been to a night club"

"Ok! I won't tell you!"

Arnav was shocked by her response. Arnav did not know life without indulgence; this girl was unlike anyone he had ever seen. She was so mysterious and desirable in her manners.

"Its decided you are taking me on a date"

"Date? Ok! You can take the car I will call myself the other driver." replied Khushi to make him happy.

Arnav was not giving in easy, this was his chance to woe her. He grabbed her by the arm and opened the car door for her and also sat inside.

"We are both going" he demanded and Khushi nodded her head resentfully.

It tastes horrible" remarked Khushi frowning upon the taste of alcohol in her mouth and she spat it right back out.

"Come on you are 22yrs old girl it's about time you act like one." replied Arnav sarcastically.

"You are horrible company, you know that right? Come Mom and dad must be getting worried"

Said Khushi pulling him towards the exit while they were both sober and in condition to reach home.

"OK! We will go home but on one condition!" he said pulling her back down on the seat.

"What?" she questioned

"So how long is your list of things you have never tried?" he questioned her.

Khushi was at first stunned at his audacity but then laughed it off.

"You are drunk we should be going home"

"No!" he said pulling her back that she fell on top of his lap. Her hair covering his face.

She looked into his eyes as if she was she searching for something and he enjoyed this attention.

However suddenly she was brought to her sense as Arnav got up and pulled her to the dance floor. He placed his hands on her waist and started swaying her fragile figure.

She smiled and went along, but suddenly felt a body bumping her from behind. She turned to see that it was a guy, passing her a dirty grin. She was disgusted.

"Arnav I want to go home" and she pulled herself away. She was about to head towards the door that, the same guy grabbed her arm.

"Leaving so soon, how about a dance"

That is when Arnav realized what was going on. H quickly leapt forth and grabbed the guy from the shoulder.

"Let her go!" he ordered biting his teeth

"Buzz of Romeo" he replied ad Khushi continued to struggle to free her hand.

"I SAID GET YOU FILTHY HANDS OFF HER" his voice loud enough to shake the entire club.

"Why don't you make me?"

Arnav looked at Khushi and his eyes traced the tear rolling down her cheek something in him clicked. He punched the guy hard in the face, with a force enough to break his skull. The guy fell on the floor.

Khushi covered her face and led out a gasp. But Arnav moved forward and grabbed her hand and led her out the club as the crowd stood on the side silently, watching this beast whose veins were rushing with adrenaline.

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Precap:

Arnav lay on his bed, unable to fall asleep, to get her longing yearning eyes out of his mind. He was lying to these people who thought of him as an angel. Lying to Khushi whose life depended on this. It was all running in his mind again. She was reminding him of her. Those eyes, her touch! She was diverting him from his goal. He was here for the money; he had lied for the five million dollars. He had planned this out all so well. He was not going to let anything ruin this. He looked at the picture in his hand. Burned on the edges, rough, worn out and torn in half. He ran his fingers across the picture and a tear rolled down his cheeks. He wiped it away and closed his eyes determined to not let anything get in his way

I have been super busy and sick. So was unable to update earlier. But Hershey has forced me to write LOL!😛 And I want to see some honest feedback before I post the next part.

Love
Belli
Edited by Carabelli5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update cant wait for next part continue soon and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res for reading!

Edited:

Sorry for the delayed response!

I saw you updated and wanted t be on the first page! So I danced and resed! 😆

Now for the update:

Wow!

So what's his story?

And what has he lied about? Surely not about him being a match!

And is she falling for him?

I like this khushi, alcohol does taste awful the first time! And poor her, being felt up by the disgusting guy! 😡

Thank you!
Edited by JerryTheMouse - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG, Belli that was fantabulous!!!
I love the way Arnav is trying to make Khushi act like her age.
She is 22 years old, but she has never really "partied" before?!
Aww...they r so cute when they r together!
But, Belli, I didn't really understand the ending.
Is the past of Arnav & Khushi going to unfold now??
And, whose picture was Arnav holding in the end?!
Ohh pleaj update soon Belli!
This update was too short!
But thanks for the PM!
Edited by Arshi2gthr4evr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is gifted with so many talents. She is a brilliant artist, plays piano so well and even can sing well also.I wish she doesn't die in such tender age. Plz Beli let her survive in this battle.
Arnav took Khushi to a night club. But she is not among the ordinary people. So obviously she didn't enjoy there. And her first experience has become bitter too. But she must feel good that Arnav really cares her.
Your precap is scary. Aranv lied so much for the money. But isn't he actually the donor? He is already feeling different for khushi. whose picture he was watching and crying.
plz update soon, can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice 😊
hope u get well soon❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, lovely update...
Loved Khuhsiii, full of talents and arnav , he is trying to make her live each and every moment...
Is he lying for the money???????????
and that picture, hope it will clear in the coming updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel so bad nowww 😭 I didn't know u were sick too!!
But I loved the chapter, Arnav protecting Khushi, attempting to show her what "life," really is, though I think that isn't really life LOL but I can see from Arnav's point of view it is!
I really hope he shows Khushi what life is and gives her a better feel of the things she hasn't tried like things in zindagi na milenge dobara type, 😛😆

why do I get a bad feeling that Arnav isn't Khushi's actual match and that he's fooling them that way, or that he doesn't have the intention of donating... Arnav you aren't only a playboy but a cheater too? 😭 poor Khushi is going to be heartbroken, and if she sees his playboy tactics that's really going to hurt her

they are both falling for each other 😳 so happy about that but worried about how Arnav is going to treat Khushi from now on, esp if he gives her a cold shoulder,

love LOVE LOVE how you're portraying Khushi!!!! can't wait for the next chapter, u have to update this frequently, that is after u get better!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14

I feel so bad nowww 😭 I didn't know u were sick too!!

But I loved the chapter, Arnav protecting Khushi, attempting to show her what "life," really is, though I think that isn't really life LOL but I can see from Arnav's point of view it is!
I really hope he shows Khushi what life is and gives her a better feel of the things she hasn't tried like things in zindagi na milenge dobara type, 😛😆

why do I get a bad feeling that Arnav isn't Khushi's actual match and that he's fooling them that way, or that he doesn't have the intention of donating... Arnav you aren't only a playboy but a cheater too? 😭 poor Khushi is going to be heartbroken, and if she sees his playboy tactics that's really going to hurt her

they are both falling for each other 😳 so happy about that but worried about how Arnav is going to treat Khushi from now on, esp if he gives her a cold shoulder,

love LOVE LOVE how you're portraying Khushi!!!! can't wait for the next chapter, u have to update this frequently, that is after u get better!

Harsuuu baby! yes that is what i am calling you! I am glad you liked it. No worries i love when someone is excited about my stories. promise to update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update aww khushi full of talents n arnav showing khushi wat life n it started out bad omg n he lying for money having a feeling he isnt her match n who picture does he have n wat is his goal loved the update

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