An IPK FF: Love, Lies and Two Weddings? *Thread 1*

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wooow!!! 🥳 A story like that?? To bring ArHi together?? Nani and Shyam planned.. Im so waiting for the story to unfold.. This is gonna be amazing..

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nonasi

@nonasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

O.M.G.

You finally took the plunge! *hugs* Dair aayi par durust aayi...😊

I was ready to write 'Di-abolical,' when your curveball hit me. Nani hai sabse sayani (and completely off her rocker). Shyamio's a total pawn (and quite the lallu)! Admit it, you secretly lowe him, don't you? 😆

J, I feel like I'm suspending a lot of disbelief here, but for A-K pyaar, sab chalta hai. 😳 Glad he finally manned-up, took charge of the situation, and went for the kiss. But so many questions in mind, namely: how did he convince K for this??

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Rashu

@sanZ_Rash

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awww... wonderful story...👏👏

For a moment i thought it Anji n shyam convo..

I am glad it nani.

Otherwise it may be so stupid..

hmm..clever nani..and i guess anji dont has any about all these...

So they are not married ..

they also playing a game...

what next??

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sohara
Superb!
Great twist of the story.
Shyam is not a bad guy here.First i thought it was Anjali played with Shyam. But It was Nani who played the game to get Arnav married to Khushi!.
didn't Khushi really understand Arnav's "Farak partahe " attitude? Or she just pretended.
Khushi didn't accept it as a proper marriage. So obviously no SR. Damn! But at least they kissed.
Now what? Arnav will take khushi to the temple to marry her again with full rituals?
Waiting for the next chapter.

I think it's my fault for not being clear enough.

Arnav and Khushi never got married, they only acted as if they did.

More on that in the next update!

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kbtr
Loved it! Absolutely loved it!
The tables have turned. It is Kushi who is in control now! (Hope it stays that way! She always gets the short end of the stick - (in reel life, in the various OSs, SSs, FFs.)
I liked the way you used the monologue to show their feelings. I loved the "No. They were softer and sweeter..." Hayi, he's a goner!
What a great start to a beautiful OS! I just cannot wait for the next part. You know, this is already so much better than the actual sh*- we got!
Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next part.😃

I agree, Khushi is almost always sidelined.

But I have to caution you, my story is not aimed at making Khushi the sole focus. It is their love story, a love story of equals!