SS Secret ensnared in Night's Blanket..CH 17 UPD

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

superb writing

liked a lot dear

continue soon

waiting for more

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome update through the whole confrontation viraj still does not realize asr is arnav malick can't wait for his reaction and truthfully viraj is also responsible in the ruin of his own sister because he was a coward who did not stand up for the right and left anjali in the madcap one sister payed for the other unhappiness and one mistake cause a series of other mistakes arnav dad had an affair so arnav mom killed her self and viraj left anjali anjali married snake and arnav ruined sheetal and in arnav stopping the cycle by marriage with khushi and the fallout of snake so it started back with one man destroying two women lives hope asr and khushi together can put a stop to this cycle loved the update beautifully done awesome ladies khushi hesitation in saying sigh raizada was so sad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

That was amazing...loved it...just too good...thanks for the pm..

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Shariqa_here

@Shariqa_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Comment on Ch 1

Abeer my dear, I'm really sorry to comment late as I was away. Nevertheless I did read the first chapter before I headed out for my flight. It was an amazing start!

I was so excited that I could barely wait to read ahead.

Now that I'm back, I'm going to post my comments on each chapter individually.

The first chapter is very intriguing as it makes you want to read more. Its like a cliffhanger where no one knows what Arnav will do next after leaving Khushi standing there.

However, as I'm aware of the story and only here for experiencing the way you express it.. I must say it was bang on brilliant!👍🏼

I loved the way you expressed ASR's reaction and Khushi's plight:

''He gripped her tightly, and pulled her towards him, anger pumping through his vessels. 'How dare you go behind my back and do a DNA test? You should have come to me!!' he said menacingly in her face.

She couldn't believe it, he was angry at her. Her!!! When it was she who had the right to be angry; that he had hid this truth from her, and now that she had gone and gotten her answers he was angry."

That is ASR for you. He would be responsible for everything and yet look at you in the eye and speak as if you are at fault!😲

LOVED IT! You rock girl!👏

Edited by Shariqa_here - 12 years ago

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Shariqa_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: ACTywm

AWWW HUGS TO YOU TOO ANNIE🤗

ONE GROUP HUG BETWEEN US THREE!!! 😃

n aww really you liked the description n stuff, am so glad, i was confident that people would understand Khushi's perspective, but was unsure whether Arnav's reaction would make sense to them, n its good to know that his made more sense to you so YAY!!!! another hug your way 🤗

n hehehe...is he his son, is he not, who is sheetal n what is she doing, well you will have to wait n see...why you ask...well simply because me n shariqa haven't had the time to talk about it 😆

n yup i do get your point about him being a control freak n all, so i too believe that in the show it will turn out that he actually isn't n that sheetal has concoted the whole thing for her gain...but here in the ss you will just have to wait n find out...n about the 2nd point i too believe that if indeed Arnav has then he would never hide it from Khushi n that's why I even mentioned it as one of his thoughts, or i think i did anyway that he would never hide such a truth from khushi...the only reason he hasn't told her is because he himself didn't know that he had a son so yeah...😊

Ohooo a threesome hug! Wow I feel warm already. Love you both!

Yeah this is an intense concept so I thought my Sydney Sheldon part 2 i.e. my Abeer can do justice to it. And I wasn't wrong. She made a fabulous start! It is like Abeer has brought the scene in front of my eyes.

Yes Annie my dear...when I have another concept in mind, we can do it as a threesome.

I'll give you the adventurous, romantic and light side as I loved your sense of humour in the middle of an intense moment (Dadi as a goat remember?) No seriously since that is your strength when it comes to writing, we will give you what you are best at😃

As for Abeer, she has power over the serious dramatic scenes and makes it more intense. So we will let her have that ;😉

I think I'm more into analysis of thoughts, so will fit in where a swot analysis is required to come to the conclusion of the storyline. I more than often find people go with my flow of thoughts until I introduce something entirely different. So alhamdulillah that is my strength. I can go with that😳

Hence if we combine our strengths and come up with some good storyline, that will be a treat for all readers.

Anyway, that is that when we will come to it inshaAllah.

For now here's hugs and kisses for my Annie and Abeer🤗

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Shree Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

feeling bad for khushi

the poor soul is caught in all this

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Looking forward to the next part.

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

i just come across this ff..and its simply superb nice and interesting concept..u depicted arnav's and kushi's anguish very well...waiting to read other update