SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22)

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

such a beautiful and emotional update...u have showed the whereabouts and the emotional content of swayam so beautifully...eyes got filled with tears...the part where they get the note and everyone's name is mentioned except for swayam and swayam tries out to find the some info from the lines but fails...god it was heartwrencing...

the last part where he wants answer for only one question if not for all...did he ruined her life???? perfectly brought yaar...thats wat swayam keeps thinking...

i am not fond of reyam so much...but the part of reyam bonding moved me...to see swayam's world totally shattered and his wait for her till last date of graduation...beautifully brought ...waiting for nxt update...plzz do PM me

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing start
Its really good to read about reyam bonding
I was crying while reading this,swayam pain was beautifully described
Update it soon n pm me

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Hey Jiya...it was just awesome...the way you wrote about sharon leaving for delhi and the equation between them changed...it was fantastic...so touching...swayam's pain was evident...the letter part ...he could smell her in her letter ...awww...he waited till late on their graduation day ...just to meet her ...the part when he goes to the girl's locker room & tries to find out something...heart wrenching..his pain...his wait...loved Reyam friendship in beginning ..can't wait for next part ...plz update soon dear...loved ur style of writing 👏👏👏

P.S- Really loved the name..come & heal me ...goes with the concept ...AWESOME START 👍🏼

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago

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jiya

@act12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank you so much everyone for your awesome comments. Will reply to each one later 😳

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice start

do pm me

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

atleast somebody is writing something about sharon leaving to dehli

continue soon and pm me

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

eagerly waiting to read more...
do update soon and pm me!!

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Aw the part is after sharon going to delhi,Poor swayam🥺.

he waited for her thoughout their graduation day,😭

poor guy i wonder how he pulled on till now. Let me tell you yaar it

is a fab update, with all the swaron charm of swaron, the pain is lurking behind swayam when it is related to sharon. 💔 Yaar it is just amazing,

plz continue fast...It really pulled many chords in my heart👏 very well done...

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey Jiya awesome start and I really liked your title. You write quite beautifully by the way. When you mentioned that Engagement of Sharanjeet and Karan, I was like no ways, but it turned out to be something different. I'm quite surprised that Swayam didn't react like me, anyways my bad for thinking that😆 And the pain Swayam was undergoing for being away from Sharon, could feel it while reading. The flashback part had again an awesome start with Sharon tucking her lock behind her ears, well its calculus afterall, there had to be a winning smile on her face!

The letter part was the most amazing thing with Sharon indirectly asking about Swayam, it was so Sharon like!! But again the note🤔 loved your description there and also about the locker room part. You have explained the minuscule details with such an ease. I'm sure this is not your first piece of writing but yeah on SwaRon I guess yes.

Do continue and PM me please